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<>*Khushyon se dur kiya hua hai*<> Chhupkar meri aahon me bas wo yehi kaha karta hai
Tu mera na sahi teri ruuh me mera aks hi basa hua hai
Nahin lai main kabhi apni zabaan pe naam tera sanam
Lekin mere rom rom pe bas tera hi naam likha hua hai
Tod kar tere dil ko hum aaj bhi bht pashemaan hain
Dillagi me anjane hi humse ee sanam ye gunaah hua hai
Nahin rakh paate hain apne aapko mehfilon se dur hum
Aaj waqt na dene ki wajah se tu mujhse yun durr hua hai
Nahin tod paati hun main ye bediyaan tere pyaar ki
K bandhan ye teri chahat ka mere pairon ka gehna hua hai
Dard tere dil ka ab to meri jaan pe ban aaya hai zaalim
Kehta hai tu kaise kasak k dil me ye zakhm gehra hua hai
Mere har kadam pe bichha k dil meri zindagi ko sajaya tumne
Lekin kasak ne khud hi apne ko inn khushyon se dur kiya hua hai…!!!
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«Reply #1 on: January 07, 2011, 05:29:53 AM » |
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nice anu ji
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«Reply #2 on: January 07, 2011, 07:08:12 AM » |
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hmmmmmmmm........
anamika ji kya baat he aajkal aap sirf dard hi dard baat rahi he........well wese aacha he kyuki dard batne se kam hota he......dua he ishwer apka sara dard hume de de......
jaha tak poetry ki baat he ....wo as usal bahot bahot aachi........wese is poetry me jis ladki ka jikr kiya he shayad me us tarah ki kisi ladki ko janta hu ji.....bht aacha likha he anamika ji...bht khub........
lijiye kuch lines us ladki ke dil ki he dhyan se padna ......
Na Aana Karib Mere Koi,
Tum Sabko Bhula Dungi Me
Na Puchna Mera Haal Kabhi
Tum Sabko Rula Dungi Me
Na Sajana Koi Mahfil
Khudko Sada Ke Liye Sula Dungi Me
chahe rahu me lakh bandisho me
tumhe aasmaan khula dungi me......
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«Reply #3 on: January 07, 2011, 07:27:34 AM » |
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wawwwww Kasak--
iss peshkash me ek aisa dard jo bahut meethi chubhan deta hai.
aap dard bhare nagmo ki master ho .
ab tariff me mai kuch nahi kah sakta--
siply awesome !!!
bas dard ko zara sa kam kar lo aur khus raha karo yahi dua hai.
sukriya
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mat pukaar ab mujhe
sunna mai bhool gaya
awaaz de koi kabhi to , soch le
jeena mai bhool gaya
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sukriya
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*KasaK*....Dil Ki
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«Reply #4 on: January 07, 2011, 09:35:30 AM » |
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MG...aapke reply se mujhe aapki hi ek post yaad aagi......aapko yaad hai ya nahin pata nahin jo aapne uss ladki par hi likhi thi.... aapka reply dil ko sukun pahoncha gaya..sorry dard bhara likhnek liye par kabhi kabhi ho jata hai na....will try to write smthing romantic... aapke iss dil chhune wale linesk liye  |
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*KasaK*....Dil Ki
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«Reply #5 on: January 07, 2011, 09:37:15 AM » |
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wawwwww Kasak--
iss peshkash me ek aisa dard jo bahut meethi chubhan deta hai.
aap dard bhare nagmo ki master ho .
ab tariff me mai kuch nahi kah sakta--
siply awesome !!!
bas dard ko zara sa kam kar lo aur khus raha karo yahi dua hai.
sukriya
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mat pukaar ab mujhe
sunna mai bhool gaya
awaaz de koi kabhi to , soch le
jeena mai bhool gaya
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sukriya
KB thnx re ..tum bht feel k sath padhte ho post ko...and tumhari tareef aur behtar likhne me help karti hai...thnx re.....
tumhari lines bht achchi hain re.... |
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«Reply #6 on: January 07, 2011, 09:40:14 AM » |
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bht khoob anu di....
very very nice,,
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«Reply #7 on: January 07, 2011, 10:15:27 AM » |
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""
aa tere daaman me khushiyan bhar dun
bahut ji liye tum gamo ke saaye me
aa ab tere saare gam duur kar dun
jhar jhar girte mohabbat ke tere aansuo ko
laa ab apne palkon me bhar lun
na tadap aur na tadpa apne nanhe se dil ko
laa ab usse fir apni mohabbat se bhar dun
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kya K mam aap itne dard bhare achhe achhe likhte ho--
lekin bahut pyar bhare sachhe sachhe alfaz likhte ho.
good better best hai ji.
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thanx
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*KasaK*....Dil Ki
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«Reply #8 on: January 07, 2011, 10:27:36 AM » |
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thnx priya bht khoob anu di....
very very nice,,
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«Reply #9 on: January 07, 2011, 10:28:33 AM » |
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mastam likha hai nirala ji aapne...too good hai ji...
thnx k aapne pasand ki meri dard bhari koshish...
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«Reply #10 on: January 07, 2011, 11:05:55 AM » |
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«Reply #11 on: January 07, 2011, 12:26:10 PM » |
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Bahut khoob kasak ji aur sabhi sathi members ne khoob sath diya hai..
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«Reply #12 on: January 07, 2011, 07:52:23 PM » |
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Kasak Jee Aadaa!
Kuch gehre khayaaloN ewabastaa lagrahi hai aapki yeH kalaam
Dil ki baatoN ko lafzi jamaa pehnaane ki achchi koshish ki hai
Likhati rahiye...
Khush O aabaad rahiye....
Khuda Hafez... 
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«Reply #13 on: January 08, 2011, 08:10:10 AM » |
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arreeee ye re re kya re--
hahaha
wese agar mere comnt se tumhara utshah bardhan hota hai to mai always comnt dunga re !
wese bhi mujhe to achha likhna aata koni kam se kam tumha hausala to badha hi sakta hu re !
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kabhi jo dhuup khili badalon ko jhatak
khayal aaya-
duur kahi (jaipur) sanam ne chilman e ghunghat uthaya hoha
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khus rahiye
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«Reply #14 on: January 08, 2011, 06:20:47 PM » |
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har dard ki nayi baat hai kasak ji... bahut hi khubsurat likha hai aapne... dard ko naya dard mila... aur jawaab ko naye sawaal...
likhte rahiye bas aise hi aapka Intezar rehta hai... !
karke bayaan saare shikwe mujhse
wo humse khud ko juda kar gaya
main rok na saka usko jaate huye
wo mujhe kuch aise khamosh kar gaya... !
Intezar !
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