Khatm Hua.......

by Aman_rahi on June 21, 2005, 07:30:33 AM
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Doston ek gazal is bazm ki nazar.....

is aangan se rishta humara khatm hua……
utho, khwaboon ka nazara khatm hua……

kab tak timtimata aakhir duniya ki khaatir……
vo bezaar chamakta sitara khatm hua…..

ghar laute hain bacche mayoos ho kar…..
samunder se mitti ka pushtaara khatm hua….

udh gaye hain paanchi gharunda chood…..
is jagah se  unka aab-o-chaara khatm hua….

Chal pade hain khanabadosh kahin door…..
Garmiyaan aayi hain, jaara khatm hua…..

dekho us oor ke koi laash uth rahi hai……
ek buzurg ka aakhiri sahara khatm hua……

keh do alvida doston se tum ^AMAN^……
ke ab beraahm zindagi ka ishara khatm hua……


aapka apna.....
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«Reply #1 on: June 21, 2005, 07:33:58 AM »
Quote from: "Aman_rahi"
Doston ek gazal is bazm ki nazar.....

is aangan se rishta humara khatm hua……
utho, khwaboon ka nazara khatm hua……

kab tak timtimata aakhir duniya ki khaatir……
vo bezaar chamakta sitara khatm hua…..

ghar laute hain bacche mayoos ho kar…..
samunder se mitti ka pushtaara khatm hua….

udh gaye hain paanchi gharunda chood…..
is jagah se  unka aab-o-chaara khatm hua….

Chal pade hain khanabadosh kahin door…..
Garmiyaan aayi hain, jaara khatm hua…..

dekho us oor ke koi laash uth rahi hai……
ek buzurg ka aakhiri sahara khatm hua……

keh do alvida doston se tum ^AMAN^……
ke ab beraahm zindagi ka ishara khatm hua……


aapka apna.....
wah,kya baat hai Aman ji,jitni tareef ki jaaye kam hai,dil khush kar diya Usual Smile .Likhte rahiyega.
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Meena
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«Reply #2 on: June 23, 2005, 02:58:43 PM »
wah aman ji, apki shayari to mujhe bohot  hi achi lagti hai... its rreally really gud!!! sorry reply dene me  thodi der hogayi...maine dekha nahin tha!!

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«Reply #3 on: June 23, 2005, 03:29:18 PM »
bahot  khoob aman..................wonderfull  likha aap ne..................tongue3
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