khushq aansoo....A.B

by adil bechain on January 05, 2012, 06:57:43 AM
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                         kiyaa  intezaam  pokhtaa  mujhe mitaane ka,
                         thaa  pataa  dushman  ko  mere thikaane ka,

                         the khush bahut bacha kar girdaab se kashti,
                         ghamm  nahin  mujhe  aaj safinaa dubaane ka,

                         ho  gar  'khoon' apna, aamaadaa  bagawat  pe,
                         rahe   khauf   kaisa   phir   iss   zamaane  ka,

                         diyaa  dard  itna  uski  berukhi  ne  mujhe,
                         bachaa  nahin  jazba  phir ghazal sunaane ka,

                         roothaa rahaa woh, na maine manaayaa bechain.
                         rahaa kisaa  mokhtasar buss  apne fasaane ka.

                        

                        

                        
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«Reply #1 on: January 05, 2012, 07:40:09 AM »
 Applause Applause Applause bahut hee umdaa peshkash adil ji mubaarkee
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«Reply #2 on: January 05, 2012, 07:48:36 AM »
Adil saheb ,Behad khoobsurat ash'aar  se  nawaza
hai bazm ko.Bahut bahut mubarakbaad.Hasan
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«Reply #3 on: January 05, 2012, 08:26:06 AM »
Bahut Bahut Khooob Adilji..

 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #4 on: January 05, 2012, 08:35:34 AM »
 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley dhero daad kabul karen adil ji ...iss umda aur nayab post ke liye
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«Reply #5 on: January 05, 2012, 08:55:15 AM »
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«Reply #6 on: January 05, 2012, 04:53:18 PM »
Bahut khoob Adil bhai
Vaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah Applause
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«Reply #7 on: January 05, 2012, 05:05:52 PM »
Waah Waah Bahoot Bahoot Khoob Adil Bahoot Umda Likha hai.. Superb !

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«Reply #8 on: January 08, 2012, 10:31:17 AM »
Applause Applause Applause bahut hee umdaa peshkash adil ji mubaarkee

shukria saini ji
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«Reply #9 on: January 09, 2012, 08:37:09 AM »
Adil saheb ,Behad khoobsurat ash'aar  se  nawaza
hai bazm ko.Bahut bahut mubarakbaad.Hasan


thank you
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«Reply #10 on: January 10, 2012, 09:21:30 AM »
Bahut Bahut Khooob Adilji..

 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley


thank you
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«Reply #11 on: January 23, 2012, 09:06:21 AM »
Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley dhero daad kabul karen adil ji ...iss umda aur nayab post ke liye

thanks
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«Reply #12 on: March 07, 2012, 09:00:51 AM »
superbbb

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