Khwaab.....Bharam Ya Zurm...........

by Nikhaar on November 03, 2009, 10:36:10 AM
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Nikhaar
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Hum ruthege toh wo hamein manane aayege
Ye hamara dekha hua ek khwaab tha
Khwaab bhi aisa jo har pal dil k paas tha

Kabhi hum na bulaayege unko toh wo khud hamare paas aayege
Ye hamne dil mein apne paala ek bhram tha
 
Rehti hamesha fikr unki har roz unka haal puchte the
Jo na kar paaye ek roz baat unse,toh wo hamara haal puchege
Ye hamare khyaalon mein samaaya ek khyaal tha
 
Tutte sapno se,bikhre khyalon se,chhaye in bhramon se kya jane hum
Unki mohabbat hai daaman mein toh na tutege na bikhrege hum
Shayad ye sochna bhi hamara ek zurm tha

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cara
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«Reply #1 on: November 03, 2009, 11:11:54 AM »
Quote from: Nikhaar on November 03, 2009, 10:36:10 AM

Hum ruthege toh wo hamein manane aayege
Ye hamara dekha hua ek khwaab tha
Khwaab bhi aisa jo har pal dil k paas tha

Kabhi hum na bulaayege unko toh wo khud hamare paas aayege
Ye hamne dil mein apne paala ek bhram tha
 
Rehti hamesha fikr unki har roz unka haal puchte the
Jo na kar paaye ek roz baat unse,toh wo hamara haal puchege
Ye hamare khyaalon mein samaaya ek khyaal tha
 
Tutte sapno se,bikhre khyalon se,chhaye in bhramon se kya jane hum
Unki mohabbat hai daaman mein toh na tutege na bikhrege hum
Shayad ye sochna bhi hamara ek zurm tha


kya baat hai  nikhaar ji.....

TUM RUTHOGEN WO TUMHE MANANE AAYEGEN
YEH SOCHNA BHI TUMHARA GALAT THA

KABHI AAP NA BULAYE UNKO,WO TUMHARE PAAS AAYEGEN
AESI IQSHA BHI RAKHNA SAHI NAHIN THA

RAKHTE THEY AAP FIKAR HAMESHA UNKI,HAR ROZ AAP UNKA HAAL PUCHTE THEY
WO KABHI SAAMNE SE TUMHARA HAAL PUCHE,YEH UMEED RAKHNA BHI THEEK NAHIN THA

AAP TOH SIRF UNKE KHYALON MEIN THEY,
UNKE SAPNO MEIN THEY,
HAR WAQAT BHARAM MEIN RAHETE THEY AAP
AAP KO KYA PATA THA,
IK TARFA PYAAR KARTE THEY AAP....
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Talat
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«Reply #2 on: November 03, 2009, 11:23:15 AM »
Quote from: Nikhaar on November 03, 2009, 10:36:10 AM

Hum ruthege toh wo hamein manane aayege
Ye hamara dekha hua ek khwaab tha
Khwaab bhi aisa jo har pal dil k paas tha

Kabhi hum na bulaayege unko toh wo khud hamare paas aayege
Ye hamne dil mein apne paala ek bhram tha
 
Rehti hamesha fikr unki har roz unka haal puchte the
Jo na kar paaye ek roz baat unse,toh wo hamara haal puchege
Ye hamare khyaalon mein samaaya ek khyaal tha
 
Tutte sapno se,bikhre khyalon se,chhaye in bhramon se kya jane hum
Unki mohabbat hai daaman mein toh na tutege na bikhrege hum
Shayad ye sochna bhi hamara ek zurm tha



Bohot Khoob Pooja
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Talat
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«Reply #3 on: November 03, 2009, 11:23:38 AM »
Quote from: cara on November 03, 2009, 11:11:54 AM
kya baat hai  nikhaar ji.....

