"Khwaish" Woh Tufaan Rakhta hai Dil Mein!!!!!! -Panna 2:Shayri-E-Dard

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«Reply #15 on: October 26, 2009, 10:03:46 AM »

Khawish JI sach kaha h aapne is poet me
dil ko chu rhi h aapki her bat aapne kitni
sadagi se apna dard byan kiya h sach
mein aapki ye poet bar bar padhi h humne Applause

Her lafj ko aapne dil se sawara hai
Sukh-dukh to her sahil ka kinara hai


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Re: "Khwaish" Woh Tufaan Rakhta hai Dil Mein!!!!!!

«Reply #16 on: October 26, 2009, 03:23:13 PM »

Quote from: Sophi on October 21, 2009, 02:40:26 AM

Waah Waah Kya baat Hai Bahoot Bahoot Khoob Khwaish ji..

Haan Zindgai kai baar aise raah kade kar deti hai.. jine laang kar jana ya usse nazar anaaz karna muskil hota hai hame aksar aise raah se rehguzar hona hi padta hai jo dil ko cheer kar rakh de... Aapke iss kalam mea jo dard hai bakoobi nazar aaya .. Bahoot Khoob!

Bahut bahut Shukriya Sophi..

Aur Sach kahaan Aapne..Chunotiyon Ka Saamna karna Hi Zindagi hai..

Kai Baar inn Mushkil Raahon Se har Insaan Ko Guzarna Padhta hai..


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Re: "Khwaish" Woh Tufaan Rakhta hai Dil Mein!!!!!!

«Reply #17 on: October 26, 2009, 03:31:55 PM »

Quote from: Roja on October 21, 2009, 03:01:54 AM

Itni shikayat kyu bhaiya? Itna dard?

Bahut accha dard bayan kiya hai bhaiya. God bless you dear

Roja Behna, Bebasi Aur Maauysi Mein Insaan bas Yehi To kar pata hai..jahan Zakhm Honge waha Par Shikayaton Ko Hona Bhi Laazmi hai..bas Dard Bayaan Naa Karna Chaahkar bhi Dard Bayaan Kar gaya..

Waheguru Aap Ko Bhi humesha Khush Rakhe..


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«Reply #18 on: October 31, 2009, 04:06:06 PM »

Quote from: khwaish on October 20, 2009, 06:14:10 PM

Bahut Koshish Kar Raha Tha Ke Ab Dard Mein kabhi Naa Likhu Par Kayi Bar Zindagi Kuch Aise Mod par Jaakar Insaan Ko Khada kar Deti Hai Ke Insaan Chaah Kar Bhi Kabhi Dard Aur Gham Se Nahi Ubhar Paata..Aaj Dil mein Bahut Dard Hai,Shayad Yeh Dard Lafzo Se Utar Jaaye To Dil Ko Kuch Aaraam Mile..

Zakhm Dil Ka Dil Mein Hi Woh Chupa Lega..
Apna Yahan Apna Bankar Hi Daga Dega...

Chot Gar Mehaz Jism Ko Pahunchti To Ilaaj Ho jaata..
Dil Pe Lagi Chot Ki koi Kya Dawa Dega...

Yahan Koi Kisi Ka Bhi Habeeb Nahi..
Kareeb Aakar Dost, Zakhm Ek Naya Dega...

Loota Hai Uss Shaks Ne Mujhe Apna Kehkar!!!
Main Kya Saza Doon Tujhe Eh Dost!!!
Jo Bhi Saza Hogi Woh Khuda Dega...

Mujhme Abhi Woh Insaaniyat Zinda Hai Eh Dost!!!
Dooba De Mujhe Beshak Gham Ke Samundar Mein!!
Phir Bhi "Khwaish" Tujhe Dua Dega...

"Khwaish" Bhi Seekh jaayega fark Karna Apne Aur Gairon mein!!!
Varna Apno Ki Shakl Rakhne Walo mein "Khwaish" Khud Ko Loota Dega...

Kabhi Naa Puchna Mujhse Meri Zindagi Ki Haqeeqat!!!
"Khwaish" Woh Tufaan Rakhta Hai Dil mein!!
Zubaan par Aaa jaaye To "Khwaish" Iss Mehfil Ko Rula Dega...

