Khud Se Ladti Mussafir Hu Mai

by Nikhaar on October 10, 2009, 06:32:48 PM
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«Reply #15 on: October 12, 2009, 02:50:28 AM »
Quote from: Nikhaar on October 10, 2009, 06:32:48 PM
Kya kahu kisi se khuch aur kya khud ko samjhau mai
Parde k pichhe chipe chehron ko kyu ab tak dekh na paayi mai

Jitna khud ko galat theraaya utna mujhe ronda sabne
Kaun mera apna,kaun praaya ye jaan hi na paayi mai

Jwaab dete ye log khud ko sahi tehraate hai
Sach ko talaashti ek bejaan murat ban gayi mai

Aajaad panchi ki tarah udna chaha maine bhi aasmaan mein
Apno ki izzat ki khaatir majbur si ho gayi mai

 Har mod par bura thehraaya inhi logon ne mujhe
 isliye bewafa k naam se mashoor ho gayi mai

 Wo khush nahi tha saath mere to uski khushi ki dua maangi
 Usse uski khushi k hawaale kiya to gunahgaar hui mai

 Uss raah par chalne ki izzazat mere sanskaaro ne na di mujhe
 Galat kahe to kahe duniya 'Pooja' ko....
 Khud se hi ladti khud ko talashti hui mussafir  hu mai[/size]


Wah wah kya baat hai Pooja dear bahut bahut accha likha hai aapne  Applause Applause
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«Reply #16 on: October 12, 2009, 02:52:12 AM »
Wah bahut khoob Cara ji, Smardia ji and dear Saahil .. aap sab ne bahut accha saat diya hai. Daad kabul kijiyega  Usual Smile
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«Reply #17 on: October 12, 2009, 09:05:40 AM »

 Aapka Shukriya Sophiji

Quote from: Sophi on October 12, 2009, 02:20:57 AM
Bahoot Bahoot Khoob Pooja.. Bahoot hi Kamaal ka Likha hai ..

Very Well Written Cera ji, Smardia ji, Shihab, Kwaish ji, Badal and Saahil...

Bahoot Bahoot Khoob!
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«Reply #18 on: October 12, 2009, 09:12:45 AM »
Thank you Rojajee.......

Quote from: Roja on October 12, 2009, 02:52:12 AM
Wah bahut khoob Cara ji, Smardia ji and dear Saahil .. aap sab ne bahut accha saat diya hai. Daad kabul kijiyega  Usual Smile
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«Reply #19 on: October 12, 2009, 06:31:15 PM »
Di ye kaisi ladai hai....koi khud se bhi ladta hai....
Sochti hu Sapna hai ya haquikat ?
Aysi duvidha wali kavita kyon, kyon di ?



Quote from: Nikhaar on October 10, 2009, 06:32:48 PM
Kya kahu kisi se khuch aur kya khud ko samjhau mai
Parde k pichhe chipe chehron ko kyu ab tak dekh na paayi mai

Jitna khud ko galat theraaya utna mujhe ronda sabne
Kaun mera apna,kaun praaya ye jaan hi na paayi mai

Jwaab dete ye log khud ko sahi tehraate hai
Sach ko talaashti ek bejaan murat ban gayi mai

Aajaad panchi ki tarah udna chaha maine bhi aasmaan mein
Apno ki izzat ki khaatir majbur si ho gayi mai

 Har mod par bura thehraaya inhi logon ne mujhe
 isliye bewafa k naam se mashoor ho gayi mai

 Wo khush nahi tha saath mere to uski khushi ki dua maangi
 Usse uski khushi k hawaale kiya to gunahgaar hui mai

 Uss raah par chalne ki izzazat mere sanskaaro ne na di mujhe
 Galat kahe to kahe duniya 'Pooja' ko....
 Khud se hi ladti khud ko talashti hui mussafir  hu mai[/size]
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«Reply #20 on: October 13, 2009, 03:49:59 AM »
Quote from: baadal102 on October 11, 2009, 09:13:50 AM
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bahut khoob pooja ji, bahut aache se har ahsaas
ko piroya hai har sabdo mai,
dard ka bahut aache se ahsaas karane ke liye sukria

bahut khoob  Clapping Smiley

Baadal

bahut bahut shukriya baadal ji...khushi hui aapne yha apna waqt diya
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«Reply #21 on: October 13, 2009, 04:30:19 AM »
Quote from: Sophi on October 12, 2009, 02:20:57 AM
Bahoot Bahoot Khoob Pooja.. Bahoot hi Kamaal ka Likha hai ..

Very Well Written Cera ji, Smardia ji, Shihab, Kwaish ji, Badal and Saahil...

