Khushiyaa Bohat Manayee....(Ghayel)

by sajid_ghayel on March 10, 2009, 08:03:10 AM
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Meri zindagi na aayee, meri maut kam aayee
Meri mayyat pe sabne khushiyaa bohat manayee

Meri wafa na aayee, teri bewafaiee kam aayee
Tujhe mehfilo ne pooja humko mili bohat tanhaiee

Mere zakhm na aaye, teri baddua kam aayee
Badhta raha jab dard mera tu bohat muskurayee

Ghazal GHAYEL ki na aayee teri tukbandi kam aayee
Chend dad mili humko tujhe shehar bhar se bohat wah_ wahi

-Sajid Ghayel-
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«Reply #1 on: March 10, 2009, 08:32:52 AM »
very nice lines,keep it up,muhaaaaaaaaaaaaa
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«Reply #2 on: March 10, 2009, 08:54:00 AM »
Quote from: sajid_ghayel on March 10, 2009, 08:03:10 AM
Meri zindagi na aayee, meri maut kam aayee
Meri mayyat pe sabne khushiyaa bohat manayee

Meri wafa na aayee, teri bewafaiee kam aayee
Tujhe mehfilo ne pooja humko mili bohat tanhaiee

Mere zakhm na aaye, teri baddua kam aayee
Badhta raha jab dard mera tu bohat muskurayee

Ghazal GHAYEL ki na aayee teri tukbandi kam aayee
Chend dad mili humko tujhe shehar bhar se bohat wah_ wahi

-Sajid Ghayel-

Bohat Achche Sajid Bhaiya, Nice One,.
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jannatjahan
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«Reply #3 on: March 10, 2009, 09:53:57 AM »
ise padh kar kuch ek jakhm phir se hare ho gaye,
anyways its really too good. Usual Smile
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salma786
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«Reply #4 on: March 10, 2009, 03:30:41 PM »
Quote from: sajid_ghayel on March 10, 2009, 08:03:10 AM
Meri zindagi na aayee, meri maut kam aayee
Meri mayyat pe sabne khushiyaa bohat manayee

Meri wafa na aayee, teri bewafaiee kam aayee
Tujhe mehfilo ne pooja humko mili bohat tanhaiee

Mere zakhm na aaye, teri baddua kam aayee
Badhta raha jab dard mera tu bohat muskurayee

Ghazal GHAYEL ki na aayee teri tukbandi kam aayee
Chend dad mili humko tujhe shehar bhar se bohat wah_ wahi

-Sajid Ghayel-

Bahot khoob Sajid ji Applause Applause Applause

choti si gustakhi kar rahi hu maaf karna Thumbs UP


Meri diwangi ki had to dekhte,
Jitna chaha unhe utni zillat payi!

Jo kiya karte hai ishq ke daawe,
Unse hume bas mili ruswaai!

Jis mehfil ne unhe saraha humse,
Ab hamari tarife unhe raas na ayi!

Jab andheron me hume chod gaye akele,
Ab kehte hai humse mili tanhayi!

Zakhmo ko hamare kuredte hi gaye,
Par humse marham ki aas lagayi!

Ghayel karte gaye hamari rooh ko,
Par "Ghayel" ban ke logo se unhe mili Wah-Wahi!
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«Reply #5 on: March 11, 2009, 07:06:42 AM »
Quote from: madhuwesh on March 10, 2009, 08:32:52 AM
very nice lines,keep it up,muhaaaaaaaaaaaaa
madhuwesh

Thank You so much sweet heart, what is this muhaaaaaa is it the Fiji way to say wahhhh  DOH any way muhaaaaaaaaaa from me too.  Giggle
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«Reply #6 on: March 11, 2009, 08:25:33 AM »
Quote from: Jaanasheen on March 10, 2009, 08:54:00 AM
Bohat Achche Sajid Bhaiya, Nice One,.

Bohat bohat shukriyaa Chote.......

Quote from: jannatjahan on March 10, 2009, 09:53:57 AM
ise padh kar kuch ek jakhm phir se hare ho gaye,
anyways its really too good. Usual Smile

Tumhare zakhm hare hue meri koshish kamyaab hui, hum shayro ko aur kam kya hain ya to logho ke zakhm bharna ya unhe aur hara karna.