Yehi Apni Zindagi Ka Falsafa Hai Eh Dost!!!
Chaahe Kitne Bhi Gham Ho Zindagi mein Apni!!
"Khwaish" Phir Bhi Apne gham Par Muskura Dega...

"Khwaish" To Ek Parinde Ki Tarah Hai Jiska Koi Ek Mukaam Nahi!!!
Yaad Karlenge Kuch Log, Jab Ghazal Meri, Koi Kisi Mehfil Mein Suna Dega...

Zakhm Dil Ka Dil Mein Hi Woh Chupa Lega.....

~~~~~Khwaish~~~~~

bahut khooob Khwaish ji....dard ko khoob sameta hai aapne alfaazon mein....
Applause

khuch likhne ki koshish kar rahi hu....

Sachi ye baatein hai sachi ye kahani hai
Jo kabhi apna hi na hua uske liye aankho mein paani hai

Samjha humne apne ne dga diya hai humein
Kaun jaane begana tha wo jisne odhi apnepan ki odhni hai

Tujhe dubone waalon ko bhi deta hai jo tu dua
Phr kyu yu bebas h,kyu tanha teri zindgaani hai

Tere dil mein palne waale tufaan se hum anjaan nahi "khwaish"
Bas mat badhne de iss tufaan ko,
Mat de ghamon ko khushi se bada rutba,
tere ghum,aur iss tufaan se hamein pareshaani hai


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Re: "Khwaish" Woh Tufaan Rakhta hai Dil Mein!!!!!!

«Reply #19 on: November 04, 2009, 05:16:26 AM »

Quote from: cara on October 21, 2009, 05:56:09 AM

KYA BAAT HAI KHWAISH JI.....

ZAKHAM DIL KA DIL MEIN HI WOH CHUPA LEGA,
AURON KO KUSHIYAAN DEGA,
KHUD DARD DABA LEGA.

"KHAWISH" WOH TUFAAN RAKHTA HAI DIL MEIN,
DIL MEIN HI RAHE, "KHAWISH" MUSKARATA RAHEGA,
GAR BAHAR NIKAL JAAYE,TOH SAMUNDAR MEH AAG LAGA DEGA.

Bahut Bahut Shukriya Cara Ji..

Aur Aapne Bhi Khoob Saath Diya..

Bahut Khoob


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«Reply #20 on: November 05, 2009, 09:21:43 AM »

Quote from: khwaish on October 20, 2009, 06:14:10 PM

Bohot Khoob Khwaish Dost...Humesha ki tarah behtareen likha hai aapne...lafz dil ko chu jaate hain....Bohot Khoob Applause


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Re: "Khwaish" Woh Tufaan Rakhta hai Dil Mein!!!!!!

«Reply #21 on: November 07, 2009, 02:59:57 AM »

Quote from: k.shael on October 21, 2009, 06:50:43 AM

Wah Wah Wah!!! Behtreen Lafzo Ke Saath Behtreen Alfaaz Piroye Hai Aapne Bahut Hi Khoob Khawaish Ji..

Good Work.

Shally.

Thankyou Soooooooooo Much Shally!!!
Thanks A Lot For Reading And Appreciating


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Re: "Khwaish" Woh Tufaan Rakhta hai Dil Mein!!!!!!

«Reply #22 on: November 25, 2009, 05:28:00 PM »

Quote from: Shayara on October 21, 2009, 07:45:19 AM

Khwaish ji bohot dard bhari peshkash hai. Bohot khoob likha hai.

Bahut Bahut Shukriya Shayaraji..


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Re: "Khwaish" Woh Tufaan Rakhta hai Dil Mein!!!!!!

«Reply #23 on: November 28, 2009, 04:14:57 AM »

Quote from: Azeem on October 23, 2009, 05:23:32 PM

Dard Ko Bhi Mashallah, Kya KHoob Surt SE Aapne Bayaan Kiya Hai,.
Har Ashaar Har Misra, Mashallah Dil Choo Gaya,.
Behtareen Kalaam Hai Ye, Mashallah,.

Allah Kareem Aapke Dard Ko Halka Kare,.

Bahut Bahut Shukriya Azeem..

Aapne Iss Kalaam Ko Padha,Iske Jazbaat Ko samjha..Teh Dil Se Aapka Shukriya


