|| Khwaab chhor aate hai.....Priya..||

by manzil-e-ishq on March 16, 2012, 07:59:43 AM
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«Reply #15 on: March 18, 2012, 05:57:58 AM »
Quote from: manzil-e-ishq on March 16, 2012, 07:59:43 AM
Chalo na dur kahi khwaab chhor aate hai....
zindagi ke saare azaab chhor aate hai...

lagti hain adhuri jo zindagi ki kahaniya..
haqiqat se dur ye hisaab chhor aate hai..

saare afsaane mire, uske saath gaye..
jhoothi ulfato ki ye kitaab chhor aate hai..

kitna is dil ko satayegi ye tishangi..
dil se uska sab ruaab choor aate hai...

good....!
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«Reply #16 on: March 29, 2012, 10:23:25 AM »
Quote from: soudagar on March 16, 2012, 08:21:31 AM
very nice
shukria saudagar ji...
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«Reply #17 on: March 29, 2012, 10:30:06 AM »
Quote from: AbhiTamrakar on March 16, 2012, 09:13:45 AM
bahut khoob priyaaa


thnx abhi...
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«Reply #18 on: March 29, 2012, 10:30:40 AM »
Quote from: dolly on March 16, 2012, 09:36:02 AM
bahut khoob...priya ji...
shukria dolly ji...
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«Reply #19 on: March 29, 2012, 10:31:31 AM »
Quote from: nirala on March 16, 2012, 09:43:03 AM
very nice Manzil ji

chalo naa aaj aasmaan ke sitaare tod laate hain
chamakk raha jo chaand usse bhi saath laate hain--

chupe hue hain jo falsafe kitaab-e-zindgi ke
ban jaaye khusnuma haqeeqat kuch aisi soch laate hain--
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no space sad5

thnx nirala ji... n vry nice lines....
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«Reply #20 on: March 29, 2012, 10:32:26 AM »
Quote from: ParwaaZ on March 16, 2012, 10:14:00 AM
Priyaa Jee Aadaab!


Waa jee Waah kia baat hai ... Usual Smile
Bahut khoobsurat ashaar kaheN hai aapne.. Usual Smile
Sabhi ashaar behad khoob rahe jee.. Usual Smile


Humari dili daad O mubbarakbad kabul kijiye.. Usual Smile
Likhate rahiye.. aate rahiye..

Shaad O aabaad rahiye... Usual Smile
Khuda Hafez... Usual Smile

pasandagi ka behad shukria parwaaz ji...
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«Reply #21 on: March 29, 2012, 10:33:11 AM »
Quote from: sarfira on March 16, 2012, 10:55:25 AM
bht bht khoob Manzil ji--
daad daad daad

thnx alot sf ji...
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«Reply #22 on: March 29, 2012, 10:52:53 AM »
Quote from: ~Hriday~ on March 16, 2012, 08:26:48 PM
Applause Applause Applause
shukria hriday ji... Usual Smile
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«Reply #23 on: March 29, 2012, 10:53:30 AM »
Quote from: -Rahim- on March 16, 2012, 10:21:56 PM
Bahaut bahaut khoob likha hai Priya di..
bahaut leh main aur maza aya parrne main..
Applause Applause Applause
Khush rahiye..!
thnx rahim..
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«Reply #24 on: March 29, 2012, 10:54:01 AM »
Quote from: mann.mann on March 17, 2012, 03:28:19 AM
bahut khub priyaji

shukria mann ji...
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«Reply #25 on: March 29, 2012, 10:55:09 AM »
Quote from: pankajwfs on March 17, 2012, 03:30:19 AM
Bahut Khub Priya ji behtrien peskash.  Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

shukria pankaj ji...
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«Reply #26 on: March 29, 2012, 10:55:39 AM »
Quote from: Shihab on March 17, 2012, 04:40:49 AM
Bahut Bahut Khub Manzil e Ishq Ji

Shad o Aabaad Rahiye...

Shihab
shukria shihab ji
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«Reply #27 on: March 29, 2012, 10:56:29 AM »
Quote from: F.H.SIDDIQUI on March 17, 2012, 02:47:55 PM
bahut khubsurat kalam ke liye
dili daad aur mubarakbaad.Hasan

pasandagi ka tahe dil se shukria hasan saheb...
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«Reply #28 on: March 29, 2012, 10:57:07 AM »
Quote from: Riyaz Ashna on March 17, 2012, 05:11:09 PM
Bahot khoobsurat poetry hai Priya ji. Excellent expression of sentiments. Daad peash hai.
thnx alot riyaz ji..
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«Reply #29 on: March 29, 2012, 10:57:30 AM »
Quote from: mkv on March 18, 2012, 03:19:06 AM
Bahut khob priya ji
Applause

lagti hai adhoori jo jindgi ki kahaniyaan Applause Applause

thnx alot mkv ji...
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