~~"Khushbu Fizaaon Main Hai"~~by Celmira (Talat)

by k.shael on July 03, 2009, 11:57:51 AM
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Hawa Ruk Gayi to Bhi Kya Ghum,
Unki Khushbu Fizaaon Main Hai!!

Hazaar Uljhane Hongi, Magar,
Ek Tasveer Teri Yaadon Main Hai!!


Mohabbat Nahin Hai Asaan Safar,
Ye Bade Mushkil Imtihanon Main Hai!!

Khamoshiyon Ko Na Bewafai Jaano,
Baat Wo Suno Jo Nigahon Main Hai!!

        ~~Talat~~


Celmira Dear, Aapki Ye lines bahut aachi lagi!! Dil ko Choo Gayi, So Inhe Desigen karke post kar diya..

Hope u liked it..!!

Shally.
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k.shael
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«Reply #1 on: July 03, 2009, 12:04:51 PM »



Akela Kar Gaya Koi,
Tanha Bikhar Gaya Koi

Dhadkan Bhi Hain Sansain Bhi,
Lekin Mar Gaya Koi

Apne Hi Sawaalon Se,
Baarha Dar Gaya Koi

In Aankhon Main Basta tha
Ab Khwaab Utar Gaya Koi

Dard Ki Har Manzil Se,
Aaj Guzar Gaya Koi !!

Ye Lines bhi bahut behtreen thi Celmira Dear, Sach me bahut khoob alfaaz hai aapke..

Hope u like it..!!

Shally.
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madhuwesh
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«Reply #2 on: July 03, 2009, 12:06:50 PM »
Wow Talat ji,Fantastic,very nice and beautiful creation,
 Thumbs UP Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley :clapping:bahut khoobsurti se aap ne design
kiya Shally ji. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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k.shael
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«Reply #3 on: July 03, 2009, 12:11:29 PM »
Madhu dear thanx for liking this post, but this is not written by me, this is written by Talat Dear & Only Desigen by me..

Shally.
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Talat
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«Reply #4 on: July 03, 2009, 12:47:30 PM »
OMG !!! I am just speechless to see these poems of mine....!!

Thanks so much for giving me this pleasure of seeing my work in such a beautiful presentation......Thanks so much Shally dear for designing this.........You really have a made a beautiful presentation.....both of them ...Thanks so much dear  notworthy notworthy
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Talat
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«Reply #5 on: July 03, 2009, 12:48:44 PM »
Thanks a lot Madhu....Now the credit really goes to Shally, who brought out this lost work of mine, and that too in such a beautiful way.
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«Reply #6 on: July 03, 2009, 03:23:45 PM »
Wow Talat Ji.. Kya Khoob Likha hai aapne.. Aur aapki Yeh Rachnaayen Shally Beatiful Presentation Ki Vajah se Aur Khubsoorat Ban gai Hain..!!! Very Nice Work Shally..!! Applause Applause


**~** Mann **~**
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dead heart
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«Reply #7 on: July 03, 2009, 06:19:18 PM »
MashAllah Talat di...bahaut bahaut acha likha hai aapne...

Nicely presented Shally jee...
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Sayyid Randeri
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«Reply #8 on: July 03, 2009, 08:26:17 PM »
Waah...!  Bohot hi khoob ashaar hain Celmira ji, pehle kabhi nazar se nahi guzre magar shukriya Shally ji ka jinhon ne hame isse rubru karwaya, or khoobsurat andaaz main pesh kiya, khas kar "Akela kar gaya koi" me bohot soch samajh kar or zabardast beckground image ka istemaal kiya hai...

Celmira ji shally ji or wo tamam members jo kaafi waqt se yoindia par likh rahe hain un se main ek darkhast karunga ke wo agar apna ek thread aysa banae ke jis me apni purani peshkash ko dobara pesh karen to ek baar phir wo manzr-e-aam par aaye or kama-haqqahu daad-o-tahseen paye.

Aaj shally ji ne umda kaam kiya to ye khayaal aaya, celmira ji shally ji khwaish ji pooja ji roja ji angel ji wagaira bohot se sathiyon ke kain ash'ar ayse hain jo ab nai rachnaon ke boj tale dab chuke hain, to dosto apne hi kalaam ke saath insaaf kijiye, ham use padhne ko bechain hain.

Is me koi sharm ki baat nahi badaai ki baat nahi apna waqt nikaal kar dili jazbaat ke saath likhe gaye ash'ar se insaaf karna hi chahiye...

Kisi ka ek behtareen sher yaad aagaya:....

       Kavita likhna khel nahi he, puchho in fankaaron se
       Ye sab loha kaat rahe hain, Qalamo'n ki talwaaron se

Allah kare yoindia par wahi ho jo sabke liye faidemand ho.

Aap ka mukhlis: Sayyid Randeri
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«Reply #9 on: July 03, 2009, 09:25:07 PM »
wahhhhhhhhh talat ji and shally ji
u both have created master pieces
mubarak ho dono ko
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Rajesh Harish
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«Reply #10 on: July 04, 2009, 02:17:53 AM »
Bahut khoob Celmira Ji And Shally Ji

Talat ki Rachna aur Shally ki Nikhaar
Chha gayee hai Yoindia par ek nayee bahaar
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«Reply #11 on: July 04, 2009, 03:11:41 AM »

Really beautifully written by Talat and presented by Shally...

Talat its always a pleasure to read you, thanks to Shally that she has made such efforts and presented it beautifully...

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«Reply #12 on: July 04, 2009, 04:34:06 AM »
Quote from: Celmira on July 03, 2009, 12:47:30 PM
OMG !!! I am just speechless to see these poems of mine....!!

Thanks so much for giving me this pleasure of seeing my work in such a beautiful presentation......Thanks so much Shally dear for designing this.........You really have a made a beautiful presentation.....both of them ...Thanks so much dear  notworthy notworthy

Celmira dear, ye mere liye khushi ki baat hai ki mein inn purani aur aziz lines ko na sirf pad payi, balki inhe design karne ka mouka bhi mila..aur sabse badi baat maine ya kaam aapse pooce begair kiya, aur aapne bura nahi maana..thanx so much dear..

aapke alfaaz the hi itne khoobsurat ki presentation bhi khoobsurat lagne lagi hai..

Shally.
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«Reply #13 on: July 04, 2009, 04:36:29 AM »
Quote from: Celmira on July 03, 2009, 12:48:44 PM
Thanks a lot Madhu....Now the credit really goes to Shally, who brought out this lost work of mine, and that too in such a beautiful way.

Celmira dear, beshak maine inn poems ko sajaya ho par inhe banaya to aapne hi hai na, mehnat to aapki hi thi..aur maine to sirf ise kuch purane panno se utha kar aaj mein le aayi hoo.n bass..

aur credit hamesha aapka hi rahega, agar mujhe kuch de sakti hai aap to sirf dua aur pyaar dijiyega..Shally ko inn 2 cheezo se jyada pyaari cheez koi bhi nahi hai..

Shally.
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«Reply #14 on: July 04, 2009, 04:37:50 AM »
Quote from: Mann on July 03, 2009, 03:23:45 PM
Wow Talat Ji.. Kya Khoob Likha hai aapne.. Aur aapki Yeh Rachnaayen Shally Beatiful Presentation Ki Vajah se Aur Khubsoorat Ban gai Hain..!!! Very Nice Work Shally..!! Applause Applause


**~** Mann **~**

Shukriya Mann, Talat dear ke alfaazo aur meri presentation ko sarahne ke liye..

Shally.
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