TUM RUTHOGEN WO TUMHE MANANE AAYEGEN
YEH SOCHNA BHI TUMHARA GALAT THA

KABHI AAP NA BULAYE UNKO,WO TUMHARE PAAS AAYEGEN
AESI IQSHA BHI RAKHNA SAHI NAHIN THA

RAKHTE THEY AAP FIKAR HAMESHA UNKI,HAR ROZ AAP UNKA HAAL PUCHTE THEY
WO KABHI SAAMNE SE TUMHARA HAAL PUCHE,YEH UMEED RAKHNA BHI THEEK NAHIN THA

AAP TOH SIRF UNKE KHYALON MEIN THEY,
UNKE SAPNO MEIN THEY,
HAR WAQAT BHARAM MEIN RAHETE THEY AAP
AAP KO KYA PATA THA,
IK TARFA PYAAR KARTE THEY AAP....




Nice reply Cara Ji
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DhavalRami
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«Reply #4 on: November 03, 2009, 11:24:32 AM »
NiKhaar jee:

Aadaab!

dard bhare ehsaas ko aapne apne koShiSh meN ba-Khoobee utaaraa haii! yuuNhi liKhate rahe.n aage bhee!

KhuSh rahe.n... apnaa Khayaal raKhe.n


duaao.n ke saath ijaazat

aapka

~ Dhaval
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DhavalRami
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«Reply #5 on: November 03, 2009, 11:26:02 AM »
Quote from: cara on November 03, 2009, 11:11:54 AM
kya baat hai  nikhaar ji.....

TUM RUTHOGEN WO TUMHE MANANE AAYEGEN
YEH SOCHNA BHI TUMHARA GALAT THA

KABHI AAP NA BULAYE UNKO,WO TUMHARE PAAS AAYEGEN
AESI IQSHA BHI RAKHNA SAHI NAHIN THA

RAKHTE THEY AAP FIKAR HAMESHA UNKI,HAR ROZ AAP UNKA HAAL PUCHTE THEY
WO KABHI SAAMNE SE TUMHARA HAAL PUCHE,YEH UMEED RAKHNA BHI THEEK NAHIN THA

AAP TOH SIRF UNKE KHYALON MEIN THEY,
UNKE SAPNO MEIN THEY,
HAR WAQAT BHARAM MEIN RAHETE THEY AAP
AAP KO KYA PATA THA,
IK TARFA PYAAR KARTE THEY AAP....




Cara jee:

aapne bhee bahot Khoob liKhaa hai!

KhuSh raheN

aapka

~ Dhaval
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Rishi Agarwal
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«Reply #6 on: November 03, 2009, 03:32:20 PM »
Nikhar Ji aapne bahut hi accha shabdo mein dardo ko sawara hai nice and excellent creation Applause Applause Applause
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Rishi Agarwal
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«Reply #7 on: November 03, 2009, 03:33:08 PM »
Cara Ji aapne bhi bahut acche shabdo mein likha hai nice creation Applause Applause Applause
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KOYAL46
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«Reply #8 on: November 03, 2009, 05:16:13 PM »
Wah-wah-wah kya khoob likha hai Nikhaar-di....
Aap k in lajawaab alfazon ne dil ko chhu liya PU-DI.... Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Aap itne din kahaan gaayab ho gayee thee Pooja-di ?

Yo tum bin soona-soona lagta tha mujh ko pu-di
Kahan-kahaan nahi dhunda tumhe o-pyari pyari-di

Tum ruthoge tou hum manaane aayenge nikhaar-di
Tere khawaab ko hakikat mai badal jayenge pu-di



Quote from: Nikhaar on November 03, 2009, 10:36:10 AM

Hum ruthege toh wo hamein manane aayege
Ye hamara dekha hua ek khwaab tha
Khwaab bhi aisa jo har pal dil k paas tha

Kabhi hum na bulaayege unko toh wo khud hamare paas aayege
Ye hamne dil mein apne paala ek bhram tha
 
Rehti hamesha fikr unki har roz unka haal puchte the
Jo na kar paaye ek roz baat unse,toh wo hamara haal puchege
Ye hamare khyaalon mein samaaya ek khyaal tha
 
