!!!! Khwaab Mere !!!!

by waheed_rose2004 on November 30, 2006, 06:36:18 PM
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Ghamon  ke  samunder   mein  doobe hain  khwaab mere
mere  ashkon  mein  chupe  hain  dard ke  raj  mere
sulag  raha hai  mere  seene mein dukhon  ka  dhuan
jal  rahe hain rafta  rafta  sab    khwaab  mere

jakham  jitne mile  woh  inaam  the  mere
ai  khuda  mujhko  bata de  gunaah mere
har gadhi meri aankhen num kyo rahti hai
rok de saans meri ya rok de aakhon ke sailaab mere...............
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«Reply #1 on: November 30, 2006, 06:44:54 PM »
wah wah badhiya hai motuuuuuuuuuuuuuu tongue3
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Bharat
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«Reply #2 on: December 01, 2006, 04:00:29 AM »
Quote from: "waheed_rose2004"
Ghamon  ke  samunder   mein  doobe hain  khwaab mere
mere  ashkon  mein  chupe  hain  dard ke  raj  mere
sulag  raha hai  mere  seene mein dukhon  ka  dhuan
jal  rahe hain rafta  rafta  sab    khwaab  mere

jakham  jitne mile  woh  inaam  the  mere
ai  khuda  mujhko  bata de  gunaah mere
har gadhi meri aankhen num kyo rahti hai
rok de saans meri ya rok de aakhon ke sailaab mere...............


Waheed,

Bohot hi achcha likha hai !!!
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Bharat
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«Reply #3 on: December 01, 2006, 04:02:40 AM »
Waheed,

yeh kuch likha hai "khwaab" par............
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ranjana
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«Reply #4 on: December 01, 2006, 06:52:07 AM »
saath tu thaa toh  kuch rang they mere khawaabo mein bhi
ab har baat mujhe badrang si nazar aati hai
tu chala gaya aankho mein mere kuch asq de ke
ab meri manzil rasta nahi dhoond paati hai

saja ke aankho mein tere pyaar ki roshni
chalana seekha thaa hamne  in adhare dard ke saayo mein
har kadam per aaj bhi na jaane kyu talash hai mujhe teri
yahan kab kisi ko apni pyaar ki duniya  mil paati hai!!
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waheed_rose2004
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«Reply #5 on: December 03, 2006, 05:53:51 PM »
shukriya    Husena......  Bharat.........   very  nice  Bharat  bhai.....Ranjana didi.........
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«Reply #6 on: December 03, 2006, 06:06:53 PM »
Quote from: "Bharat"
Waheed,

yeh kuch likha hai "khwaab" par............



awesome   Bharat   bhai........   bahot  acchi  lagi  mujhe....
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pinky
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«Reply #7 on: December 04, 2006, 07:09:42 PM »
Quote from: "waheed_rose2004"
Ghamon  ke  samunder   mein  doobe hain  khwaab mere
mere  ashkon  mein  chupe  hain  dard ke  raj  mere
sulag  raha hai  mere  seene mein dukhon  ka  dhuan
jal  rahe hain rafta  rafta  sab    khwaab  mere

jakham  jitne mile  woh  inaam  the  mere
ai  khuda  mujhko  bata de  gunaah mere
har gadhi meri aankhen num kyo rahti hai
rok de saans meri ya rok de aakhon ke sailaab mere...............


bahut achche words hain waheed..
very nice!!
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waheed_rose2004
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«Reply #8 on: December 04, 2006, 07:21:23 PM »
Shukriya  Pinky...........  :lol:
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pinky
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«Reply #9 on: December 04, 2006, 07:21:54 PM »
Khwab mere toote hain kuch iss tarah
Ke aankhon se behta lahu aaj bhi hai..
kaise sametoon inn tukdon ko hatheli mein
ke mere haathon mein uska haath aaj bhi hai..
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«Reply #10 on: December 04, 2006, 07:35:52 PM »
Quote from: "pinky"
Khwab mere toote hain kuch iss tarah
Ke aankhon se behta lahu aaj bhi hai..
kaise sametoon inn tukdon ko hatheli mein
ke mere haathon mein uska haath aaj bhi hai..


wonderful   Pinky.........moti... tongue3

Dekho Kaise  Toota Hai  Khwaab Hamara Tumhara
Jitne Armaan The Sab Bikhar Gaya Hamara Tumhara
Khwaab  To Jaise Mehman Ban Ke Aaya Tha Apne Aangan Mein
Ab To Shahil Ki Rait Per Kabhi Na Banega Makan Hamara Tumhara.....
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«Reply #11 on: December 15, 2006, 02:56:10 AM »
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Quote from: "Bharat"
Waheed,

yeh kuch likha hai "khwaab" par............



awesome   Bharat   bhai........   bahot  acchi  lagi  mujhe....


Waheed,

Shukriya........
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«Reply #12 on: December 15, 2006, 06:35:09 PM »
very nice waheed,pinky.
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«Reply #13 on: December 15, 2006, 06:56:53 PM »
Shuikriya Nidhi..........  :lol:   tumhein  dekhkar  bahot khusi  ho  rahi hai........moti tongue3
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