khud ke sath he jeevan beetaya jaaye

by Pooja on December 31, 2009, 01:11:26 AM
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Hanste hue ansuo ko ajj phir se sajaya jaaye
Bata Pooja kaya kaya kah kar ajj phir se tujhe rulaya jaaye
Palko per sajne se pahle jo khawab gaye toot
Ya phir
Ateet ke zakhmo se, khud ka dil dukhaya jaaye.....

Hanste hue ansuo ko ajj phir se ankho mai sajaya jaaye
Soch rahi hu kaya kaya kah kar khud ko ajj phir se rulaya jaaye

Pathar hai ankhein, per yah dil pathar hota nahi
Koi samjhaye, kaise dil ke armaano ko kahi dafnaya jaaye
Yakin kar jaata hai, shayad ho koi sukh is ke bhi naseeb main
Shayad ke yakin per.. kitani baar dil ko dukhaya jaaye…

 Hanste hue ansuo ko ajj phir se ankho mai sajaya jaaye
Kar ke her dar-o-deewar band,
dunia se door kahin..
khud mai bas khud ke sath he jeevan beetaya jaaye
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thinkhattk
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«Reply #1 on: December 31, 2009, 04:08:04 AM »
very nice pooja ji.. Thumbs UP
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KOYAL46
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«Reply #2 on: December 31, 2009, 06:00:45 AM »
Dard ko b-khoobi bayaan kiya hai aapne...Pooja-di... Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Khud mai mast bas khud ke sath he jeevan beetaya jaaye
Tou kya sanyaas le ke Himalaya MAI AB CHALA JAAYA JAAYE

Ateet ke zakhmo se,khud ka dil dukhaya jaaye.....
Jo beet gaya oose kyu kured,zakhmo ko naasur banaya jaaye

Manna jeevan mai dard hai bahoot,baant-ta nahi koi bhee
Chhupa es sach ko kyu,duniya ko muskuraata chera dikhaya jaaye




What to say.. I am back in this section...

Hanste hue ansuo ko ajj phir se sajaya jaaye
Bata Pooja kaya kaya kah kar ajj phir se tujhe rulaya jaaye
Palko per sajne se pahle jo khawab gaye toot
Ya phir
Ateet ke zakhmo se, khud ka dil dukhaya jaaye.....

Hanste hue ansuo ko ajj phir se ankho mai sajaya jaaye
Soch rahi hu kaya kaya kah kar khud ko ajj phir se rulaya jaaye

Pathar hai ankhein, per yah dil pathar hota nahi
Koi samjhaye, kaise dil ke armaano ko kahi dafnaya jaaye
Yakin kar jaata hai, shayad ho koi sukh is ke bhi naseeb main
Shayad ke yakin per.. kitani baar dil ko dukhaya jaaye…

 Hanste hue ansuo ko ajj phir se ankho mai sajaya jaaye
Kar ke her dar-o-deewar band,
dunia se door kahin..
khud mai bas khud ke sath he jeevan beetaya jaaye

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samir_bc
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«Reply #3 on: December 31, 2009, 06:35:15 AM »
What to say.. I am back in this section...

Hanste hue ansuo ko ajj phir se sajaya jaaye
Bata Pooja kaya kaya kah kar ajj phir se tujhe rulaya jaaye
Palko per sajne se pahle jo khawab gaye toot
Ya phir
Ateet ke zakhmo se, khud ka dil dukhaya jaaye.....

Hanste hue ansuo ko ajj phir se ankho mai sajaya jaaye
Soch rahi hu kaya kaya kah kar khud ko ajj phir se rulaya jaaye

Pathar hai ankhein, per yah dil pathar hota nahi
Koi samjhaye, kaise dil ke armaano ko kahi dafnaya jaaye
Yakin kar jaata hai, shayad ho koi sukh is ke bhi naseeb main
Shayad ke yakin per.. kitani baar dil ko dukhaya jaaye…

 Hanste hue ansuo ko ajj phir se ankho mai sajaya jaaye
Kar ke her dar-o-deewar band,
dunia se door kahin..
khud mai bas khud ke sath he jeevan beetaya jaaye


nice creation pooja ji.... bahot din baad apko padne ka moka mila.



khud soch ke bethe ho dil apna dukhana hai
khud kaanto pe chalna hai khud ko rulana hai

zakhmo ko hara rakh kar kiya jatana chahti ho
khud chun rhi ho dard per sabko sunana hai

khushiyan mile to tumse bardasht nahi hota
hanste hue bhi ansuon ko apne sajana hai


band karke dar-0-deewar jana hai bahot dur
per raasta us dar ka sabko batana hai




samir"dilse"
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Rajesh Harish
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«Reply #4 on: January 01, 2010, 03:09:14 AM »
What to say.. I am back in this section...

Hanste hue ansuo ko ajj phir se sajaya jaaye
Bata Pooja kaya kaya kah kar ajj phir se tujhe rulaya jaaye
Palko per sajne se pahle jo khawab gaye toot
Ya phir
Ateet ke zakhmo se, khud ka dil dukhaya jaaye.....

