khauf-e-mohabbat......A.B

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                              kashmakash aisi ki kidhar jaaein hum..,
                              ho  tum  hi  tum  jidhar jaaein hum...,

                              tanhaai  bhi  hamein  jeene  nahin deti,
                              apni  khamoshiyo.n  se  dar  jaaein hum,

                              tum   mujhe   kabhi   samet    na   sako,
                              ho  kuch  aisa   ki  bikhar  jaaein  hum,

                              na  aane  dena   dosto.n  use  paas  mere,
                              hai   iltejah   ye  jab  mar  jaaein  hum,

                             hua khauf-e-mohabbat  ka asar aisa  bechain.!
                             abb to bahaar mein bhi sihar jaaein hum...!!
                            
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«Reply #1 on: March 11, 2012, 09:07:33 AM »
Beautiful !  kya  kahne  adil saheb.
Bahut khoobsurat kalaam pesh kiya hai.
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«Reply #2 on: March 11, 2012, 09:32:18 AM »
bohut bohut khoob adil ji waah
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«Reply #3 on: March 11, 2012, 10:33:45 AM »
Aadaab Bechain sahaab!

WaaH janaab kia kahne waaH gazab ke ahsasaat ko umda
lafz diye haiN janab... Usual Smile

Behad khoob aur umdaa ashaar rahe... sabhi ashaar
behad khoob rahe janab... humari dili daad o mubbarak
bad kabul kijiye... Usual Smile

itni umda kalaam pesh ki hai janab ki jee karta hai tareef ki
hadh se guzar jaye hum... tongue3
Par kia kareN system se nahi mobile se log haiN... Usual Smile

Likhte rahiye ... aate rahiye...
shaad o aabaad rahiye...
Khuda Hafez... Usual Smile
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«Reply #4 on: March 11, 2012, 11:29:26 AM »

waah...waah..Bechain Sahab...bahut khoob

dili mubaarakbaad kubool farmaayen.

Raqeeb
 
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«Reply #5 on: March 11, 2012, 02:57:22 PM »
Quote from: adil bechain on March 11, 2012, 09:01:50 AM


                              kashmakash aisi ki kidhar jaaein hum..,
                              ho  tum  hi  tum  jidhar jaaein hum...,

                              tanhaai  bhi  hamein  jeene  nahin deti,
                              apni  khamoshiyo.n  se  dar  jaaein hum,

                              tum   mujhe   kabhi   samet    na   sako,
                              ho  kuch  aisa   ki  bikhar  jaaein  hum,

                              na  aane  dena   dosto.n  use  paas  mere,
                              hai   iltejah   ye  jab  mar  jaaein  hum,  Applause Applause Applause Applause

                             hua khauf-e-mohabbat  ka asar aisa  bechain.!
                             abb to bahaar mein bhi sihar jaaein hum...!!  Applause Applause Applause Applause
                             
Baht khoob Adil bhai
Sabhi ashaar behad khoob hai par ve dono mujhe jyada acche lage.
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«Reply #6 on: March 12, 2012, 05:08:57 AM »
wobderful creation Adil saheb congts
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«Reply #7 on: March 12, 2012, 06:04:15 PM »
 Applause Applause :clap: Applause Applause lajawaab....!!!
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«Reply #8 on: March 13, 2012, 05:29:27 AM »
Quote from: F.H.SIDDIQUI on March 11, 2012, 09:07:33 AM
Beautiful !  kya  kahne  adil saheb.
Bahut khoobsurat kalaam pesh kiya hai.

shukria hasan sahab
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«Reply #9 on: March 13, 2012, 05:30:07 AM »
Quote from: saahill on March 11, 2012, 09:32:18 AM
bohut bohut khoob adil ji waah

thank you sahill ji
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«Reply #10 on: March 13, 2012, 09:56:30 AM »
Quote from: ParwaaZ on March 11, 2012, 10:33:45 AM
Aadaab Bechain sahaab!

WaaH janaab kia kahne waaH gazab ke ahsasaat ko umda
lafz diye haiN janab... Usual Smile

Behad khoob aur umdaa ashaar rahe... sabhi ashaar
behad khoob rahe janab... humari dili daad o mubbarak
bad kabul kijiye... Usual Smile

itni umda kalaam pesh ki hai janab ki jee karta hai tareef ki
hadh se guzar jaye hum... tongue3
Par kia kareN system se nahi mobile se log haiN... Usual Smile

Likhte rahiye ... aate rahiye...
shaad o aabaad rahiye...
Khuda Hafez... Usual Smile





shukria parwaaz sahab
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«Reply #11 on: March 13, 2012, 10:00:06 AM »
adil ji bahut khoob
first 2 lines are marvellous.
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Quote from: adil bechain on March 11, 2012, 09:01:50 AM


                              kashmakash aisi ki kidhar jaaein hum..,
                              ho  tum  hi  tum  jidhar jaaein hum...,

                              tanhaai  bhi  hamein  jeene  nahin deti,
                              apni  khamoshiyo.n  se  dar  jaaein hum,

                              tum   mujhe   kabhi   samet    na   sako,
                              ho  kuch  aisa   ki  bikhar  jaaein  hum,

                              na  aane  dena   dosto.n  use  paas  mere,
                              hai   iltejah   ye  jab  mar  jaaein  hum,

                             hua khauf-e-mohabbat  ka asar aisa  bechain.!
                             abb to bahaar mein bhi sihar jaaein hum...!!
                             
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«Reply #12 on: March 13, 2012, 10:21:29 AM »
waahhhhhhhhhh
very nice poetry Usataad ji
baht kashmaksh hai janaab Usual Smile
daad kubul karie

khus rahie
muskurate rahie
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«Reply #13 on: March 13, 2012, 11:46:32 AM »
Quote from: Satish Shukla on March 11, 2012, 11:29:26 AM
waah...waah..Bechain Sahab...bahut khoob

dili mubaarakbaad kubool farmaayen.

Raqeeb
 

thank you satish ji
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«Reply #14 on: March 31, 2012, 01:09:31 PM »
Quote from: mkv on March 11, 2012, 02:57:22 PM
Baht khoob Adil bhai
Sabhi ashaar behad khoob hai par ve dono mujhe jyada acche lage.


thanks mkv
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