khushali aur shanti ka manzar

by soudagar on April 08, 2012, 05:39:53 PM
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aaj phir ek koshish ki hai maine..... sirf aa p logo ke sath ki wajh se.....

ek dhuan sa uthta dekhta hoon ab gali ke galiyaro mein
dar lagne laga hai ab to ghar ke hi andhiyaro mein

ghar se bahar nikalte hi tham jate hai paon mere
na jane kya manzar hoga sahar ke bajaro mein

 har taraf insan hai  par hote huye bhi nahi hai insaniyat
 insan ki hawaniyat ki khabar roj milti hai akhbaro mein

har jagah chain o sukun , shanti dhundhta hoon magar
ab to anchaha shor pahuch gaya hai mandir masjid pathshalo mein

kya "K" kabhi pura hoga tera sapna, kya dekh payega tu
wahi shanti khushali  jinhe padha tha tumne kitabo mein.....
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«Reply #1 on: April 08, 2012, 05:42:57 PM »
bahut khoob soudagar...
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sbechain
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«Reply #2 on: April 08, 2012, 08:42:25 PM »
aaj phir ek koshish ki hai maine..... sirf aa p logo ke sath ki wajh se.....

ek dhuan sa uthta dekhta hoon ab gali ke galiyaro mein
dar lagne laga hai ab to ghar ke hi andhiyaro mein

ghar se bahar nikalte hi tham jate hai paon mere
na jane kya manzar hoga sahar ke bajaro mein

 har taraf insan hai  par hote huye bhi nahi hai insaniyat
 insan ki hawaniyat ki khabar roj milti hai akhbaro mein

har jagah chain o sukun , shanti dhundhta hoon magar
ab to anchaha shor pahuch gaya hai mandir masjid pathshalo mein

kya "K" kabhi pura hoga tera sapna, kya dekh payega tu
wahi shanti khushali  jinhe padha tha tumne kitabo mein.....


good.........!
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mkv
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«Reply #3 on: April 09, 2012, 03:04:58 AM »
Accha hai Saudagar ji
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Koshish jaari rakhiye..aapke andar vo sab kuch hai jo ek acchi ghajal likhne ke liye jaroori hai..khayaaalo ki kami nahi aapke paas..sirf bayaani ki jaroorat hai..
Saini Sir, Hasan Sir ki ghajlo se kaafi kuch sekh sakte hai ham.

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«Reply #4 on: April 09, 2012, 03:21:25 AM »
aapne bilkul sahi kaha MKV sir jazbat hai par bayani nahi aur wahi sab batein main aap sab se sikh raha hoon....aap sabka  bahut bahut dhanywad  sunny
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«Reply #5 on: April 09, 2012, 03:52:01 AM »
bahut khoob dheron daad
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«Reply #6 on: April 10, 2012, 04:22:26 PM »
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bahut bahut khoob Soudagar ji...!!!
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«Reply #7 on: May 04, 2012, 01:29:37 PM »
shukriya saini sir hridev ji
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«Reply #8 on: June 24, 2012, 02:44:29 AM »
bhut  bahut shukriya theyash ji
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