Tutte sapno se,bikhre khyalon se,chhaye in bhramon se kya jane hum
Unki mohabbat hai daaman mein toh na tutege na bikhrege hum
Shayad ye sochna bhi hamara ek zurm tha


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«Reply #9 on: November 04, 2009, 04:36:30 AM »
Quote from: Nikhaar on November 03, 2009, 10:36:10 AM

Hum ruthege toh wo hamein manane aayege
Ye hamara dekha hua ek khwaab tha
Khwaab bhi aisa jo har pal dil k paas tha

Kabhi hum na bulaayege unko toh wo khud hamare paas aayege
Ye hamne dil mein apne paala ek bhram tha
 
Rehti hamesha fikr unki har roz unka haal puchte the
Jo na kar paaye ek roz baat unse,toh wo hamara haal puchege
Ye hamare khyaalon mein samaaya ek khyaal tha
 
Tutte sapno se,bikhre khyalon se,chhaye in bhramon se kya jane hum
Unki mohabbat hai daaman mein toh na tutege na bikhrege hum
Shayad ye sochna bhi hamara ek zurm tha



Bahut Khoob Pooja..

Bahut Acha Likha Hai Aapne.. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #10 on: November 04, 2009, 04:44:56 AM »
Wah bahut bahut khoob Nikhaar ji,Cara ji ,Koyal ji,very touching  marvelous creation.excellent,keep it up. icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #11 on: November 04, 2009, 01:16:00 PM »
Thanks Madhu-di...Aap hamesha pahunch jaati hain hosla badhane ko sab ka...I think you should get award for this...from Yoindia Admin...
Mere paas tou.best wishes hain...flowers bhi.. icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower

Quote from: madhuwesh on November 04, 2009, 04:44:56 AM
Wah bahut bahut khoob Nikhaar ji,Cara ji ,Koyal ji,very touching  marvelous creation.excellent,keep it up. icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #12 on: November 04, 2009, 01:21:34 PM »
Quote from: cara on November 03, 2009, 11:11:54 AM
kya baat hai  nikhaar ji.....

TUM RUTHOGEN WO TUMHE MANANE AAYEGEN
YEH SOCHNA BHI TUMHARA GALAT THA

KABHI AAP NA BULAYE UNKO,WO TUMHARE PAAS AAYEGEN
AESI IQSHA BHI RAKHNA SAHI NAHIN THA

RAKHTE THEY AAP FIKAR HAMESHA UNKI,HAR ROZ AAP UNKA HAAL PUCHTE THEY
WO KABHI SAAMNE SE TUMHARA HAAL PUCHE,YEH UMEED RAKHNA BHI THEEK NAHIN THA

AAP TOH SIRF UNKE KHYALON MEIN THEY,
UNKE SAPNO MEIN THEY,
HAR WAQAT BHARAM MEIN RAHETE THEY AAP
AAP KO KYA PATA THA,
IK TARFA PYAAR KARTE THEY AAP....



bahoot hi khooob Cara ji....hamesha ki tarah lajwaab....
bahut umda Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #13 on: November 04, 2009, 03:21:10 PM »
Quote from: Celmira on November 03, 2009, 11:23:15 AM
Bohot Khoob Pooja
Bahut bahut shukriya Celmira ji....aapne hamare likhe alfaazon ko padha aur saraha...
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«Reply #14 on: November 04, 2009, 03:27:06 PM »
Quote from: Dhaval on November 03, 2009, 11:24:32 AM
NiKhaar jee:

Aadaab!

dard bhare ehsaas ko aapne apne koShiSh meN ba-Khoobee utaaraa haii! yuuNhi liKhate rahe.n aage bhee!

KhuSh rahe.n... apnaa Khayaal raKhe.n


duaao.n ke saath ijaazat

aapka

~ Dhaval
bahut bhaut shukriya Dhval ji...aapne iss thread ko waqt diya
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