"Khwaish" Woh Tufaan Rakhta hai Dil Mein!!!!!!

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«Reply #30 on: January 25, 2010, 02:37:52 PM »
Quote from: Nikhaar on October 31, 2009, 04:06:06 PM
bahut khooob Khwaish ji....dard ko khoob sameta hai aapne alfaazon mein....
 Applause Applause Applause Applause
khuch likhne ki koshish kar rahi hu....


Sachi ye baatein hai sachi ye kahani hai
Jo kabhi apna hi na hua uske liye aankho mein paani hai

Samjha humne apne ne dga diya hai humein
Kaun jaane begana tha wo jisne odhi apnepan ki odhni hai

Tujhe dubone waalon ko bhi deta hai jo tu dua
Phr kyu yu bebas h,kyu tanha teri zindgaani hai

Tere dil mein palne waale tufaan se hum anjaan nahi "khwaish"
Bas mat badhne de iss tufaan ko,
Mat de ghamon ko khushi se bada rutba,
tere ghum,aur iss tufaan se hamein pareshaani hai


Bahut Bahut Shukriya Pooja Ji..

Aur Aapne Bhi bahut Khoooob Likha Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Jald Hi kuch Likhunga.. Usual Smile
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«Reply #31 on: March 04, 2010, 02:19:59 PM »
Quote from: Celmira on November 05, 2009, 09:21:43 AM
Bohot Khoob Khwaish Dost...Humesha ki tarah behtareen likha hai aapne...lafz dil ko chu jaate hain....Bohot Khoob Applause Applause Applause

Teh dil Se Shukriya Talat Dost!!!!

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«Reply #32 on: March 04, 2010, 02:35:45 PM »
BAHUT KHOOB KHWAISH JI. Applause Applause Applause Applause icon_flower
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«Reply #33 on: March 10, 2010, 02:23:56 PM »
Quote from: Rajesh Harish on November 28, 2009, 06:35:15 AM
Bahut khoob Khwaish Ji
Dard ka sailaab baha di aap ne

Teh Dil Se Shukriya Rajeshji.. Usual Smile
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«Reply #34 on: March 11, 2010, 11:31:25 PM »
Khwahish jee...Ah kya kahoun sivae iske ke ur one of my fav writers...I treasure you and I learn from u...Likte rehna... Mujhe ek line bahaut achi lagi.. 'Ager zuban par ajaye toh Khwahish rula dega'...Wah Wah... Applause Applause
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«Reply #35 on: March 12, 2010, 02:07:48 PM »
khwaish ji. hain sabsev madhur wo geet jinhein hum dard ke sur mein gaate hain.
dard mein hi insaan jaan pataa hai sachhaiyon ko.
 Applause Applause Applause Applause bahut achha likha hai.
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«Reply #36 on: March 18, 2010, 08:27:28 AM »
Quote from: Rajesh Harish on November 28, 2009, 06:35:15 AM
Bahut khoob Khwaish Ji
Dard ka sailaab baha di aap ne

Bahut Bahut Shukriya Rajeshji.. Usual Smile
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«Reply #37 on: March 26, 2010, 07:30:43 AM »
Quote from: Pooja on January 18, 2010, 07:54:48 PM
Simply Mind Blowing.. kavita likhi hai apne khwaish ji... most of the time I like to post my fav. lines from your poetry.. but in this poem each and every poem is full of Emotions.. and very meningful... wow... Superbbbb... A very good creation!!!


Baki sabhi sathio ne bhi bahoot acha likha hai... Good work team!!!

Thankyou Soooooooooooooo Much Dear!!!

Aapke Comments Aa Jaaye Wahi Humare Liye Bahut Badi Baat Hai Pooja..Aapke Comments ka humesha se Intezaar Rehta Hai..

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«Reply #38 on: May 01, 2010, 07:11:09 AM »
Quote from: @kaash on January 22, 2010, 03:42:09 PM
Applause Applause Applause Applause
bahut hi behatreen likha hai Khwaish ji
bahut hi umda rachna hai dard ke ehsasaat lie hue
very nice

Teh Dil Se Shukriya Kaashji..

Aapne Padha Aur Saraha..bahut Bahut Shukriya icon_flower
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«Reply #39 on: May 01, 2010, 07:14:02 AM »
bahut dard se likha hai ye kavita aapne khwaish bhaiya. accha laga padkar  Thumbs UP
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«Reply #40 on: July 14, 2010, 08:18:07 AM »
Quote from: SURESH SANGWAN on March 04, 2010, 02:35:45 PM
BAHUT KHOOB KHWAISH JI. Applause Applause Applause Applause icon_flower

Teh Dil Se Shukriya Sureshji... icon_flower

bas Yuhi Humesha saath dete rahiyega.. Usual Smile
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«Reply #41 on: July 23, 2010, 09:26:37 AM »
Quote from: -Rahim- on March 11, 2010, 11:31:25 PM
Khwahish jee...Ah kya kahoun sivae iske ke ur one of my fav writers...I treasure you and I learn from u...Likte rehna... Mujhe ek line bahaut achi lagi.. 'Ager zuban par ajaye toh Khwahish rula dega'...Wah Wah... Applause Applause

Kya Kahoon Bhai rahim!!! Aapne bahut kuch keh diya, jiskme main bilkul bhi laayak nahi..

yeh aapka pyaar hai jo aap yeh kehte hai..bas yuhi saath dete rahiyega bhai..

Bahut bahut Shukriya Aapka!!! icon_flower
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«Reply #42 on: July 23, 2010, 12:46:13 PM »
"Khwaish" To Ek Parinde Ki Tarah Hai Jiska Koi Ek Mukaam Nahi!!!
Yaad Karlenge Kuch Log, Jab Ghazal Meri, Koi Kisi Mehfil Mein Suna Dega...

sach kaha aapne khwaish ji apne bare me..
jitna aapko apki gazlon aur kavitaon se jana hai wakai...aapke shabdon me tufan hai dil ko hila dene wala....

har shabd jaise sidhe dil me utar jata hai aur halchal macha deta hai...ek khamoshi hai jo tutna chahti hai lekin tut nahin pati......

dil se likhi ye gazal hum sanjo k rakhenge apne pas.....[/color]
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«Reply #43 on: May 10, 2011, 02:30:29 PM »
Khwaish dost,
Aj apki iss nazm ko dobara parra maine..
 tearyeyed tearyeyed
Uss waqt jab isse parra tha toh dil main hulchul hui thi
aur aj bhi isse parra toh dil dehek utha..
Aur wohi line 'kay Khwaish iss mehfil ko rula dega' dil main sama gayi..
Bahaut dher sari daad iss nazm kay liye..It will always be one of my fav
poems I have ever read..!
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Allah apke labon par, sada ek muskaan rakhe..Ameen..
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«Reply #44 on: May 12, 2011, 09:21:49 AM »
Quote from: -Rahim- on March 11, 2010, 11:31:25 PM
Khwahish jee...Ah kya kahoun sivae iske ke ur one of my fav writers...I treasure you and I learn from u...Likte rehna... Mujhe ek line bahaut achi lagi.. 'Ager zuban par ajaye toh Khwahish rula dega'...Wah Wah... Applause Applause

Bhai rahim, We All learn from each other...aur yeh to bas jazbaat hai aur kuch nahi..lafzon ka sahaara lekar inn jazbaaton ko hum sajaa lete hai..aapka tehhhhhhhh dillll se shukriya mere dost!!! icon_flower
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