<>*Khwaab adhure*<>

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tearyeyed <>*Khwaab adhure*<> tearyeyed

Khwaab adhure kai meri palkon me chhipe rehte hain
Tute kaanch ki kirchan se aankhon me chubhte rehte hain

Reh jati hun main har raat ko bas tadapkar yunhi
Jab ye meri aankhon se bas ninden churate rehte hain

Sehmi si chupchap takti rehti hun main inhe kafi der tak
Jab savere ye mujhe bistar pe apne  bikhre hue milte hain

Kasmasate aur simatte aur kabhi mujhpar haste hue
Ye mere nainon se har roz ashk banke pighalte hain

 Sametna chahti hun jab main inhe hatheliyon me apni
Ye aur bhi zyada mere bistar ki chaadar se chipakte hain

Uthakar inhe main fir sahejkar rakhti hun apni dairy me
Ye har raat wahan se fir chupke se bhaag nikalte hain

Har raat ki tarah aaj bhi ye meri aanhon me bas jayenge
Dekhna hai kal ye kitne gehre meri palkon me chubhte hain….!!!


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«Reply #1 on: March 26, 2011, 05:03:50 PM »
suna tha raaton ko aksar dard bahut huaa karta hai...
aaj khuli aankh teri aahat par to mehsus bhi kar liya humne... !

bahut khubsurat Kasak ji... bahut din baad aaj yo par aaye hain aur aap ki ye Peshkash dekhi dil khush ho gaya... !

aap yunhi likhte rehiye... hum to kisi kaabil rahe nahin ab...

Intezar !
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«Reply #2 on: March 26, 2011, 05:07:59 PM »
boht boht boht acha likha hai kasak ji hats of u
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«Reply #3 on: March 26, 2011, 05:16:31 PM »
intear ji ye koi baat nahin hui.......mujhe aapse aise reply ki umeed nahin thi......jao kattiiiiiiiii......
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«Reply #4 on: March 26, 2011, 05:16:56 PM »
bht bht bht shukriya saahil ji aapka ise pasand karne ka....
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«Reply #5 on: March 26, 2011, 05:28:07 PM »
ADHOORE KHAWAB ANKHON SE NIKAL DIYE KARTEY HAIN,
JO TORH JAYE DIL KABHI TO KYUN USKE LIYE MARTEY HAIN
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«Reply #6 on: March 26, 2011, 05:40:30 PM »
Bahut Hi Sunder Likha Hai Anamika Ji
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«Reply #7 on: March 26, 2011, 05:41:01 PM »
sad5sad5sad5
mummy ji..ye sirf kavita hi hai na
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«Reply #8 on: March 26, 2011, 05:48:13 PM »
Roothi hai duniya mujhse, aur ab aap bhi kasak ji... khair tanha hun tanha hi sahi...

Intezar !

intear ji ye koi baat nahin hui.......mujhe aapse aise reply ki umeed nahin thi......jao kattiiiiiiiii......
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«Reply #9 on: March 27, 2011, 07:25:22 AM »
bht bht khoob anu di...
3rd one bht accha laga mujhe...
bht pahle kuch likha tha isi theme par..
adhura hai par share kar rahi hu...

Aankho me sari raat ghule..
tera sapna din or raat jale..

main tanhayi me jab baithu...
ye sapna meri aankho me pale..
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«Reply #10 on: March 27, 2011, 10:39:12 AM »


manzil-e-ishq aap ki shayari puri karne ki ye koshish............

adhura hai vo sapna bhale
use puri karne ki aas is dil me jale
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«Reply #11 on: March 27, 2011, 11:54:36 AM »
Anamika di aur Priya di,
bahaut bahaut khubsoorat likha hai..
Applause Applause
Khush rahiye..!
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«Reply #12 on: March 27, 2011, 11:57:00 AM »
suna tha raaton ko aksar dard bahut huaa karta hai...
aaj khuli aankh teri aahat par to mehsus bhi kar liya humne... !

hum to kisi kaabil rahe nahin ab...

Intezar !
Nahin nahin mere Intezar dost aisa na kaho..
Ap kitna acha likhte ho, yeh shayad apko bhi nahin pata..
Koshish karo kay kuch apna likha post karo..
Bahaut dinn se nahin parra apko..
Khush rahiye..!
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«Reply #13 on: March 27, 2011, 02:29:34 PM »
anamika Ji dard Me Doobi aapki Yeh Khubsooorat Rachna Dil Ko Chhoo gai.. Lafzon ka Chunaav aur Sajaawat is Rachna Ki sunderta ko aur badha rahe hain.. Bahut Khoooooooob.. Applause Applause



**~** Mann **~**
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«Reply #14 on: March 28, 2011, 05:20:12 AM »
bahot aachui peshkash he anamika ji.........as usal apka likha dil bhi rahat pahucha raha he....hmm sadyy theme he but it is good one........agar mumkin hua to reply dene ki koshish karunga ....

priya bahot aacha reply he yaar......u r improving day by day........it gives me pleasure.........keep it up dear......
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