~ Khuda se ishq ~ by Rahym

by dead heart on September 04, 2013, 06:07:12 AM
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Salaam..

Hamesha issi philosophy pe chala hoon kay mohobat karni chahiye, mohobat batni chahiye..Aj kal zindagi kuch yun hai kay aj bada ajeeb sa sawal uth gaya mann main kay kya mohobat wakei hume ghum se zada khushi de kay jati hai?

Meri yeh nazm hamesha ki tarha kuch dher sare ehsaas aur khayalat ko dil main rakh kay likhi gayi hai..Usme se ek bayan karna chahta hoon..kahin parra kay kisi ne Allah ko 'allah' likha..bahaut chota lagega yeh topic shayad kisi ko mager jo sabse mahan hai, jiski wajah se yeh duniya hai, kya wakei uska naam yunhi without ehteram, without capital likhna chahiye..hum kisi shaks ka naam likhte hai toh microsoft bhi usse capital main convert karti hai..yeh toh uss sabse mahan takkat ka naam hai..thoda sa gaur kijiyega meri iss baat par..Kisi ko pin point nahin kar raha hoon bas ek general observation hai..

Bura laga ho kisi ko, toh maafi ka talabgar hoon..


Na ho saakay tumse pura, aisa na koi vaada kiya karo,
Ager apnane ka hausla nahin toh dhoor se alvida keh diya karo..

Jiski umeedein tumne torr di kaanch ki tarha badi asani se,
Aj jo jaa raha hai dhoor toh usse bewaffa na keh diya karo..

Insaanon ka naam lete hue bhi tum capital se shuru karte ho,
Kam se kam Allah, Khuda, Ishwar toh theek se likh liya karo..

Mohobat main lamhe itne toh do kay yaadein banjaye mere liye,
Phir chahe judai kay zakhm tum dil pe be-hisaab diya karo..

Bahaut dhoor agaya hoon tujse mager main apne lavzon ka pakka hoon,
Kabhi mehsoos ho tanhai tujhe, bas mujh ko yaad kar liya karo..

Main kal bhi waisa hi tha jaisa kay aj hoon mager haan,
Bas ek wusul hai kay apne kiye gaye vaade toh nibha diya karo..

Bahaut dhoor chal kar ehsaas hua hai kay insaan mohobat kay layak nahin,
‘Khamosh’ aj sabse kehna chahta hai kay bas Khuda se ishq kiya karo..

~..Rahym..~..A Silent Heart..~
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«Reply #1 on: September 04, 2013, 06:13:40 AM »
Waah Waah Waah Bahut Khoob.
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«Reply #2 on: September 04, 2013, 08:25:08 AM »
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«Reply #3 on: September 04, 2013, 08:43:07 AM »
bahut khoob
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«Reply #4 on: September 04, 2013, 10:14:03 AM »
Bahut khoob likha hai Aapne aur bahut sach bhi
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«Reply #5 on: September 04, 2013, 10:34:36 AM »
kya baat hai raheem ji... badhya likha hai
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«Reply #6 on: September 04, 2013, 01:24:40 PM »
Bahaut dhoor chal kar ehsaas hua hai kay insaan mohobat kay layak nahin,
‘Khamosh’ aj sabse kehna chahta hai kay bas Khuda se ishq kiya karo..

shukr hai ke main ism-e-ALLAH caps mein hi likhta hun shuru se,

rahim sahab bohut achhi nazm likhi hai aapne ,bohut khoob,
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«Reply #7 on: September 04, 2013, 02:37:10 PM »
dost..
kafi Dino bad padha aapko. wakai aap Jo bhi likhte hain pura ehsaas piro dete hain..

jada to nhi kahunga mai bas.
god bless u

khush rahie
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«Reply #8 on: September 04, 2013, 02:52:38 PM »
bahot khoob, dheron daad, waaaah waaah  Applause Clapping Smiley Applause
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«Reply #9 on: September 04, 2013, 05:09:47 PM »
Bohat khoub .nice
Dial khush Mar diya bhai g
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«Reply #10 on: September 04, 2013, 05:56:38 PM »
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Waaaaaaaaah rahim ji... bahut hi lajawab peshkash rahi... kya kehne is kalaam ke.. tareef ke liye alfaaz nahin.. hazaron hazaron dili daaaaaaaad...

Mohobat main lamhe itne toh do kay yaadein banjaye mere liye,
Phir chahe judai kay zakhm tum dil pe be-hisaab diya karo..

Bahaut dhoor agaya hoon tujse mager main apne lavzon ka pakka hoon,
Kabhi mehsoos ho tanhai tujhe, bas mujh ko yaad kar liya karo..

Main kal bhi waisa hi tha jaisa kay aj hoon mager haan,
Bas ek wusul hai kay apne kiye gaye vaade toh nibha diya karo..

