Khuch Iss Tarah.........

by Nikhaar on February 27, 2010, 05:07:52 PM
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«Reply #15 on: March 01, 2010, 04:10:21 PM »
Bahut achhi poem likhi hai Nikhar ji. Is poem se mutassir ho kar kuchh likhne ka man hua aur kuch yun likha:

Nadaan hum the kaise ke sab kuchh bata diya
Har baat jabki apni wo humse chhupa gaye
Phir jaane kya hua ke achaanak hue vidaa
Yadon ka ek chiraagh sa dil mein jala gaye
(riyaz)

bahut khoob likha riyaz ji......aapke achaanak lafj se do lines yaad aa agyi....

Achanak aaye wo zindagi mein,acchanak hi khushiyan mil gayi
Achanak hi phir har khushi mitti mein mil gayi
Bade najo se sajaya tha pyar ka aashiya,
Aur achanak hi aayi aisi aandhi k pyar ki duniya hi ujad gayi

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«Reply #16 on: March 01, 2010, 04:12:57 PM »
Bahoot Bahoot Khoob Riyaz ji !

Kuch Iss Tarah Usne Hamse Ki Mohabbat
Ke Jaate Jaate Mere Seene Mea Dard De Gaye

Guzaar Di Zindgai Jiski Chahat Mea Hamne
Woh HumDUm Mere Mujhe Naam Bewafaa De Gaye !!


Divya

Bahut hi khoob sophi ji
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