KHWAAB SO JAATE ... ZARRAA

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«Reply #15 on: October 20, 2013, 07:03:33 PM »

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Janaab Qalb ji .... ghaur karne ka pasand karne ka aur hauslafzaayee karne ka bahaut bahaut shukriya ...
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«Reply #16 on: October 20, 2013, 09:48:29 PM »
waah waah waah waah zarra ji waah bohut khub

Bahaut bahaut shukriya aap ka Saahill ji
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«Reply #17 on: October 20, 2013, 11:25:04 PM »
bahut khoob
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«Reply #18 on: October 21, 2013, 01:20:21 AM »
zulmat-e-shab meiN gharq ho jaate
khwaab marte naheeN haiN kho jaate


(zulmat-e-shab = darkness of night, gharq = drown)


chashm-e-bedaar kis qadar bekas
ashq beh jaate khwaab so jaate


(bekas = friendless, chashm-e-bedaar = sleepless eye)


kashti-e-aas behr-e-imkaaN meiN
jis ko girdaab-e-shaq dubo jaate


(behr = sea, imkaaN = possibilities, girdaab = whirlpool)


yooN to nik’le the soo-e-zeest qadam
khud-b-khud simt-e-daar ko jaate


(soo-e-zeest = in the direction of life, simt-e-daar = towards gallows)


ashqoN se kehkahe kiye taameer
log haNste haiN jab to ro jaate


(taameer = build)


daagh-e-daaman  khurach diye jitne
daagh-e-dil aur gehre ho jaate



mat gumaaN kar fasaane pe apne
kar daghaa tujh se kissa-go jaate


(kissa-go = story tellers)


aaNkheiN dekheiN n un ke kaan suneiN
bas zubaan aazmaaye wo jaate



jin ki rehmat se bhar gaya tha kabhi
aaj daaman wahee bhigo jaate


(rehmat = kindness)


yaar mil kar puraane kehte haiN
log bhi kya se kya haiN ho jaate



jitne mushtaaq utne hi naadim
un ke ghar jab naheeN hoN wo jaate


(mushtaaq = eager, naadim = ashamed)


chaaheiN jitne yahaaN rahe naa-shaad
sab ko keh kar ki khush raho jaate


(naa-shaad = unhappy)


haazireeN khud meiN mehv haiN “zarraa”
aisee mehfil se ab chalo jaate


(haazireeN = attendees, mehv = immersed)



ZARRAA
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outstanding ,sir still lengthy
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«Reply #19 on: October 21, 2013, 02:06:18 AM »
just a fabulous creation
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I would like to say my heartily thanks to u for mentioning meaning of hard wordsss...

Thank you Ssagar ji for appreciating .... and most welcome for the translations Usual Smile
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«Reply #20 on: October 21, 2013, 02:56:10 AM »
icon_salut icon_salut Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley :clapping:bhut umda bhut khub

Aap ka bahaut bahaut shukriya Rajan ji
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«Reply #21 on: October 21, 2013, 08:44:25 PM »
lajawab bimisaal bas waaaah hi waah  Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #22 on: October 22, 2013, 12:23:20 AM »
Aadaab Parwaaz sahab ..... aap ki mohabbat bhari aur pur khuloos daad dekh kar waqai dil bhar aaya ..... Aapki hauslafzaayee zarranawaazee aur aap ke anmol saath ka tah e dil se shukrguzaar hoon .... Dheron duaon ke saath .... Zarraa



Zarraa Sahaab Aadaab...!

Bahut khoob janab... Kia kahne aapke purzor khayaaloN ke bade khoob fankaar hai janab aap...

Is kafiye par itne saare ashaaroN ki soNch bhi nahi paaye the hum... behad umdaa khayaalaat zahir kiye haiN janab...

Is khoobsurat aur umdaa kalaam par humari dheroN dili daad O mubbarakbad kabul kijiye...

Likhate rahiye... bazm ko roshan karte rahiye...
Shaad O aabaad rahiye...

Khuda Hafez...

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«Reply #23 on: October 22, 2013, 01:55:41 AM »
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Waaaah waah aur sirf waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah zarra ji... bade hi mushkil qaafiye ko bakhoobi nibhaya hai aapne... aapko is kalaam ke liye dili daaaaaad qubool hoo...

Aqsh ji .... ghazal par itni baariki se ghaur farmaane ka shukriya .... aap ki daad ka bahaut shukrguzaar hoon
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«Reply #24 on: October 22, 2013, 03:15:09 AM »
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«Reply #25 on: October 22, 2013, 11:41:10 PM »
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waah waaah waah zarra jee kya kehne..

Zabardast peshkash rahi hai..

Har ek sher laajawab..

Dhero dhero daad..happy9

Nashwani ji ... pasand karne ka aap ka bahaut bahaut shukriya ...
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«Reply #26 on: October 23, 2013, 01:39:00 AM »
Hasan sahab .... aap ki pur khuloos o khirad daad se jis qadar hauslafzaayee hui hai us ka bayaan naheen kar sakta, bas aap ka baar baar shukriya adaa karta hoon....duaon ke saath....zarraa


kya kahneZarra saheb . Ghazal ka har sher lajawaab takhaayyulmpesh karta hai . kis kis ki tareef karoon . phir bhi ye ashaar meri nazar mein sab se achhe hai n.aap ko bahut mubarakbaad.

zulmat-e-shab me gharq ho jaate
khwab marte nahin hain kho jaate

kashti-e-aas behr-e-imkaaN meiN
jis ko girdaab-e-shaq dubo jaate


yooN to nik’le the soo-e-zeest qadam
khud-b-khud simt-e-daar ko jaate
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«Reply #27 on: October 23, 2013, 02:57:07 AM »
Pasand karne ka shukriya Mukesh ji !


zulmat-e-shab meiN gharq ho jaate
khwaab marte naheeN haiN kho jaate

chashm-e-bedaar kis qadar bekas
ashq beh jaate khwaab so jaate

kashti-e-aas behr-e-imkaaN meiN
jis ko girdaab-e-shaq dubo jaate

yooN to nik’le the soo-e-zeest qadam
khud-b-khud simt-e-daar ko jaate

daagh-e-daaman  khurach diye jitne
daagh-e-dil aur gehre ho jaate

haazireeN khud meiN mehv haiN “zarraa”
aisee mehfil se ab chalo jaate

Bahut khoob Zarra saheb
ye ashaar bahut khoob rahe


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«Reply #28 on: October 24, 2013, 03:29:19 AM »
Kya bat hai.............

Shukriya Ravindera ji
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«Reply #29 on: October 24, 2013, 03:30:27 AM »
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