|| Khwaab chhor aate hai.....Priya..||

by manzil-e-ishq on March 16, 2012, 07:59:43 AM
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Chalo na dur kahi khwaab chhor aate hai....
zindagi ke saare azaab chhor aate hai...

lagti hain adhuri jo zindagi ki kahaniya..
haqiqat se dur ye hisaab chhor aate hai..

saare afsaane mire, uske saath gaye..
jhoothi ulfato ki ye kitaab chhor aate hai..

kitna is dil ko satayegi ye tishangi..
dil se uska sab ruaab choor aate hai...
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soudagar
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«Reply #1 on: March 16, 2012, 08:21:31 AM »
very nice
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«Reply #2 on: March 16, 2012, 09:13:45 AM »
bahut khoob priyaaa
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«Reply #3 on: March 16, 2012, 09:36:02 AM »
bahut khoob...priya ji...
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«Reply #4 on: March 16, 2012, 09:43:03 AM »
Quote from: manzil-e-ishq on March 16, 2012, 07:59:43 AM
Chalo na dur kahi khwaab chhor aate hai....
zindagi ke saare azaab chhor aate hai...

lagti hain adhuri jo zindagi ki kahaniya..
haqiqat se dur ye hisaab chhor aate hai..

saare afsaane mire, uske saath gaye..
jhoothi ulfato ki ye kitaab chhor aate hai..

kitna is dil ko satayegi ye tishangi..
dil se uska sab ruaab choor aate hai...[/color
very nice Manzil ji

chalo naa aaj aasmaan ke sitaare tod laate hain
chamakk raha jo chaand usse bhi saath laate hain--

chupe hue hain jo falsafe kitaab-e-zindgi ke
ban jaaye khusnuma haqeeqat kuch aisi soch laate hain--
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no space sad5
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«Reply #5 on: March 16, 2012, 10:14:00 AM »
Priyaa Jee Aadaab!


Waa jee Waah kia baat hai ... Usual Smile
Bahut khoobsurat ashaar kaheN hai aapne.. Usual Smile
Sabhi ashaar behad khoob rahe jee.. Usual Smile


Humari dili daad O mubbarakbad kabul kijiye.. Usual Smile
Likhate rahiye.. aate rahiye..

Shaad O aabaad rahiye... Usual Smile
Khuda Hafez... Usual Smile
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«Reply #6 on: March 16, 2012, 10:55:25 AM »
bht bht khoob Manzil ji--
daad daad daad
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«Reply #7 on: March 16, 2012, 04:28:21 PM »
Priya ji bahut dino ke baad aayee par achhee peshkash laayee bahut bahut mubaarak ho
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«Reply #8 on: March 16, 2012, 08:26:48 PM »
 Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #9 on: March 16, 2012, 10:21:56 PM »
Bahaut bahaut khoob likha hai Priya di..
bahaut leh main aur maza aya parrne main..
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Khush rahiye..!
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«Reply #10 on: March 17, 2012, 03:28:19 AM »
bahut khub priyaji
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«Reply #11 on: March 17, 2012, 03:30:19 AM »
Quote from: manzil-e-ishq on March 16, 2012, 07:59:43 AM
Chalo na dur kahi khwaab chhor aate hai.... Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
zindagi ke saare azaab chhor aate hai...

lagti hain adhuri jo zindagi ki kahaniya.. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
haqiqat se dur ye hisaab chhor aate hai..

saare afsaane mire, uske saath gaye..
jhoothi ulfato ki ye kitaab chhor aate hai.. Thumbs UP Thumbs UP Thumbs UP

kitna is dil ko satayegi ye tishangi..
dil se uska sab ruaab choor aate hai... Applause Applause Applause

Bahut Khub Priya ji behtrien peskash.  Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #12 on: March 17, 2012, 02:47:55 PM »
bahut khubsurat kalam ke liye
dili daad aur mubarakbaad.Hasan
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«Reply #13 on: March 17, 2012, 05:11:09 PM »
Bahot khoobsurat poetry hai Priya ji. Excellent expression of sentiments. Daad peash hai.
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«Reply #14 on: March 18, 2012, 03:19:06 AM »
Bahut khob priya ji
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lagti hai adhoori jo jindgi ki kahaniyaan Applause Applause
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