Khushiyo.N kaa karobaar..

by nashwani on August 07, 2013, 10:20:54 PM
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Jise dil ne mana apna, wo ikk begana nikla,,
Sadiyo.N purana wo afsana, jhutha fasana nikla..

Jin ankho.N se pee aya karte the ham jaam,,
Kambakht haq se apne pare wo maikhana nikla..

Mausam badalne se farq hi kya padta hai ab,,
Lehraya karte the ham jaha.N wo zamaana nikla..

Chhat samjhe baithe the jiss aasre ko ham,,
Barsaat me tapkane wala ek fata shamiyana nikla..

Khushiyo.N kaa karobaar karne nikale the,,
Nafa bhi nikla to kya, gham napta paimana nikla..

Beintehaa ishq bhi dekho nikla to kya nikla,,
Waqt ka, har pal har lamha hame aazmana nikla..

Dil ke tukde kiye tune hazar, Jod ke dekha,,
To bhi ye begairat dil bas tera hi deewana nikla..!!! Ñ
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«Reply #1 on: August 07, 2013, 11:30:58 PM »
waah waah bahut khoob
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«Reply #2 on: August 07, 2013, 11:32:31 PM »
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bahut khoob likha hai aapne Nashwani ji....!!!
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«Reply #3 on: August 07, 2013, 11:49:13 PM »
bahut hee khub bahut hee umda qalaam ... dheron daad o mubarakbaad...


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«Reply #4 on: August 08, 2013, 12:54:49 AM »
waah waah
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«Reply #5 on: August 08, 2013, 08:51:46 AM »
bahut khoob Applause Applause
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«Reply #6 on: August 08, 2013, 09:40:36 AM »
wah wah
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«Reply #7 on: August 08, 2013, 01:13:04 PM »
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«Reply #8 on: August 08, 2013, 06:21:57 PM »
First of all the title "Khushiyo.N kaa karobaar.." simply attracts the attention & the way u xpressed it all... its superbbbbbbbb.
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«Reply #9 on: August 08, 2013, 08:27:35 PM »
nafaa bhi hua to kya ghum naapta paimaana nikla, bahut ahche nashwani bhai, yunhi likhte rahiye...
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«Reply #10 on: August 08, 2013, 10:35:28 PM »
waah waah bahut khoob

Shukriya sir jee..happy9
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«Reply #11 on: August 08, 2013, 10:38:25 PM »
shukriya hriday jee..happy9
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«Reply #12 on: August 08, 2013, 10:39:01 PM »
shukriya soudagar jee..happy9
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«Reply #13 on: August 08, 2013, 10:40:18 PM »
waah waah

Shukriya bhai..happy9
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«Reply #14 on: August 08, 2013, 10:41:47 PM »
shukriya nand jee..happy9
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