~Kho dia khudko tujhe dhundte dhundte~ by Rahim:Shayri-E-Dard

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Log kahenge Rahim sirf dard pe likta hai..Hmm Rahim toh sirf woh likta hai jo dil likh wata hai..

Tera intezar kitna hai; tujhe bataun kaise,
Kya hai tu mere liye; tujhe samjhaun kaise..

Muskurahat dekh log samajte hai khush hoon main,
Tere bin kitna toot gaya hoon; yeh dikhaun kaise..

Tu izhar-e-mohobat karti hai; mohobat nahin,
Mager auron ki tarha main tujhe bewaffa bulaun kaise..

‘Khamosh’ kamzor nahin hai; be-bas hai mohobat main teri,
Tune mujko sahi mager main tujhe bhulaun kaise..

Khushian dene ka vaada kar ashkon ka sailab degayi,
Inn ansuon ko apne dil ko main pilaun kaise..

‘Khamosh’ dafan hogaya tujpe mar mitne kay baad,
Kho dia apne apko tujhe dhundte dhundte,
Ab tu hi bata de ae Zalim,
Apne labon par pehle wali woh muskurahat main laun kaise..

~Rahim~


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Re: ~Kho dia khudko tujhe dhundte dhundte~ by Rahim

«Reply #1 on: August 26, 2010, 04:22:20 AM »

hayeeeeeeee..........
last stanza to mashaa allaahhhh bht hi pyara haiiiiii.....

Rahim...bht hi khubsurat andaaz aur lafzon me tumne apna dard pesh kiya hai...
aur ye dard hi hai jiski pida hume likhne pe majbur kard eti hai...
bht pyara likha hai bhai...
ynhi apne dard ko apni lekhni me utaarte rehna aur man ko halka karte rehna....


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Re: ~Kho dia khudko tujhe dhundte dhundte~ by Rahim

«Reply #2 on: August 26, 2010, 04:23:27 AM »

WAH KYA BAAT HAI RAHIM JI.....

TUM MERE LIYE KYA HAI YEH BATAUN KAISE
BIN TERE MAR JAAUNGA YE SAMJHAUN KAISE....


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Re: ~Kho dia khudko tujhe dhundte dhundte~ by Rahim

«Reply #3 on: August 26, 2010, 04:25:04 AM »

Bahaut bahaut shukriya Anamika di..! bahaut sahi kaha kay dard hi likha tha..haan dil halka hojata hai.!


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Re: ~Kho dia khudko tujhe dhundte dhundte~ by Rahim

«Reply #4 on: August 26, 2010, 04:25:49 AM »

Cara jee shukriya..!
Bahaut achi do lines apki taraf se bhi..! Applause


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Re: ~Kho dia khudko tujhe dhundte dhundte~ by Rahim

«Reply #5 on: August 26, 2010, 04:27:26 AM »

Bahut khoobsurat lekh hai aap ki Rahim Ji


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Re: ~Kho dia khudko tujhe dhundte dhundte~ by Rahim

«Reply #6 on: August 26, 2010, 04:28:02 AM »

Shukriya Rajesh jee..! Teh dil se shukriya.!


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Re: ~Kho dia khudko tujhe dhundte dhundte~ by Rahim

«Reply #7 on: August 26, 2010, 05:48:12 AM »

bahut khoob Rahim bhai... bahut bahut khoob...!!!


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Re: ~Kho dia khudko tujhe dhundte dhundte~ by Rahim

«Reply #8 on: August 26, 2010, 06:43:31 PM »

Shukriya Kapil Dost..!


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Re: ~Kho dia khudko tujhe dhundte dhundte~ by Rahim

«Reply #9 on: August 26, 2010, 06:58:35 PM »

Raheem Sahab Aadaab!

Ek behad achchi aur umdaa koshish per dil se daad o mubarak bad......

Likhate rahiye....
Khush rahiye.....
Khuda Hafez.......


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Re: ~Kho dia khudko tujhe dhundte dhundte~ by Rahim

«Reply #10 on: August 26, 2010, 07:07:08 PM »

Shukriya Parwaaz jee.!


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Re: ~Kho dia khudko tujhe dhundte dhundte~ by Rahim

«Reply #11 on: August 28, 2010, 07:48:14 PM »

bahut khoob Rahim ji kamaal ka likha hai .

kisi ke bina toot mat jana.
toot jao to bikhar mat jana.
bikhar jao to kisi paon mein na chubhna.

Quote from: -Rahim- on August 26, 2010, 04:14:55 AM

Log kahenge Rahim sirf dard pe likta hai..Hmm Rahim toh sirf woh likta hai jo dil likh wata hai..

~Rahim~


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Re: ~Kho dia khudko tujhe dhundte dhundte~ by Rahim

«Reply #12 on: August 28, 2010, 09:11:56 PM »

Shukriya Suresh jee!


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