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«Reply #24 on: November 28, 2009, 06:35:15 AM »

Quote from: khwaish on October 20, 2009, 06:14:10 PM

Bahut khoob Khwaish Ji
Dard ka sailaab baha di aap ne


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Re: "Khwaish" Woh Tufaan Rakhta hai Dil Mein!!!!!!

«Reply #25 on: January 16, 2010, 01:57:47 PM »

Quote from: Azeem on October 23, 2009, 05:33:04 PM

Apne Ghamon Se Main Mutmayeen Hoon, "Doston,.
Aakhir Jo Milaa Mujhe, Wo Mera Naseeb Tha,.

Usne Barbaad Karne Mein Koi Kasar Na Chordi,.
Dil Ko Wo Tord Gaya, Jo Dil Ke Bohat Kareeb Tha,.

Kisi Ko Milgaya Sab Kuch, Zara Se Waqt Mein,.
Main Umr Bhar Talaash Mein Tha, Main Kitna Bad-Naseeb Tha,.

-Azeem-

Bahut Bahut Khoob Azeem..

Bahut Hi Acha Likha Hai Aapne..


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«Reply #26 on: January 18, 2010, 07:54:48 PM »

Simply Mind Blowing.. kavita likhi hai apne khwaish ji... most of the time I like to post my fav. lines from your poetry.. but in this poem each and every poem is full of Emotions.. and very meningful... wow... Superbbbb... A very good creation!!!

Baki sabhi sathio ne bhi bahoot acha likha hai... Good work team!!!


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Re: "Khwaish" Woh Tufaan Rakhta hai Dil Mein!!!!!!

«Reply #27 on: January 22, 2010, 02:26:48 PM »

Quote from: Jhuki Palkein on October 24, 2009, 11:58:09 AM

Wah! Kya Khoob Likha Hai Aapne Khawahish Jee.
Some Really Painful And Touchy Words.

Allah Pak Aapki Har Mushqil Asaan Farmaye, Ameen!

Bahut bahut Shukriya Jhuki Palkein Ji..


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Re: "Khwaish" Woh Tufaan Rakhta hai Dil Mein!!!!!!

«Reply #28 on: January 22, 2010, 03:04:31 PM »

Quote from: {Angel} on October 25, 2009, 05:17:03 AM

Bahut bahut Khoobsurat likha hai aapne as usual, sorry for late reply, pehle padh liya tha par reply deneka mauka nai mila. kucch apne anubhav likh rahi hoon. hope pasand aayega.

teri har tamanna zakhmi hai meri nadaaniyon ke khanjar mein,
mere sapno ka aashiyana bhi jal raha hia shayad teri aahon mein,

khataon ke jungle mein yun chal pade the hum bedhadak,
teri hi ghutan ne qaid kar liya hia meri har saans ko seene mein...

Thanks A Million For Appreciating Angel!!!

Aur Aapne Bhi bahut Khoob Likha..

I Really Miss Your Work!!!


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Re: "Khwaish" Woh Tufaan Rakhta hai Dil Mein!!!!!!

«Reply #29 on: January 22, 2010, 03:36:10 PM »

Quote from: Rishi Agarwal on October 26, 2009, 10:03:46 AM

Khawish JI sach kaha h aapne is poet me
dil ko chu rhi h aapki her bat aapne kitni
sadagi se apna dard byan kiya h sach
mein aapki ye poet bar bar padhi h humne Applause

Her lafj ko aapne dil se sawara hai
Sukh-dukh to her sahil ka kinara hai

Kisi Ki Poetry Ko Koi Baar-Baar Padhe,Isse Zyada Kisi Shayar Ko kya Chahiye..Aapka Teh dil se Shukriya Rishi ji Jo Aapne Iss Poetry Ko Apna Waqt Diya..

Aur Rishi ji Aapne Ek sher Mein bahut Kuch Keh Diya..


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