KHATAA..sheba

by Sheba on April 13, 2011, 05:47:31 AM
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                              nigaah se aaj meri pahchaan jaati rahi.,
                              dushman jise jaana pyaar usi se paati rahi.,

                              zulm itna kiya ki nadaamat bhi nahin kaafi,
                              muskuraaye jitna wo, use main sataati rahi,

                              diya zakhmo ka zakhira use raah -e wafaa mein,
                              sambhalta jitna wo,use main giraati rahi,
                              
                              nahin thaa aagosh kabhi mere wajood pe uska,
                              ruki jab-jab nigaah main kasmasaati rahi,

                              khud se nazar phir na milaa saki  sheba..!
                              sadaa bewafaai ki jab se dil mein  aati rahi.
                              
                              
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Matrix Guy
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«Reply #1 on: April 13, 2011, 05:54:54 AM »
ufffffffff...........

kya baat he sheba ji.........bas dil le gayi apki ye poetry ......

subhan allah.........behtareen lafj behtareen theme ..........it is mindblowing...........

few line from my side........

waqt bewaqt wo chehra yaad aata raha
har mod per jo muje hath chudata raha

ki lakh koshish wafa ko nibhane ki
per wo gairo ke liye muje bhulata raha

ise apna muqqadar samju ya kuch aur
wo tha sabkuch meri zindagi me saso ki tarah
lekin.........wo meri kimat kodiyo me lagata raha
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manjum
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«Reply #2 on: April 13, 2011, 09:38:10 AM »
bahut khub likha hai shebaji... bahut badiya....

 Applause Applause Applause

matrixji aapne bhi kamal kar diya... badiya

 Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #3 on: April 13, 2011, 09:51:05 AM »
Bahut Bahut Khoob Shebaji..

Humesha Ki Tarah lajawaab Peshkash!!!

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sbechain
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«Reply #4 on: April 13, 2011, 12:56:34 PM »
Quote from: Matrix Guy on April 13, 2011, 05:54:54 AM
ufffffffff...........

kya baat he sheba ji.........bas dil le gayi apki ye poetry ......

subhan allah.........behtareen lafj behtareen theme ..........it is mindblowing...........

few line from my side........

waqt bewaqt wo chehra yaad aata raha
har mod per jo muje hath chudata raha

ki lakh koshish wafa ko nibhane ki
per wo gairo ke liye muje bhulata raha

ise apna muqqadar samju ya kuch aur
wo tha sabkuch meri zindagi me saso ki tarah
lekin.........wo meri kimat kodiyo me lagata raha


shukria aur very nice reply dear matrix
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manzil-e-ishq
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«Reply #5 on: April 13, 2011, 02:02:55 PM »
bht bht khoob sheba ji...
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sbechain
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«Reply #6 on: April 14, 2011, 06:28:16 AM »
Quote from: manjum on April 13, 2011, 09:38:10 AM
bahut khub likha hai shebaji... bahut badiya....

 Applause Applause Applause

matrixji aapne bhi kamal kar diya... badiya

 Applause Applause Applause

thank you manjum ji
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SkykiTears
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«Reply #7 on: April 14, 2011, 06:44:19 AM »
Bohout Khoob SHEBA JI.. bohout acha peash ki hai aap ne.. Usual Smile MINDBLOWING..

-SKY-
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khamosh_aawaaz
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«Reply #8 on: April 19, 2011, 01:22:59 PM »
 Applause Applause Applause Applause
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Niha Khan
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«Reply #9 on: April 19, 2011, 01:33:35 PM »
Bohat Khoob Sheba Ji
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sbechain
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«Reply #10 on: April 21, 2011, 08:49:52 AM »
Quote from: Niha Khan on April 19, 2011, 01:33:35 PM
Bohat Khoob Sheba Ji

shukria niha khan
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SURESH SANGWAN
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«Reply #11 on: April 21, 2011, 01:28:17 PM »
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Alam Qazi
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«Reply #12 on: April 22, 2011, 09:27:54 AM »
Quote from: Sheba on April 13, 2011, 05:47:31 AM


                   
                              nigaah se aaj meri pahchaan jaati rahi.,
                              dushman jise jaana pyaar usi se paati rahi.,

                              zulm itna kiya ki nadaamat bhi nahin kaafi,
                              muskuraaye jitna wo, use main sataati rahi,

                              diya zakhmo ka zakhira use raah -e wafaa mein,
                              sambhalta jitna wo,use main giraati rahi,
                             
                              nahin thaa aagosh kabhi mere wajood pe uska,
                              ruki jab-jab nigaah main kasmasaati rahi,

                              khud se nazar phir na milaa saki  sheba..!
                              sadaa bewafaai ki jab se dil mein  aati rahi.
                             
                             


Zulm itna kiya, ki Nadaamat bhi nahi kaafi
Muskuraye jitna wo,Use mai sataati Rahi

Hmmm.... Kyun sheba jee...
Lekin itna pareshan karna acchi baat nahi...
khair.... Accha likha hai aapne... Applause Applause Applause
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paani
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«Reply #13 on: April 23, 2011, 06:41:26 AM »
Quote from: Matrix Guy on April 13, 2011, 05:54:54 AM
ufffffffff...........

kya baat he sheba ji.........bas dil le gayi apki ye poetry ......

subhan allah.........behtareen lafj behtareen theme ..........it is mindblowing...........

few line from my side........

waqt bewaqt wo chehra yaad aata raha
har mod per jo muje hath chudata raha

ki lakh koshish wafa ko nibhane ki
per wo gairo ke liye muje bhulata raha

ise apna muqqadar samju ya kuch aur
wo tha sabkuch meri zindagi me saso ki tarah
lekin.........wo meri kimat kodiyo me lagata raha


kamal likha hai.. janab
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shiba
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«Reply #14 on: April 24, 2011, 01:42:16 AM »
Bohat Badhiya Sheba Ji
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