Bahoot Bahoot Khoob!
Quote from: Roja on October 12, 2009, 02:50:28 AM
Wah wah kya baat hai Pooja dear bahut bahut accha likha hai aapne  Applause Applause
Bahoot bahoot shukriya Sophi ji & Roja ji...khushi hui aapko ye rachna pasand aayi
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«Reply #22 on: October 14, 2009, 01:30:03 PM »
Quote from: khwaish on October 11, 2009, 05:43:12 AM
Bahut Bahut Khooob Pooja...

Bahut Hi jazbaati Aur Dil Ko Chune Wali Poetry Likhi Hai Aapne...

Har Ek Lafz Kuch Kehta Hai...

Bahut Ache Mere Dost!! Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Kuch Likhe Bina Yaha Se Jaana, Khud Se Beimaani Hogi..

Ek Koshish Aapke Poetry Mein ki gayi Baaton Ke jawaab Mein kuch likhne Ki..

Kaun Padhta Hai yahan Kisi Aur Ke Zindagi Ki Kitaab Ko
Yeh Duniya Hi kuch Aisi Hai!!
Yahan Insaan Bhoola Baitha Hai Apne Aap Ko....

Apno Ko Jaane Mein Umar Kat Jaati hai Eh Dost!!!
Kaun maanta Hai Yahan Ab Jhoote Rishto Ki Thaap Ko...

Udhte Panchi Ko Dekh kar Naa Soch Ke Woh Azaad Hai!!!
Har Ek Ki Apni-Apni Mushkile Hai!!
Yahan To Samundar Ki Lehrein Bhi Bekarar Rehti Hai
Kinaare Ke Milaap Ko...

Logon Ka Kaam Hai Ke Woh Bas Auro Ko Kuch kehte Rahe!!
Himmat Rakh!! Khuda Bhi Saath Deta Hai Uss Shaks Ka,
Jo Tufaano Mein Bhi Sambhaal leta Hai Apne Aap Ko...

Kyon Udaas Rehte Ho uss Shaks Ke Liye Jo kabhi Tera Tha Hi Nahi!!!
Jaanta Hoon Mushkil Hai!! Par Muskuraakar Mita Do,
Zindagi Se, Gham Ke Iss Chaap Ko...

Khud Se Ladta Hua Khud Ko Talaashta Hua Musafir Hi,
Manzil tak Pahunchta Hai "Pooja"
"Khwaish" Kehta Hai Nikaal Phenko Chehre Se,
Maauysi Ke Is Naqaab Ko....

               ~~~~~Khwaish~~~~~


Waah waah ...bahoot hi khoob khwaish ji..... Applause Applause Applause
ek loshish meri taraf se bhi....


Khuch log aise bhi hai duniya mein
jinhe dusron k gamon se parhej hai
Dusro k ghamo dekhkar wo apne ghamon ko bhool jaate hai

Such kha tumne yha koi bhi khush nahi hai khud se
Hote hai khuch hi aise jinke hotho par
dard mein bhi muskaan sajti hai

Udhte panchi,chalti hawaon ko pasand kiya hai maine
Jha chahe jaa sakte hai phir bhi simaon ka paalan karte hai

Tamaam umar hi ladna padta hai insaan ko
kabhi khud se toh kabhi auron se
Manzil ko talashta , raaste banata har koi hai

Ghamon ki ye acchai hai k wo ek din beet jata hai
Bas baaki reh jaate hai khuch nishaa

Mayusiyat kabhi kabhi chha hi jaati hai aise mein "Khwaish"
Phir chidta hai ek yudh mann mein vicharon ka
Jisme hum bhi shaamil hai aur tum bhi

aankhir iss zindagi mein khud se ladte aage badhte
tum bhi musaafir ho,hum bhi musaafir hai
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«Reply #23 on: October 14, 2009, 03:10:23 PM »
Quote from: Nikhaar on October 14, 2009, 01:30:03 PM
Waah waah ...bahoot hi khoob khwaish ji..... Applause Applause Applause
ek loshish meri taraf se bhi....


Khuch log aise bhi hai duniya mein
jinhe dusron k gamon se parhej hai
Dusro k ghamo dekhkar wo apne ghamon ko bhool jaate hai

Such kha tumne yha koi bhi khush nahi hai khud se
Hote hai khuch hi aise jinke hotho par
dard mein bhi muskaan sajti hai

Udhte panchi,chalti hawaon ko pasand kiya hai maine
Jha chahe jaa sakte hai phir bhi simaon ka paalan karte hai

Tamaam umar hi ladna padta hai insaan ko
kabhi khud se toh kabhi auron se
Manzil ko talashta , raaste banata har koi hai

Ghamon ki ye acchai hai k wo ek din beet jata hai
Bas baaki reh jaate hai khuch nishaa

Mayusiyat kabhi kabhi chha hi jaati hai aise mein "Khwaish"
Phir chidta hai ek yudh mann mein vicharon ka
Jisme hum bhi shaamil hai aur tum bhi

aankhir iss zindagi mein khud se ladte aage badhte
tum bhi musaafir ho,hum bhi musaafir hai




Teh Dil Se Shukriya Dost!!! Par jawaab bahut Der Baad Aaya, Aisa Kyon??

