- Khud Ko Tanha Pate Hai -

by Meena is back on September 24, 2006, 10:33:17 AM
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bohot dino ke baad ayi hoon aur phirse ek koshish apni pesh karna chahati hoon:


Manzile pa kar bhi ankhon me ashk hum basate hai,
Kyu sab kuch pas hote hue bhi khud ko tanha pate hai,

Zakhmo ka dard itna gehra nahin jitna ke hai tanhai ka saath,
Nazar nahin ate joh ,who tanhai ke sholey hume jalate hai,

Har waqt, har pal, har lamha is aag ne gehra hai hume par,
Chehre pe muskan ke moti uska nam-o-nishan mitate hai,

Par aisa nahin hai ke gumsum sa jeeti hai “Meena” yaha,
Sun sakhe koi to Kamoshi ke lafz humari kahani sunate hai!
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Just_Hate_Love
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«Reply #1 on: September 24, 2006, 10:39:48 AM »
Its really fantastic Meena ...
Really very good one ...
Keep it up ...
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Tosha
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«Reply #2 on: September 24, 2006, 10:39:58 AM »
bahut hi accha likha hai ... Ji aate raha karo!!
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nikki
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«Reply #3 on: September 24, 2006, 10:43:54 AM »
hello sis! long time no c..kahan gayab ho gayi thi aap?
Bahut hi pyara likha hai aapne.....as always

saath dene ka vaad karke jo gaye hain
dekhein kabhi laut kar bhi aate hain

yaadon mein to roz milte hain humse
dekhte hain kabhi haqiqat mein bhi saamne aate hain

aye hawa kabhi unke paas se guzarna to unse kehna
kuch aise bhi unke diwane hain...
jo unhein yaad karke aanson bahate hain

woh nahi hain jab se paas hamare
hum khud ko tanha paate hain
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waheed_rose2004
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«Reply #4 on: September 24, 2006, 10:45:01 AM »
awesome  Meena.........

labon pe  khair  tabassum  bikhar  bikhar hi gaya
yeh aur baat hai ki  hansne ko  dil  tarsta tha......
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Tosha
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«Reply #5 on: September 24, 2006, 10:45:05 AM »
madam ji aap kaha gayeb thi ... Puzzled !

bahut khoob arz kiya hai aap ne bhi!!
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Just_Hate_Love
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«Reply #6 on: September 24, 2006, 10:45:49 AM »
Dil sha-e-tanhaaiyo mein jala nahi hota,
Tu agar mujhse zindagi mein mila nahi hota,
Dushmano se meri maut ka sauda tune kiya,
Tu khud mita deta to gila nahi hota ...
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nikki
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«Reply #7 on: September 24, 2006, 10:47:20 AM »
thank u Tosha sis...i dont feel like writing anymore..u know why...koi bhi puarana friend abb nahi likhta....sab ke sab gayab...aap bhi bahut kum aati hain....Huh??
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Meena is back
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«Reply #8 on: September 24, 2006, 10:47:55 AM »
jhl... shukriya jhl...  :D

toshu...thank u kuddiye, ati raha karongi if u say so :D
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nikki
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«Reply #9 on: September 24, 2006, 10:49:15 AM »
superbbbb Jhl....too good
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Just_Hate_Love
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«Reply #10 on: September 24, 2006, 10:51:37 AM »
Thanks a lot Meena and Nikki for appreciation ...
And nikki you too have written cool one ...
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Meena is back
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«Reply #11 on: September 24, 2006, 10:52:54 AM »
Quote from: "nikki"
hello sis! long time no c..kahan gayab ho gayi thi aap?
Bahut hi pyara likha hai aapne.....as always

saath dene ka vaad karke jo gaye hain
dekhein kabhi laut kar bhi aate hain

yaadon mein to roz milte hain humse
dekhte hain kabhi haqiqat mein bhi saamne aate hain

aye hawa kabhi unke paas se guzarna to unse kehna
kuch aise bhi unke diwane hain...
jo unhein yaad karke aanson bahate hain

woh nahi hain jab se paas hamare
hum khud ko tanha paate hain


hey nikki kuddiye, arreyaar me was busy, its really nice to c here also, bohot acha likha tumne, aur sab fine hain ?


humne bhi kabhi intezar me pal guzare hai,
door hokar bhi woh kitne pas humare hai,
har rang me unhi ka rang naazar ata hai hume,
din me woh phool to raat ko woh sitare hai!
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nikki
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«Reply #12 on: September 24, 2006, 10:56:17 AM »
thanx JHL n Meena sis...too good Meena sis...

intzaar se humein koi gila nahi
magar itne intzaar ke baad bhi... jisse chaha woh humein mila nahi
kya meri mohabbat mein koi kami hai
ya fir mera usse mil paana khuda ka faisla nahi
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waheed_rose2004
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«Reply #13 on: September 24, 2006, 10:57:44 AM »
Quote from: "Meena is back"
Quote from: "nikki"
hello sis! long time no c..kahan gayab ho gayi thi aap?
Bahut hi pyara likha hai aapne.....as always

saath dene ka vaad karke jo gaye hain
dekhein kabhi laut kar bhi aate hain

yaadon mein to roz milte hain humse
dekhte hain kabhi haqiqat mein bhi saamne aate hain

aye hawa kabhi unke paas se guzarna to unse kehna
kuch aise bhi unke diwane hain...
jo unhein yaad karke aanson bahate hain

woh nahi hain jab se paas hamare
hum khud ko tanha paate hain


hey nikki kuddiye, arreyaar me was busy, its really nice to c here also, bohot acha likha tumne, aur sab fine hain ?


humne bhi kabhi intezar me pal guzare hai,
door hokar bhi woh kitne pas humare hai,
har rang me unhi ka rang naazar ata hai hume,
din me woh phool to raat ko woh sitare hai!


bahot  ache  Nikki......Meena........Toshu
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Tosha
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«Reply #14 on: September 24, 2006, 10:59:18 AM »
maine to kuch likha hi nahi Puzzled ! ... phir bhi Thanx Waheed :D
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