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apni zindagi ka sach wo chipa gye humse khuch iss tarah
Unke har sach par parda hum bhi daal gaye khuch iss tarah
Yu toh sirf chand lafj hi the kehne ko
Unn lafjon ko bhi wo badal kar keh gaye khuch iss tarah
Unki har jhuti baat par bhi karte hai hum vishwaas
Na karege unke sach ko kabul,hamein samajh gaye wo khuch iss tarah
Aaj bhi rakhte hai wo haq mohabaat ka humse,kehte hai wo
Sach na kiya zaahir,alvida keh gaye khuch iss tarah
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«Reply #1 on: February 27, 2010, 05:53:06 PM » |
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«Reply #2 on: February 27, 2010, 07:46:32 PM » |
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«Reply #3 on: February 27, 2010, 07:53:56 PM » |
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Nice one dear..
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«Reply #5 on: February 28, 2010, 04:18:39 AM » |
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Bahoot Bahoot Khoob Pooja !
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«Reply #6 on: February 28, 2010, 05:51:42 AM » |
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Bahut achhi poem likhi hai Nikhar ji. Is poem se mutassir ho kar kuchh likhne ka man hua aur kuch yun likha:
Nadaan hum the kaise ke sab kuchh bata diya
Har baat jabki apni wo humse chhupa gaye
Phir jaane kya hua ke achaanak hue vidaa
Yadon ka ek chiraagh sa dil mein jala gaye
(riyaz)
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«Reply #7 on: February 28, 2010, 05:59:19 AM » |
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Bahoot Bahoot Khoob Riyaz ji !
Kuch Iss Tarah Usne Hamse Ki Mohabbat
Ke Jaate Jaate Mere Seene Mea Dard De Gaye
Guzaar Di Zindgai Jiski Chahat Mea Hamne
Woh HumDUm Mere Mujhe Naam Bewafaa De Gaye !!
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«Reply #8 on: February 28, 2010, 06:20:19 AM » |
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«Reply #9 on: February 28, 2010, 09:27:44 AM » |
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WAH KYA BAAT HAI NIKHAR JI...
KUCH IS TARAH WO HAME BADNAM KAR GAYE
BINA SABOOT KE WO HAME SAZA DE GAYE
KUCH IS TARAH APNE DIL SE HAME NIKAAL GAYE
BINA KUCH KAHE BEECH RAHA MEIN CHOD KAR GAYE..
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«Reply #10 on: February 28, 2010, 09:39:40 AM » |
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Bahut Bahut Khoob Pooja.. 
Humesha Ki Tarah bahut Acha Likha Hai Aapne.. 
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«Reply #11 on: February 28, 2010, 09:45:11 AM » |
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«Reply #12 on: February 28, 2010, 10:04:34 AM » |
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KHWAISH JI...... DEKHIYEGA AB MODIFY KIYA HUN..... WAH KYA BAAT HAI NIKHAR JI...
KUCH IS TARAH WO HAME BADNAM KAR GAYE
BINA SABOOT KE WO HAME SAZA DE GAYE
KUCH IS TARAH APNE DIL SE HAME NIKAAL GAYE
BINA KUCH KAHE BEECH RAHA MEIN CHOD KAR GAYE..
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«Reply #13 on: March 01, 2010, 03:55:37 PM » |
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great pleasure .... jab mai ye post kar rahi thi toh khuch asamanjas mein thi k shayad khuch sahi se nahi likh paayi hu.....par aap sabko pasand aaya..... sach mein bahut bahut khushi hui.....aap sabka teh dil se shukriya..... Khamosh aawaz ji Madhu di Celmira ji Mann ji Sophi ji Riyaz ji Khwaish ji Cara ji Sarvesh ji........Thanx to all.......  |
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«Reply #14 on: March 01, 2010, 03:57:39 PM » |
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KHWAISH JI......
DEKHIYEGA AB MODIFY KIYA HUN.....
Ji cara ji....ab accha likha |
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