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<>*Khuda ko tumhe mera naam batana hoga*<> Khuda ko tumhe mera naam batana hoga
Jab arthi saji ho meri tumhe hi aag lagana hoga
Har haal me nibha dena waada tum wafa ka sanam
Tuta jo tera wada ,hume khud ko mitana hoga
Har shakhs mujhe ab tere hi naam se janta hai
Tu nahin to fir mujhe benaam hi jeena hoga
Har bar maut k nam se hi darti rahi hun main
Teri judai jo hogi mera maut se saamna hoga
Haste hain to hasne de, kya gam hai zamane ka
Kal hamari yaad me inho bhi ashk bahana hoga
Bhul jaa k teri maut pe aansu bahaungi main
Mere jaane k baad hi tera uss jahaan me aana hoga…!!!
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«Reply #1 on: January 12, 2011, 12:40:55 PM » |
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ufffffffffffff
anamika ji....ek baat bataiye....aap kese itni jaldi aur itne sundar reply bana leti he..........its mind blowingji.....specially last one.........awsome
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*KasaK*....Dil Ki
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«Reply #2 on: January 12, 2011, 12:54:14 PM » |
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aapke liye replies banane nahin padte hain ji...yun knw it comes automatically....
aapki shayri ka jadu humse kuch bhi likhwa sakta hai..
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«Reply #3 on: January 12, 2011, 01:03:32 PM » |
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baap re Dang rah gaye hum.
kamaal ka likha ji ekdum jhakashhhh hai.
behad umda aur gahri mohabbat ke alfaz hain K Mam
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na kar baaten judai aur maut ki
kisi aur hi tarike se tujhe--
meri wafaon ko aazmaana hoga
sunenge log hasenge mere bhole sanam
harek ki labon par fir harsu--
humari hi mohabbat ka afsaana hoga
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thanx
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«Reply #4 on: January 12, 2011, 04:26:51 PM » |
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<>*Khuda ko tumhe mera naam batana hoga*<> Khuda ko tumhe mera naam batana hoga
Jab arthi saji ho meri tumhe hi aag lagana hoga
Har haal me nibha dena waada tum wafa ka sanam
Tuta jo tera wada ,hume khud ko mitana hoga
Har shakhs mujhe ab tere hi naam se janta hai
Tu nahin to fir mujhe benaam hi jeena hoga
Har bar maut k nam se hi darti rahi hun main
Teri judai jo hogi mera maut se saamna hoga
Haste hain to hasne de, kya gam hai zamane ka
Kal hamari yaad me inho bhi ashk bahana hoga
Bhul jaa k teri maut pe aansu bahaungi main
Mere jaane k baad hi tera uss jahaan me aana hoga…!!!
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«Reply #5 on: January 12, 2011, 06:28:48 PM » |
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Kasak Jee Aadaab!
I don't know ke kia kaheN coz..
aise ahsaas hume chup rahne pe majboor
kar dete hai...
Aapke is likhe par daad .....
Likhati rahiye.....
Khush O aabaad rahiye..
Khuda Hafez..... 
Kuch aik yaadoN ka tujhko karwaaN dekar
Kho jauNga zameeN meiN tujhe aasmaN dekar
Mujhko bhi bhul jaoNge tum rafta rafta
YouN Naa bhulaane ki kasam e wafaa dekar
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«Reply #6 on: January 12, 2011, 06:56:28 PM » |
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bahoo khoob likha kDK ji aur Parwaaz ji ki char lines bhi behad prbhav-shali rahin....aap dono ko dheron daad
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«Reply #7 on: January 12, 2011, 10:59:46 PM » |
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Bahaut khoob Anamika di aur Parwaaz jee.. Dono ne bahaut sunder likha hai.. Anamika di last line toh ek satya bayan kar gayi.. Kay tujhe ana hoga.. Khoob..  |
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«Reply #8 on: January 13, 2011, 06:16:35 AM » |
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bahut khub kasakji... khush rahen.. |
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«Reply #9 on: January 13, 2011, 12:56:13 PM » |
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Bahut Khub Kasak Ji
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«Reply #11 on: January 18, 2011, 07:04:18 AM » |
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*KasaK*....Dil Ki
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«Reply #12 on: January 18, 2011, 07:18:05 AM » |
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baap re Dang rah gaye hum.
kamaal ka likha ji ekdum jhakashhhh hai.
behad umda aur gahri mohabbat ke alfaz hain K Mam
""
na kar baaten judai aur maut ki
kisi aur hi tarike se tujhe--
meri wafaon ko aazmaana hoga
sunenge log hasenge mere bhole sanam
harek ki labon par fir harsu--
humari hi mohabbat ka afsaana hoga
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thanx
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thnx nirala mastana ji ...aapne pasand kiya isko aapke sher bht acche hain ji ... |
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«Reply #13 on: January 18, 2011, 07:18:32 AM » |
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«Reply #14 on: January 18, 2011, 07:23:35 AM » |
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on eTI community..
