khayal kar lena

by salil2002 on February 10, 2009, 09:05:46 AM
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mujhe mehfilon se koft hai ,hoon main tanaha-pasand
kissi shaam tanha ho jab toh mera khayal kar lena
main dil khol kar nahin rakhta kabhi gairon k beech main
tumhe sunni ho dil kii dhadkan toh mere geeton se baat kar lena

haan tumhe ranz hoga kii tumhara naam nahi meri nazm mein
jab dekh pao nazm-e-rooh toh apna deedar kar lena
chahat kiibaat karte ho chaadar-e-mehtaab k tale
jab kadakti dhoop ho toh mere saaye mein aa gujar karna

karte ho saazish kyun uska ghar jalane kii
uski khataon kii saza mein mere dil ko chaak kar dena
magar bata dena kii khatam huyi paas bani "SAAHIL" kii
koi doosra paasbaan talaash kar lena........

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Talat
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«Reply #1 on: February 10, 2009, 10:58:17 AM »
Bohot achcha likha hai Salil
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Asghr
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«Reply #2 on: February 10, 2009, 06:34:20 PM »
mujhe mehfilon se koft hai ,hoon main tanaha-pasand
kissi shaam tanha ho jab toh mera khayal kar lena
main dil khol kar nahin rakhta kabhi gairon k beech main
tumhe sunni ho dil kii dhadkan toh mere geeton se baat kar lena

haan tumhe ranz hoga kii tumhara naam nahi meri nazm mein
jab dekh pao nazm-e-rooh toh apna deedar kar lena
chahat kiibaat karte ho chaadar-e-mehtaab k tale
jab kadakti dhoop ho toh mere saaye mein aa gujar karna

karte ho saazish kyun uska ghar jalane kii
uski khataon kii saza mein mere dil ko chaak kar dena
magar bata dena kii khatam huyi paas bani "SAAHIL" kii
koi doosra paasbaan talaash kar lena........

lovely poetry Salil bhai.Asghr
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sajid_ghayel
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«Reply #3 on: February 11, 2009, 07:57:47 AM »
nice work salil.....
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abdulqadeer
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«Reply #4 on: February 11, 2009, 08:01:07 AM »
Bahoth qoob salil !!

Qadeer Toopchi
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salil2002
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«Reply #5 on: March 17, 2009, 12:02:02 PM »
Good Job Salil Miya Keep It Up....
Bohot achcha likha hai Salil
lovely poetry Salil bhai.Asghr
nice work salil.....
Bahoth qoob salil !!

Qadeer Toopchi
shukriya talat ,sajid bhai, abdul bhai, sihab bhai, asghr bhai
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«Reply #6 on: March 17, 2009, 12:51:37 PM »
mujhe mehfilon se koft hai ,hoon main tanaha-pasand
kissi shaam tanha ho jab toh mera khayal kar lena
main dil khol kar nahin rakhta kabhi gairon k beech main
tumhe sunni ho dil kii dhadkan toh mere geeton se baat kar lena

haan tumhe ranz hoga kii tumhara naam nahi meri nazm mein
jab dekh pao nazm-e-rooh toh apna deedar kar lena
chahat kiibaat karte ho chaadar-e-mehtaab k tale
jab kadakti dhoop ho toh mere saaye mein aa gujar karna

karte ho saazish kyun uska ghar jalane kii
uski khataon kii saza mein mere dil ko chaak kar dena
magar bata dena kii khatam huyi paas bani "SAAHIL" kii
koi doosra paasbaan talaash kar lena........


Bahoot khoob salil ji Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #7 on: March 17, 2009, 02:39:28 PM »
bahoot pyara kalaaam hai salil..bahoot khoob
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«Reply #8 on: March 17, 2009, 03:40:45 PM »
mujhe mehfilon se koft hai ,hoon main tanaha-pasand
kissi shaam tanha ho jab toh mera khayal kar lena
main dil khol kar nahin rakhta kabhi gairon k beech main
tumhe sunni ho dil kii dhadkan toh mere geeton se baat kar lena

haan tumhe ranz hoga kii tumhara naam nahi meri nazm mein
jab dekh pao nazm-e-rooh toh apna deedar kar lena
chahat kiibaat karte ho chaadar-e-mehtaab k tale
jab kadakti dhoop ho toh mere saaye mein aa gujar karna

karte ho saazish kyun uska ghar jalane kii
uski khataon kii saza mein mere dil ko chaak kar dena
magar bata dena kii khatam huyi paas bani "SAAHIL" kii
koi doosra paasbaan talaash kar lena........


Bahut khoob Salil ji...
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«Reply #9 on: March 17, 2009, 06:15:39 PM »
Bahut Khoob Salil.. Applause Applause
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«Reply #10 on: August 01, 2009, 06:37:06 AM »
Bahoot khoob salil ji Applause Applause Applause
bahoot pyara kalaaam hai salil..bahoot khoob
bahut bahut shukriya sanjeev bhai and salma dear
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«Reply #11 on: August 01, 2009, 06:39:04 AM »
Bahut khoob Salil ji...
Bahut Khoob Salil.. Applause Applause
roja dear and khwahish bhai thanks a lot
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