Khwaab.....Bharam Ya Zurm........... -Panna 2:Shayri-E-Dard

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«Reply #15 on: November 04, 2009, 03:45:43 PM »

Waah Kya baat hai Pooja .. Bahoot Khoob Dear !


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«Reply #16 on: November 04, 2009, 05:48:19 PM »

Quote from: KOYAL46 on November 03, 2009, 05:16:13 PM

Wah-wah-wah kya khoob likha hai Nikhaar-di....
Aap k in lajawaab alfazon ne dil ko chhu liya PU-DI.... Clapping Smiley

Aap itne din kahaan gaayab ho gayee thee Pooja-di ?

Yo tum bin soona-soona lagta tha mujh ko pu-di
Kahan-kahaan nahi dhunda tumhe o-pyari pyari-di

Tum ruthoge tou hum manaane aayenge nikhaar-di
Tere khawaab ko hakikat mai badal jayenge pu-di

Bahut bahut shukriya Dear koyal....

Hmmm....bahut pyara likha hai.....sooooo lovely....
bahut accha lga icon_flower

Tumse ruthkar kha jaayenge hum
Tere jaisa koi kha se laayenge hum

Bahut mushkil se milta hai tujh jaisa pyara saathi
Bhool kar tujhe,"Koyal" ki ku ku kha se sun paayege hum


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«Reply #17 on: November 04, 2009, 06:24:56 PM »

wah-wah nikhaar-di....Tariff karna tou koi aapse seekhe...
Badi dil ko Bharamaane wali lines likhi hai aapne.... Clapping Smiley

Bina bataaye he tum chali jaati ho n-jaane kahaan-kahaan
Milne ka waada mujhse,aur dhoondti ho wahaan n-jaane kise.. Winking

Hamne tou dosti ka jo waada kiya hai tujhse
Tu mile na mile, milne ko aayenge hum tujhse
Teri bagiya mai kuhu-kuhu k tarane gayenge hum
Tu bulaye ya nahi,teri khushiyon mai shamil ho jaayenge hum... angel11

Quote from: Nikhaar on November 04, 2009, 05:48:19 PM

Bahut bahut shukriya Dear koyal....

Hmmm....bahut pyara likha hai.....sooooo lovely....
bahut accha lga icon_flower

Tumse ruthkar kha jaayenge hum
Tere jaisa koi kha se laayenge hum

Bahut mushkil se milta hai tujh jaisa pyara saathi
Bhool kar tujhe,"Koyal" ki ku ku kha se sun paayege hum


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«Reply #18 on: November 05, 2009, 10:55:38 AM »

Quote from: Sophi on November 04, 2009, 03:45:43 PM

Waah Kya baat hai Pooja .. Bahoot Khoob Dear !

bahut bahut shukriya Sophi ji


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«Reply #19 on: November 05, 2009, 11:06:45 AM »

Quote from: Rishi Agarwal on November 03, 2009, 03:32:20 PM

Nikhar Ji aapne bahut hi accha shabdo mein dardo ko sawara hai nice and excellent creation

Quote from: khwaish on November 04, 2009, 04:36:30 AM

Bahut Khoob Pooja..

Bahut Acha Likha Hai Aapne..

Quote from: madhuwesh on November 04, 2009, 04:44:56 AM

Wah bahut bahut khoob Nikhaar ji,Cara ji ,Koyal ji,very touching marvelous creation.excellent,keep it up. icon_thumleft

Tahe dil se shukriya Rishi ji , Khwaish ji , Madhu di....
bahut bahut shukrana


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Re: Khwaab.....Bharam Ya Zurm...........

«Reply #20 on: November 05, 2009, 11:49:05 AM »

Mashallah Bohat KHoob Nikhaar=Pooja Ji,.


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«Reply #21 on: November 05, 2009, 01:48:49 PM »

Wah Kya Baat hai Pooja.. Behad Hi Lajawab alfaazon aur Jazzbaaton se saji Rachna Pesh Ki Hai.. Dard Ko Behad Khubsoorati se Kaagaz Par Utaara hai... Mujhe aapki Yeh rachna Behad Pasand aaye.. Bahut Khooooooooob..

Cara Ji, Koyal Ji.. aapne Bhi Lajawab likha hai..

**~** Mann **~**


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«Reply #22 on: November 05, 2009, 01:51:43 PM »

wah nikhaar ji kya baat hai bahut khub bahut hi umda Clapping Smiley


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«Reply #23 on: November 05, 2009, 01:53:00 PM »

Thanks a lot Maanji aapne meri lines ko maann diya...

Quote from: Mann on November 05, 2009, 01:48:49 PM


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«Reply #24 on: November 06, 2009, 02:05:08 AM »

Pooja dear and dear Koyal Bahut bahut khoob


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«Reply #25 on: November 06, 2009, 06:16:41 PM »

Thanks Roja-di....for encouraging words....


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«Reply #26 on: November 09, 2009, 08:41:54 AM »

bahut bahut bahut shukriya Ajeem ji ,Roja ji ,baadalji... notworthy


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«Reply #27 on: November 14, 2009, 10:31:20 AM »

Quote from: KOYAL46 on November 04, 2009, 06:24:56 PM

wah-wah nikhaar-di....Tariff karna tou koi aapse seekhe...
Badi dil ko Bharamaane wali lines likhi hai aapne.... Clapping Smiley

Bina bataaye he tum chali jaati ho n-jaane kahaan-kahaan
Milne ka waada mujhse,aur dhoondti ho wahaan n-jaane kise.. Winking

haaye haaye mai mar java gud kha ke.....
pyari pyari baatein likhna to mujhe tumse hi sikhna padega....

Wo smaa bhi kya khoob hoga
Jab milegi humse ye pyari bala
Pad jaayenga sab k muh par taala
Kholegi jab koyal apni baaton ka pitaara.... Winking

maine sahi kha na koyal....


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«Reply #28 on: November 15, 2009, 06:03:37 PM »

Tum kab galat hoti ho Nikaar-di......badi jadoo bhari hain aapki likhi lines...mujhe Bharam jaal mai.uljha rahi hain..pooja-di... Clapping Smiley

Ajab Gajab ka hoga wo smaa
Jab koyal se milegi poojaa
Kaun tab kya bolega koi dujaa
Gunjega kuhu kuhu se tera aangan pooja

Quote from: Nikhaar on November 14, 2009, 10:31:20 AM

maine sahi kha na koyal....


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«Reply #29 on: November 16, 2009, 04:00:25 PM »

Meethi meethi baatein karke tum hamein behlaati ho
Milne ka waada karke milne nahi aati ho
Tumhari raaz ki baat hum tumhe btaaye
Jitna pyara gaati ho utne hi pyaare sapne tum dikhati ho.....


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