~~~Khona nahi tha...~~~

by vitasta on October 05, 2009, 07:18:28 AM
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arre yeh hua kya, yeh to hona nahi tha
aye dil, kya hua, tujhe to khona nahi tha?

sapne dikha na mujhe aise, aye khuda
mujhe kismat pe apni to rona nahi tha...

nazrein milti hain to kuch uthti hai lehar
mujhe wazn-e-ishq to dhhona nahi tha...

chahun rehna bechain subah-o-shaam ab
ye mann kabhi aisa to khilona nahi tha...

jashn-o-junoon mein doobi si laage duniya
'Viti,' khwaishon ka beej to bona nahi tha...

khwaab hai zulf-e-'Noor' suljhane ka bas
usko khud mein is kadar to pirona nahi tha...

arre yeh hua kya, yeh to hona nahi tha
aye dil, kya hua, tujhe to khona nahi tha?
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«Reply #1 on: October 05, 2009, 08:28:36 AM »
Bahut Khoob vitasta Ji. Applause
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Rishi Agarwal
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«Reply #2 on: October 05, 2009, 05:07:39 PM »
Nice bahut khoob vitasta ji excellent Applause Applause Applause
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vitasta
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«Reply #3 on: October 06, 2009, 04:04:49 AM »
shukriya sammual ji aur rishi ji Usual Smile
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«Reply #4 on: October 06, 2009, 04:06:58 AM »
bahut bahut Khoob Vitasta Ji..

bahut Ache.. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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vitasta
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«Reply #5 on: October 06, 2009, 05:02:10 AM »
shukriya khwaish ji Usual Smile
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«Reply #6 on: October 06, 2009, 05:58:19 AM »
Wah bahut khoob Visasta ji very touching n beautiful creation excellent icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #7 on: October 06, 2009, 06:00:49 AM »
bahut bahut shukriya madhuwesh ji Usual Smile
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«Reply #8 on: October 07, 2009, 12:30:52 PM »
kya baat hai Vitista.. bahut hi Lajawab ehasaason Ko kaagaz Par Utaara hai aapne.. Bahut hi khoob.. Applause Applause


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«Reply #9 on: October 07, 2009, 12:40:57 PM »

bahut hi badhiya likha hai apne..but vitista ji ye dil bahut natkhat hota hai laakh manna karne pe bhi kho hi jata hai.....
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