Aur Bahut Bahut Khoob Pooja..

bahut Ache.. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Jo Nishaan Sirf Dard Dena Jaane,
Uss Nishaan Ko mita Bhi Do...

Jo Shaks Sirf matlab ke Liye Saath De
Uss Shaks Ko Ab Bhoola Bhi Do....

Bahut Ho chuka Khud Ko Yuh Jhooti Tasalli Dene Ka Yeh Silsila!!
Ab Aankhon Se Jhoot Ka Pardah Utha Bhi Do...

Khud Ki Tamannao Ko qaid Kar, Kab tak Jee Paaoge??
Zindagi Waise Hi Itni Mushkil Hai
Aur Upar Se Khud Ko Yuh Saza Bhi Do...

Zaroori nahi ke Har Baat Par Aansu Bahe
Inn Aankhon Se "Pooja"!!!
Kabhi Inn Aansuon Se Ladkar Muskura Bhi Do....

Aakhir kab tak Apne Hi Khwaisho Ka Qatl Karte Rahenge Hum!!!
Inn Ankhon Mein Ab Ek nayi Khwaish Jaga Bhi Do.....
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«Reply #24 on: October 14, 2009, 03:28:54 PM »
Lovely  Applause Applause
Good going Bhaiya  Usual Smile
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«Reply #25 on: October 14, 2009, 04:58:05 PM »
Quote from: Roja on October 14, 2009, 03:28:54 PM
Lovely  Applause Applause
Good going Bhaiya  Usual Smile


Quote from: Sophi on October 12, 2009, 02:20:57 AM
Bahoot Bahoot Khoob Pooja.. Bahoot hi Kamaal ka Likha hai ..

Very Well Written Cera ji, Smardia ji, Shihab, Kwaish ji, Badal and Saahil...

Bahoot Bahoot Khoob!

Bahut Bahut Shukriya Behna..Thanks A Lot For Always Appreciating.. icon_flower

Thankyou Soooooo Much Sophi Usual Smile
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«Reply #26 on: October 14, 2009, 05:15:46 PM »
BOhat KHoob Khwaish Bhai, Aur Nikhaar Ji,.
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«Reply #27 on: November 14, 2009, 09:06:41 AM »
Quote from: -Saahil- on October 11, 2009, 12:21:07 PM
bahut bahut khoob pooja dil ke dard ko aur badati huyi jo kashish aapne di hai uske liye kya kahoon
bahut bahut khoob


beshak main tera gunaahgaar sahi
magar mujhe sazaa dene ka haq tera nahin
ae khuda yeh jaan le tu mera tera banda hoon
magar mujh par haq tera nahin
khud talaashi hai apni manzil maine tufaano main
woh raaste kya thay iski mujhe parvaah nahin
musafir tha main , aaj bhi ek musafir hoon main
manzil toh pa li par phir bhi lage manzil nahin
Waah bahut hi khoob jwaab diya aapne saahil ji...aapki in panktiyon par mai bhi khuch kehna chahugi...[sorry for late reply]


Sach kha tere kiye ki sazaa mai kya dugi tujhe
Uss rab k aage teri aur meri aukaat nahi hai koi

Aaj tu manzil k paas hai par manzil nahi hai paas tere
Iss se badi tere liye kya hogi aur sazaa koi
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«Reply #28 on: November 14, 2009, 10:07:49 AM »
Quote from: smardia on October 11, 2009, 06:52:09 PM
Nikhaarji dhanyawaad aapko meri lines pasand aayee...

Hum abhi bhi confused hain....aapke soch par....

Wo shaksh Jo nahi tha khush tere sang
Uski rah par chalne ko kyu thee tu aatur
Izzat aur sanskaro ki chadha k bali
Kaise tu Khush reh paati us k sang
Gunehgaar banaya tha tujhe jisne
Use khone ka kyu tha dard tujhe
Ye kaisa virodhabhass tha soch mai teri ?

Der se reply k liye maafi chahugi...aapki confusion par do lines kehna chahugi....

Ishq mohabbat k bhi apne khuch usul hote hai
Ye baat aur hai k mohabbat ne is kadar andha kar diya
K hum sahi galat ko taraazu mein tol na paaye
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«Reply #29 on: November 14, 2009, 10:09:16 AM »
Quote from: Azeem on October 14, 2009, 05:15:46 PM
BOhat KHoob Khwaish Bhai, Aur Nikhaar Ji,.
bahut bahut shukriya Azeem ji
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