Quote from: salma786 on March 10, 2009, 03:30:41 PM
Bahot khoob Sajid ji Applause Applause Applause

choti si gustakhi kar rahi hu maaf karna Thumbs UP


Meri diwangi ki had to dekhte,
Jitna chaha unhe utni zillat payi!

Jo kiya karte hai ishq ke daawe,
Unse hume bas mili ruswaai!

Jis mehfil ne unhe saraha humse,
Ab hamari tarife unhe raas na ayi!

Jab andheron me hume chod gaye akele,
Ab kehte hai humse mili tanhayi!

Zakhmo ko hamare kuredte hi gaye,
Par humse marham ki aas lagayi!

Ghayel karte gaye hamari rooh ko,
Par "Ghayel" ban ke logo se unhe mili Wah-Wahi!


Beautiful work Salma, tumhara jawab padhkar bohat khushi hui.  Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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Roja
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«Reply #7 on: May 14, 2009, 02:31:51 AM »
Quote from: sajid_ghayel on March 10, 2009, 08:03:10 AM
Meri zindagi na aayee, meri maut kam aayee
Meri mayyat pe sabne khushiyaa bohat manayee

Meri wafa na aayee, teri bewafaiee kam aayee
Tujhe mehfilo ne pooja humko mili bohat tanhaiee

Mere zakhm na aaye, teri baddua kam aayee
Badhta raha jab dard mera tu bohat muskurayee

Ghazal GHAYEL ki na aayee teri tukbandi kam aayee
Chend dad mili humko tujhe shehar bhar se bohat wah_ wahi

-Sajid Ghayel-

Nice and very touchy...
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Roja
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«Reply #8 on: May 14, 2009, 02:32:48 AM »

Zakhmo ko hamare kuredte hi gaye,
Par humse marham ki aas lagayi!

Ghayel karte gaye hamari rooh ko,
Par "Ghayel" ban ke logo se unhe mili Wah-Wahi!

Bahut khoob Salma dear... Really superb  Thumbs UP
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pandit
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«Reply #9 on: May 14, 2009, 02:59:56 AM »
Quote from: Roja on May 14, 2009, 02:32:48 AM

Zakhmo ko hamare kuredte hi gaye,
Par humse marham ki aas lagayi!

Ghayel karte gaye hamari rooh ko,
Par "Ghayel" ban ke logo se unhe mili Wah-Wahi!

Bahut khoob Salma dear... Really superb  Thumbs UP

very touching roja jee...
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Talat
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«Reply #10 on: May 14, 2009, 03:12:22 PM »
Quote from: sajid_ghayel on March 10, 2009, 08:03:10 AM
Meri zindagi na aayee, meri maut kam aayee
Meri mayyat pe sabne khushiyaa bohat manayee

Meri wafa na aayee, teri bewafaiee kam aayee
Tujhe mehfilo ne pooja humko mili bohat tanhaiee

Mere zakhm na aaye, teri baddua kam aayee
Badhta raha jab dard mera tu bohat muskurayee

Ghazal GHAYEL ki na aayee teri tukbandi kam aayee
Chend dad mili humko tujhe shehar bhar se bohat wah_ wahi

-Sajid Ghayel-

Bohot Khoob Sajid Ji Applause Applause Applause
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Talat
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«Reply #11 on: May 14, 2009, 03:13:04 PM »
Quote from: salma786 on March 10, 2009, 03:30:41 PM
Bahot khoob Sajid ji Applause Applause Applause

choti si gustakhi kar rahi hu maaf karna Thumbs UP


Meri diwangi ki had to dekhte,
Jitna chaha unhe utni zillat payi!

Jo kiya karte hai ishq ke daawe,
Unse hume bas mili ruswaai!

Jis mehfil ne unhe saraha humse,
Ab hamari tarife unhe raas na ayi!

Jab andheron me hume chod gaye akele,
Ab kehte hai humse mili tanhayi!

Zakhmo ko hamare kuredte hi gaye,
Par humse marham ki aas lagayi!

Ghayel karte gaye hamari rooh ko,
Par "Ghayel" ban ke logo se unhe mili Wah-Wahi!








Nice reply Salma
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