~~"Khushbu Fizaaon Main Hai"~~by Celmira (Talat) -Panna 3:Shayri-E-Dard

Talat

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«Reply #30 on: August 03, 2009, 01:11:06 PM »

Quote from: Rajesh Harish on July 04, 2009, 02:17:53 AM

Bahut khoob Celmira Ji And Shally Ji

Talat ki Rachna aur Shally ki Nikhaar
Chha gayee hai Yoindia par ek nayee bahaar

Thanks a lot Rajesh Ji...This time the complete credit should be given to Shally


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Re: ~~"Khushbu Fizaaon Main Hai"~~by Celmira (Talat)

«Reply #31 on: August 03, 2009, 01:11:54 PM »

Quote from: {Angel} on July 04, 2009, 03:11:41 AM

Really beautifully written by Talat and presented by Shally...

Talat its always a pleasure to read you, thanks to Shally that she has made such efforts and presented it beautifully...

Thanks so much Sweetie....It's always nice to see your comments and encouragement.


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Talat

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Re: ~~"Khushbu Fizaaon Main Hai"~~by Celmira (Talat)

«Reply #32 on: August 03, 2009, 01:13:07 PM »

Quote from: qadeertoopchii on July 04, 2009, 04:41:01 AM

subhan allah , kya hi qoob kalam likhe hain talat bahen apne aur kya qoob pesh kiya hai shally .. waqa-e- ye kalam nazar se chuk gaye the aur shally ne hame ruba ru karwaya tareef ke qabil to dono hi hain .. allah khush rakhe subko aur iss jazbe ko barqarar rakhe !!

Dhadkan bhi hai sansen bhi !!
lekin mar gaya koi !!

.......talat..........

wah bhai wah kya misre hain wah !!

faqath eak kamre ka sannata hi mere paas hai !!
marr chuki hai meri tanha-e- kisse awaz don !!

kaash mai bhi apni barbadi ka manzar dekhta !!
kho ga-e- hai meri bina-e- kisse awaz don !!

Qadeertoopchi

Bohot shukriya Qadeer Bhai... Bohot khoob Asha'ar hain....


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Talat

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Re: ~~"Khushbu Fizaaon Main Hai"~~by Celmira (Talat)

«Reply #33 on: August 03, 2009, 01:14:06 PM »

Quote from: superspawn10 on July 04, 2009, 11:03:06 AM

Bohot acha likha hai aapne Talat ji...
Aur Shally ji..nice work..

Thanks so much SS Ji


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Re: ~~"Khushbu Fizaaon Main Hai"~~by Celmira (Talat)

«Reply #34 on: August 03, 2009, 01:15:09 PM »

Quote from: thegrimreaper on July 19, 2009, 02:21:10 PM

simply hats off icon_salut

Thanks a lot Reaper Ji. It's Shally who deserves the appreciation.


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Re: ~~"Khushbu Fizaaon Main Hai"~~by Celmira (Talat)

«Reply #35 on: August 03, 2009, 01:16:56 PM »

Quote from: aaina on July 19, 2009, 08:53:13 PM

kya baat hai talat bhut hi behetreen andaaz hai aapka lafzo.n ko is andaaz de piroti hain ki shayad lafz khud bhi hairat se apne itne khoosurat hone par rashq karte honge,

aur shally ji kya baat hai aapki jitni bhi tareef ki jaye kam hai bhut khoob presentation jawaab nhi

LOL Aslam Ji, aap to sharminda kar rahe hain....Aap khud itne achche shayar hain aur aap se itna kuch seekhne ka mauqa milta hai....Thanks so much for this beautiful appreciation.

Quote from: aaina on July 19, 2009, 08:54:39 PM

ek aur khoobsurat paishkash bhoot khoob
nd again shally ji very nice work

Thanks again Aslam Ji


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Talat

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Re: ~~"Khushbu Fizaaon Main Hai"~~by Celmira (Talat)

«Reply #36 on: August 03, 2009, 01:18:00 PM »

Once again, thanks so much Shally dear for creating this beautiful thread and quoting my work


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k.shael

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Re: ~~"Khushbu Fizaaon Main Hai"~~by Celmira (Talat)

«Reply #37 on: August 04, 2009, 05:13:04 AM »

Quote from: Celmira on August 03, 2009, 01:18:00 PM

Once again, thanks so much Shally dear for creating this beautiful thread and quoting my work

Thanx to u dear for writting so beautiful lines,all credit goes to ur poetry..well u like my work it's my luck..thnx again sweetheart!!!..

Shally


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