kis raat ka khwaab ho tum... Intezar !

by Intezar on November 25, 2010, 08:25:39 PM
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kis raat ka khwaab ho tum jo mujhe sataate ho,
mujhe neend aaye to kitni sadiyaan gujar gayi,

ki maine tujhe chhu kar dekha bhi nahin ab tak phir,
kaise tere ehsaas ki chubhan mere dil me utar gayi,

ki maine khud ko samet rakha tha khud mein hi kahin
phir tere baahon me meri chahtein kaise bikhar gayi,

main to phir bhi naa ummeed ho chala hun zindagi se
achha hai ki kam se kam teri zindagi to sanwar gayi,

na do duaayein ki main ab mit chuka hun is jahaan se
jaate jaate unke chehre par 'Intezar' ki ek nazar gayi,

thodi der kar di tumne mujhe aakar neend se jagaane me
bas kuch der pehle hi is jism se meri rooh nikal kar gayi,


                                    Shukriya
                                    Intezar !
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«Reply #1 on: November 25, 2010, 11:00:38 PM »
Wah wah bahut baddiya Intezaar ji,heart touching creation,excellent,hats off icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #2 on: November 26, 2010, 01:31:07 AM »
Intezaar ji...superb Usual Smile
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«Reply #3 on: November 26, 2010, 11:19:17 AM »
left me almost in tears !!!! sidhe lagi hai dil pe.....
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«Reply #4 on: November 26, 2010, 02:26:06 PM »
bahaut acche intezaar ji. very intense thoughts.
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«Reply #5 on: November 30, 2010, 05:52:27 PM »
Shukriya Madhuwesh ji... jo ye aapke dil tak pahunchi aur aap ko pasand aayi...

Intezar !

Wah wah bahut baddiya Intezaar ji,heart touching creation,excellent,hats off icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #6 on: November 30, 2010, 05:53:28 PM »
Thanks Killbill ji... bahut bahut shukriya aapka...

Intezar !

Intezaar ji...superb Usual Smile

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«Reply #7 on: November 30, 2010, 06:03:20 PM »
Shukriya FARAWAYNUTS ji... Shukriya ! 
aapke dil tak pahuncha aur aapne ise dil se mehsoos kiya bahut bahut shukriya...

Intezar !

left me almost in tears !!!! sidhe lagi hai dil pe.....
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«Reply #8 on: November 30, 2010, 06:04:27 PM »
Zarra Ji Shukriya bahut bahut shukriya aapko achha laga...

Intezar !

bahaut acche intezaar ji. very intense thoughts.
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