Bahaut dhoor chal kar ehsaas hua hai kay insaan mohobat kay layak nahin,
‘Khamosh’ aj sabse kehna chahta hai kay bas Khuda se ishq kiya karo..

in ashaaron par hazaron daaaaaad... Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #11 on: September 04, 2013, 06:42:23 PM »
Bahut Khub Raheem Bhai...Applause
ALLAH Pak Aapko Jaza e Khair Ata Kare

Aur Bhai Ho Sake To Aap Bhi Apna Naam
Rahym Ki Jagah Raheem Likhye Kyon Ki
Aksar Zer o Zabar Ke Aage Piche Hone Se
Naam Ke Maayne Hi Badal Jaate Hain

ALLAH Reham Kare


Shad o Aabaad Rahiye

Shihab
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«Reply #12 on: September 04, 2013, 06:59:43 PM »
Behad gamgeen alfaaz likhe hai aapne....bahut gehri baat kahi hai aapn....have no words to say anythng....
daad kabul karein Rahim bhai... Applause Applause Applause Applause.....
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«Reply #13 on: September 04, 2013, 07:10:07 PM »
Waah Waah Waah Bahut Khoob.
Bahaut bahaut shukriya Ravi jee..
Khush rahiye..!

waah waah
Bahaut bahaut shukriya Saini jee..
Khush rahiye..!

bahut khoob
Bahaut bahaut shukriya Nandbahu jee..
Khush rahiye..!

Bahut khoob likha hai Aapne aur bahut sach bhi
Bahaut bahaut shukriya Neelam jee..
Khush rahiye..!

kya baat hai raheem ji... badhya likha hai
Bahaut bahaut shukriya Samnoj jee..
Khush rahiye..!

Bahaut dhoor chal kar ehsaas hua hai kay insaan mohobat kay layak nahin,
‘Khamosh’ aj sabse kehna chahta hai kay bas Khuda se ishq kiya karo..

shukr hai ke main ism-e-ALLAH caps mein hi likhta hun shuru se,

rahim sahab bohut achhi nazm likhi hai aapne ,bohut khoob,
ApplauseApplauseApplauseApplauseApplauseApplauseApplauseApplauseApplauseApplause
Bahaut bahaut shukriya Sahal jee..
Achi aadat hai phir toh Masha'Allah!
Khush rahiye..!

dost..
kafi Dino bad padha aapko. wakai aap Jo bhi likhte hain pura ehsaas piro dete hain..

jada to nhi kahunga mai bas.
god bless u

khush rahie
Dost,
Apka comment karna dil ko bahaut acha lagta hai..
Bahaut bahaut shukriya..
Allah bless you too..
Khush rahiye..!

bahot khoob, dheron daad, waaaah waaah  Applause Clapping Smiley Applause
Bahaut bahaut shukriya Iqtedar jee..
Khush rahiye..!

Bohat khoub .nice
Dial khush Mar diya bhai g
Bahaut bahaut shukriya Sehrash bhai..
Khush rahiye..!

Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Thumbs UP Thumbs UP Thumbs UP Thumbs UP

Waaaaaaaaah rahim ji... bahut hi lajawab peshkash rahi... kya kehne is kalaam ke.. tareef ke liye alfaaz nahin.. hazaron hazaron dili daaaaaaaad...

Mohobat main lamhe itne toh do kay yaadein banjaye mere liye,
Phir chahe judai kay zakhm tum dil pe be-hisaab diya karo..

Bahaut dhoor agaya hoon tujse mager main apne lavzon ka pakka hoon,
Kabhi mehsoos ho tanhai tujhe, bas mujh ko yaad kar liya karo..

Main kal bhi waisa hi tha jaisa kay aj hoon mager haan,
Bas ek wusul hai kay apne kiye gaye vaade toh nibha diya karo..

Bahaut dhoor chal kar ehsaas hua hai kay insaan mohobat kay layak nahin,
‘Khamosh’ aj sabse kehna chahta hai kay bas Khuda se ishq kiya karo..

in ashaaron par hazaron daaaaaad... Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
Aqsh jee..
Tahe tahe dil se bahaut shukriya kay apne waqt diya aur iss kadar pasand ayi kalam apko..
Khush rahiye..!
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«Reply #14 on: September 04, 2013, 07:13:16 PM »
Bahut Khub Raheem Bhai...Applause
ALLAH Pak Aapko Jaza e Khair Ata Kare

Aur Bhai Ho Sake To Aap Bhi Apna Naam
Rahym Ki Jagah Raheem Likhye Kyon Ki
Aksar Zer o Zabar Ke Aage Piche Hone Se
Naam Ke Maayne Hi Badal Jaate Hain

ALLAH Reham Kare


Shad o Aabaad Rahiye

Shihab
Bahaut bahaut shukriya Shihab bhai..
Jee bilkul gaur karunga iss baat par..
Urdu zuban likhne ati hi nahin hai toh iski
knowledge nahin..
Zaroor gaur karunga..
Bahaut shukriya..
Khush rahiye..!

Behad gamgeen alfaaz likhe hai aapne....bahut gehri baat kahi hai aapn....have no words to say anythng....
daad kabul karein Rahim bhai... Applause Applause Applause Applause.....
Nikhaar di,
Apka bahaut bahaut shukriya..
Nazm ki gehrayi ko samjha apne, yeh bahaut badi baat hai mere liye..
Khush rahiye..!
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