~*~*~Khwab~*~*~:Shayri-E-Dard

pankshivam

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Nind na aayi raat bhar hame,
Vo jaane kaise chain se sote rahe....

Aankhon me sisakte khwabo ki kasam kya du,
Ye kya kam hai, ki mere khyal unke tasavur ko bhigote rahe...

Har baat pe unaki, dekha "Khwab" zindagi ka,
Vo bhi apni bekhudi me kitane arman sanjote rahe...

Aaya kayamat ka din bhi meri muhabbat me baad usake,
Jab karna chaha ijhare-e-muhabbat, vo seene se lipate aur gair ka naam le le kar rote rahe...

~Pank~


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Shikha12

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Re: ~*~*~Khwab~*~*~

«Reply #1 on: January 12, 2009, 04:56:00 AM »

Very Nicely Expressed... Applause


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megreatpoet

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Re: ~*~*~Khwab~*~*~

«Reply #2 on: January 12, 2009, 05:04:13 AM »

very nice very very nice


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cara

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Re: ~*~*~Khwab~*~*~

«Reply #3 on: January 12, 2009, 06:08:26 AM »

kya baat hai ...pankshivamji....

chata toh mein bhi bahut tha use,
wo bhi ghar ki bhahoon mein rote rahey,
na wo bansaki meri,na hum uske bangaye,
sirf ek duje ka khawab banke rahegaye.


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salil2002

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Re: ~*~*~Khwab~*~*~

«Reply #4 on: January 12, 2009, 06:51:18 AM »

hats off buddy ..........................lovely gr8 one man

thi woh mere saath aur saath bhi nahin thi
uski aankhon yeh raaz bayaan karti thi
woh mujhe haasil thi uska pyaar nahi
bas yeh soch kar hi dil main ek tees oothti thi


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pankshivam

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Re: ~*~*~Khwab~*~*~

«Reply #5 on: January 12, 2009, 01:27:12 PM »

Quote from: megreatpoet on January 12, 2009, 05:04:13 AM

very nice very very nice

Quote from: Mahiya on January 12, 2009, 04:56:00 AM

Very Nicely Expressed... Applause

Thanx Mahiyaji
Thanx Mr. Mgp


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pankshivam

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Re: ~*~*~Khwab~*~*~

«Reply #6 on: January 12, 2009, 01:34:27 PM »

Quote from: salil2002 on January 12, 2009, 06:51:18 AM

Shukria Salil Bhai Aapne kamal ka likha

Quote from: cara on January 12, 2009, 06:08:26 AM

kya baat hai ...pankshivamji....

chata toh mein bhi bahut tha use,
wo bhi ghar ki bhahoon mein rote rahey,
na wo bansaki meri,na hum uske bangaye,
sirf ek duje ka khawab banke rahegaye.

Shukriya Caraji
Bahoot khoob Likha aapne


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HumTum

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Re: ~*~*~Khwab~*~*~

«Reply #7 on: January 12, 2009, 02:31:41 PM »

Bahut Acche Shivam!

Apni muhhobat ka unse izhaar na kar sake
Woh bhi kuch aur der intezar na kar sake!

HumTum


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Roja

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Re: ~*~*~Khwab~*~*~

«Reply #8 on: January 12, 2009, 02:41:36 PM »

Bahut Khoob...Pankshivam ji.., Cara, Salil ji,...
and HumTum... ji..


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Pooja

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Re: ~*~*~Khwab~*~*~

«Reply #9 on: January 12, 2009, 04:47:30 PM »

Bahut Khoob Pank ji, Cara ji, Salil ji and HumTum ji.


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pankshivam

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Re: ~*~*~Khwab~*~*~

«Reply #10 on: January 12, 2009, 04:52:08 PM »

Thanx Humtumji
Thanx Rojaji
Shukriya Poojaji


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salil2002

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Re: ~*~*~Khwab~*~*~

«Reply #11 on: January 13, 2009, 10:07:25 AM »

thnks buddy .............roja di thnks for appreciating me


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jasbirsingh

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Re: ~*~*~Khwab~*~*~

«Reply #12 on: January 13, 2009, 10:30:59 AM »

Quote from: pankshivam on January 12, 2009, 04:45:03 AM

WAH PANK, VERY BEAUTIFULLY SAID

JASBIR SINGH


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pankshivam

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Re: ~*~*~Khwab~*~*~

«Reply #13 on: January 13, 2009, 11:05:18 AM »

Quote from: jasbirsingh on January 13, 2009, 10:30:59 AM

WAH PANK, VERY BEAUTIFULLY SAID

JASBIR SINGH

Shukriya Jasbir ji
Always Welcome Salil bhai


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