Hanste hue ansuo ko ajj phir se ankho mai sajaya jaaye
Soch rahi hu kaya kaya kah kar khud ko ajj phir se rulaya jaaye

Pathar hai ankhein, per yah dil pathar hota nahi
Koi samjhaye, kaise dil ke armaano ko kahi dafnaya jaaye
Yakin kar jaata hai, shayad ho koi sukh is ke bhi naseeb main
Shayad ke yakin per.. kitani baar dil ko dukhaya jaaye…

 Hanste hue ansuo ko ajj phir se ankho mai sajaya jaaye
Kar ke her dar-o-deewar band,
dunia se door kahin..
khud mai bas khud ke sath he jeevan beetaya jaaye


Bhaut khoob Pooja Ji
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Rajesh Harish
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«Reply #5 on: January 01, 2010, 03:11:03 AM »
Dard ko b-khoobi bayaan kiya hai aapne...Pooja-di... Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Khud mai mast bas khud ke sath he jeevan beetaya jaaye
Tou kya sanyaas le ke Himalaya MAI AB CHALA JAAYA JAAYE

Ateet ke zakhmo se,khud ka dil dukhaya jaaye.....
Jo beet gaya oose kyu kured,zakhmo ko naasur banaya jaaye

Manna jeevan mai dard hai bahoot,baant-ta nahi koi bhee
Chhupa es sach ko kyu,duniya ko muskuraata chera dikhaya jaaye


Nice response Koyal Ji

nice creation pooja ji.... bahot din baad apko padne ka moka mila.



khud soch ke bethe ho dil apna dukhana hai
khud kaanto pe chalna hai khud ko rulana hai

zakhmo ko hara rakh kar kiya jatana chahti ho
khud chun rhi ho dard per sabko sunana hai

khushiyan mile to tumse bardasht nahi hota
hanste hue bhi ansuon ko apne sajana hai


band karke dar-0-deewar jana hai bahot dur
per raasta us dar ka sabko batana hai

samir"dilse"

Very good one Samir Ji
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samir_bc
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«Reply #6 on: January 01, 2010, 06:41:22 AM »
Dard ko b-khoobi bayaan kiya hai aapne...Pooja-di... Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Khud mai mast bas khud ke sath he jeevan beetaya jaaye
Tou kya sanyaas le ke Himalaya MAI AB CHALA JAAYA JAAYE

Ateet ke zakhmo se,khud ka dil dukhaya jaaye.....
Jo beet gaya oose kyu kured,zakhmo ko naasur banaya jaaye

Manna jeevan mai dard hai bahoot,baant-ta nahi koi bhee
Chhupa es sach ko kyu,duniya ko muskuraata chera dikhaya jaaye





nice reply koyal ji.....
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samir_bc
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«Reply #7 on: January 01, 2010, 06:42:32 AM »
bahot bahot shukriya rajesh harish ji......
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riyaz106
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«Reply #8 on: January 01, 2010, 06:45:00 AM »
Wah wah Pooja Ji bahut khoob poem likhi hai. Ek sher arz hai

Muhabbaton Ne Kaisa Kamaal  Kar Dala
Humain To Udasyon Ki Misaal Kar Dala
(NM)
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samir_bc
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«Reply #9 on: January 01, 2010, 06:53:24 AM »
nice sharing riyaz ji..
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madhuwesh
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«Reply #10 on: January 01, 2010, 07:15:29 AM »
Mindblowing creation Pooja ji.great lines by Samir ji and Koyal ji.beautiful sharing Riyaz ji. icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause Applause
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KOYAL46
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«Reply #11 on: January 01, 2010, 08:29:10 AM »
Achha likha hai Samirji.... Applause Applause


nice creation pooja ji.... bahot din baad apko padne ka moka mila.



khud soch ke bethe ho dil apna dukhana hai
khud kaanto pe chalna hai khud ko rulana hai

zakhmo ko hara rakh kar kiya jatana chahti ho
khud chun rhi ho dard per sabko sunana hai

khushiyan mile to tumse bardasht nahi hota
hanste hue bhi ansuon ko apne sajana hai


band karke dar-0-deewar jana hai bahot dur
per raasta us dar ka sabko batana hai




samir"dilse"
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KOYAL46
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«Reply #12 on: January 01, 2010, 08:31:17 AM »
Thanks Rajeshji....


Nice response Koyal Ji

Very good one Samir Ji
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KOYAL46
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«Reply #13 on: January 01, 2010, 08:32:07 AM »
Thanks Samir-bhai....

nice reply koyal ji.....
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KOYAL46
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«Reply #14 on: January 01, 2010, 08:33:21 AM »
Thanks Madhu-di....................

Mindblowing creation Pooja ji.great lines by Samir ji and Koyal ji.beautiful sharing Riyaz ji. icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause Applause
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