*_^ Kis Tarah Aur Paas Aaon Main *_^

by Rancho-D-Idiot on September 15, 2010, 01:12:02 PM
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Kis tarah aur pass aaon main,
Sirf apna tumein banaaon main..

Paas ho kar bhi door hain itne,
Kis naam se tumein bulaaon main..

Raat din be qaraar rehta hoon,
Kaash, lamhe ka chain paaon main..

Dhoop hai tez, kahin chaaon nahin,
Abra ko, ab kahan se laaon main..

Ek lamhe bhoola nahin paata,
Khoob kehto ho, bhool jaaon main..
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ParwaaZ
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«Reply #1 on: September 15, 2010, 01:18:22 PM »
Rancho Jee Aadaab!

Kia baat hai janab... bahut achcha likha hai aapne...
Sabhi sher mast kahe hai daad aik behad achchi kaawish per dil se  daad hazir hai.....

Likhate rahiye....
Khush rahiye......
Khuda Hafez...... Usual Smile     

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«Reply #2 on: September 15, 2010, 01:23:36 PM »
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Kis tarah aur pass aaon main,
Sirf apna tumein banaaon main..

Paas ho kar bhi door hain itne,
Kis naam se tumein bulaaon main..

Raat din be qaraar rehta hoon,
Kaash, lamhe ka chain paaon main..

Dhoop hai tez, kahin chaaon nahin,
Abra ko, ab kahan se laaon main..

Ek lamhe bhoola nahin paata,
Khoob kehto ho, bhool jaaon main..
Rancho Ji.....aapki tehreer ke ehsaas bahut khoobsurat lage mujhe... accha likha hai aapne... aise hi likhte rahen aage bhi .. khush rahen...

duaaon ke saath...
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«Reply #3 on: September 15, 2010, 08:38:40 PM »
Bahaut khoob Rancho jee..!
Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #4 on: September 17, 2010, 09:05:16 AM »
Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

bahut khoob Rancho ji ... bahut achcha likha hai aapne...!!
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«Reply #5 on: September 22, 2010, 10:39:28 AM »
bohat khoob janaab...
bohat accha likha hai aapne...
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«Reply #6 on: September 22, 2010, 10:58:05 AM »
kya bat he baba rancho jiii aap to chha gaye ustad...

bahut khoob likha he apne..

dekhkar khushi hui ke aap likhne lage he wo bhi itna achha~ likhte rahiye~
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«Reply #7 on: September 22, 2010, 12:22:38 PM »
bahot bahot sukriya sabhi doston ka jo aapko hamara likhane ka nadaz pasand aaya iske liye Usual Smile
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