khilauna....sheba

by Sheba on October 03, 2011, 11:09:34 AM
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«Reply #15 on: November 11, 2011, 01:02:16 PM »
Quote from: Sadiq Rizvi on October 09, 2011, 02:15:36 PM
VERY GOOD

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«Reply #16 on: November 11, 2011, 01:11:20 PM »
boht khoob
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«Reply #17 on: November 11, 2011, 03:48:00 PM »
Fikr achchi hai but try to right in meter

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«Reply #18 on: November 11, 2011, 04:06:02 PM »
Quote from: Sheba on October 03, 2011, 11:09:34 AM


                        phir ek khilauna tootaa mujhse..,
                        saath bachpan ka chootaa mujhse..,

                        bankar mera humsafar wo aaj,
                        meri hasrato.n ko lootaa mujhse, Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

                        kar naa saki pyaar taqseem baraabar,
                        har rishta mera roothaa mujhse, Applause

                        aanso.n se zayadaa nazar daulat pe thi,
                        kiyaa waadaa sabne jhootaa mujhse,
 Applause Applause
                        taakhir itni hui milne mein sheba...!
                        etmaad ka gharaa phootaa mujse.


           taakhir= delay.
           taqseem= distribute
           etmaad=  believe
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«Reply #19 on: November 30, 2011, 09:54:41 AM »
Quote from: SURESH SANGWAN on November 11, 2011, 04:06:02 PM


thank you
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«Reply #20 on: December 10, 2011, 12:46:38 PM »
Quote from: saahill on November 11, 2011, 01:11:20 PM
boht khoob


thank you
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«Reply #21 on: June 16, 2014, 03:39:43 AM »
Quote from: usha rajesh on October 09, 2011, 01:19:38 PM

Sheba ji,
Beauuuuuuuu...tiful! Applause Applause Applause Applause

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«Reply #22 on: June 16, 2014, 03:42:49 AM »
Waah kya baaaaaaaaaaaaaaat hai,Bahut Umda.
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«Reply #23 on: August 12, 2014, 08:54:17 PM »
Quote from: Advo.RavinderaRavi on June 16, 2014, 03:42:49 AM
Waah kya baaaaaaaaaaaaaaat hai,Bahut Umda.


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