Kishton Mein Jo Loota Ja Raha Hai...:Shayri-E-Dard

Aman_rahi

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Mere Aziz doston.....

kaafi dinon baad ehal-e-bazm mein haazir hua hoon...kutch dil ka bayan le kar.....

ye tehreer aapki nazar kar raha hoon....

Jaane kya zehan mein toota jaa raha hai……
Ye dil humse jo rootha jaa raha hai……

Mauj-e-lahoo mein tar hoga vo parinda…..
Drakht ki pakad se jo choota jaa raha hai…..

Masoom sa ek aks dikha karta tha usme….
Aaina-e-dil aaj, jo toota jaa raha hai…..

Sambhaloon use, kaise kasoon apni oor…..
kyun daaman humse vo choota ja raha hai….

Jaan kya jurm kiya tha tune ae ^AMAN^…..
tujhe yun kishton mein jo loota jaa raha hai…..


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Kishton Mein Jo Loota Ja Raha Hai...

«Reply #1 on: July 26, 2005, 05:45:39 AM »

bohat dino baad aman ji Usual Smile

,par hamesha ki tarah bohat khoob,bohat hi acha likha hai aapne.


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Aman_rahi

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Kishton Mein Jo Loota Ja Raha Hai...

«Reply #2 on: July 28, 2005, 06:56:52 AM »

Quote from: "nidhi_yadein"

bohat dino baad aman ji Usual Smile

,par hamesha ki tarah bohat khoob,bohat hi acha likha hai aapne.

Thanks Nidhi......


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isha_verma7

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Kishton Mein Jo Loota Ja Raha Hai...

«Reply #3 on: July 28, 2005, 07:00:52 AM »

"aan kya jurm kiya tha tune ae ^AMAN^…..
tujhe yun kishton mein jo loota jaa raha hai"…..

bahut khoob.........good job!!!!!!!!


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Aman_rahi

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Kishton Mein Jo Loota Ja Raha Hai...

«Reply #4 on: July 28, 2005, 07:04:41 AM »

Shukriya Isha ji....

khush rahiye.....duwaaon ke saath izaazat.....


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vikas2210

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Re: Kishton Mein Jo Loota Ja Raha Hai...

«Reply #5 on: July 28, 2005, 01:47:36 PM »

Quote from: "Aman_rahi"

aman ji bahoot hi khuub likha hai

kishto mai lootne ka dard
hum ne bhi jana hai
jis.se bhi payar kia dokha uss.si se khaya hai.


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Meena

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Kishton Mein Jo Loota Ja Raha Hai...

«Reply #6 on: July 28, 2005, 04:46:44 PM »

wah wah aman ji...kafi dino baad aye hai aap...apne wohi andaz ke saath... bohot achi lagi apki poem !!! keep it up!!

:D


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Aman_rahi

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Kishton Mein Jo Loota Ja Raha Hai...

«Reply #7 on: July 29, 2005, 03:30:05 AM »

Vikas ji....

dhoka to wahin hota hai jahaan eitbaar hota hai......ise bina to zindagi bhi nahi kat.ti.......

shukirya....aapko apni post pe dekh khushi hui......

aapka apna....


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Aman_rahi

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Kishton Mein Jo Loota Ja Raha Hai...

«Reply #8 on: July 29, 2005, 03:35:22 AM »

Quote from: "Meena"

wah wah aman ji...kafi dino baad aye hai aap...apne wohi andaz ke saath... bohot achi lagi apki poem !!! keep it up!!

:D

Meena ji.....

Shukriya.....

darasal kutch masroof raha in dinon.....ab koshish yahi rahegi ki aata rahoon.....

khush rahiye....

aapka apna....


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