Khushi mangi thi, Sitam mile

by thegrimreaper on July 13, 2009, 05:12:36 PM
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Khushi mangi thi, Sitam mile

Yaaron ki mehfil mein, dost kuch kam mile

Guhar karta bhi to kiss se karta

Aashiqon ki mehfil mein khushnaseeb kuch kam mile

--- The Grim Reaper
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injured.warrior
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«Reply #1 on: July 13, 2009, 05:43:05 PM »
nice lines.
   khushi mangi thi gam mile
   hame ruswayion ke mausam mile
   hum ro diye teri khatir
par har ashk me tanha hum mile
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madhuwesh
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«Reply #2 on: July 13, 2009, 11:54:36 PM »
wonderful creation,GR ji and beautiful lines by Warrior ji. icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause
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SARVESH RASTOGI
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«Reply #3 on: July 15, 2009, 03:57:09 PM »
Well conceived, wah wah
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thegrimreaper
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«Reply #4 on: July 20, 2009, 02:28:52 PM »
Thankyou
Injured Warrior
Madhuwesh
Sarvesh

 hello

and love u all
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thegrimreaper
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«Reply #5 on: July 20, 2009, 02:29:36 PM »
nice lines.
   khushi mangi thi gam mile
   hame ruswayion ke mausam mile
   hum ro diye teri khatir
par har ashk me tanha hum mile


nice one really Applause
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Talat
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«Reply #6 on: July 22, 2009, 11:26:39 AM »
Bohot Khoob Reaper Ji
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thegrimreaper
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«Reply #7 on: July 22, 2009, 01:22:53 PM »
thanks Celmira ji
means a lot from you
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jasbirsingh
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«Reply #8 on: July 22, 2009, 01:27:43 PM »
Khushi mangi thi, Sitam mile

Yaaron ki mehfil mein, dost kuch kam mile

Guhar karta bhi to kiss se karta

Aashiqon ki mehfil mein khushnaseeb kuch kam mile

--- The Grim Reaper

WAH WAH WAH REAPER.. WAH WAH


JASBIR SINGH
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thegrimreaper
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«Reply #9 on: July 22, 2009, 01:56:23 PM »
thankyou jasbir singh ji Usual Smile
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