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Kuch dil farebo se huaa jaata hai zaar zaar aitbaar bhi yahaan
Ki phir koi ajnabi mila mujhe nazre jhukaye is baar bhi yahaan
Kisi gair kaa daaman thaam kar socha wo apna hoga shayad
lekin phir milaa hume wahi dard ka sehra is baar bhi yahaan
Ki koi to thaame meri baahein ki main bikhar raha hun toot kar
Lekin samet le mujhko khud me koi nahin hai is baar bhi yahaan
Kiski ummeed me be-zaar huaa jaata hai tu khud ko barbaad kiye
Milegi tujhe wahi nafarat wahi daga wahi fareb is baar bhi yahaan
Main kis kaabil tha jo apni palko par sazaaya tune khwaab ki tarah
Sazaa kar khwab jala diya tune har baar ki tarah is baar bhi yahaan
Ki shohrat ki tamanna liye roshan huye baihte hain jo is mehfil me
Sabhi ki khushi ke liye bana diya tamaasha mera is baar bhi yahaan
Ek na-muraad si hayaat meri jo, is jahaan ki deewaaron me qaid hai
Dhundli ho gayi hai ummeed is qaid se nikalne ki is baar bhi yahaan
In jismo.n ki duniya ko chhod kar socha, door huye fareb se hum to
Lekin wahi dhoka mila is lahad mein ‘Intezar’ ko is baar bhi yahaan !
Shukirya
Intezar !
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«Reply #1 on: December 02, 2010, 07:07:42 PM » |
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bht khubb intezar ji...bht mast likha hai aapne...jald hi iska reply dene ki koshish karungi
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«Reply #2 on: December 02, 2010, 07:48:11 PM » |
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nice one
Kuch dil farebo se huaa jaata hai zaar zaar aitbaar bhi yahaan
Ki phir koi ajnabi mila mujhe nazre jhukaye is baar bhi yahaan
Kisi gair kaa daaman thaam kar socha wo apna hoga shayad
lekin phir milaa hume wahi dard ka sehra is baar bhi yahaan
Ki koi to thaame meri baahein ki main bikhar raha hun toot kar
Lekin samet le mujhko khud me koi nahin hai is baar bhi yahaan
Kiski ummeed me be-zaar huaa jaata hai tu khud ko barbaad kiye
Milegi tujhe wahi nafarat wahi daga wahi fareb is baar bhi yahaan
Main kis kaabil tha jo apni palko par sazaaya tune khwaab ki tarah
Sazaa kar khwab jala diya tune har baar ki tarah is baar bhi yahaan
Ki shohrat ki tamanna liye roshan huye baihte hain jo is mehfil me
Sabhi ki khushi ke liye bana diya tamaasha mera is baar bhi yahaan
Ek na-muraad si hayaat meri jo, is jahaan ki deewaaron me qaid hai
Dhundli ho gayi hai ummeed is qaid se nikalne ki is baar bhi yahaan
In jismo.n ki duniya ko chhod kar socha, door huye fareb se hum to
Lekin wahi dhoka mila is lahad mein ‘Intezar’ ko is baar bhi yahaan !
Shukirya
Intezar !
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«Reply #3 on: December 02, 2010, 08:28:25 PM » |
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Shukriya... aur Intezar rahega Jawaab ka... Intezar ! bht khubb intezar ji...bht mast likha hai aapne...jald hi iska reply dene ki koshish karungi
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«Reply #4 on: December 02, 2010, 08:38:20 PM » |
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Shukriya Manoj ji bahut bahut shukriya... Intezar ! nice one
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«Reply #5 on: December 03, 2010, 06:08:13 AM » |
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«Reply #6 on: December 03, 2010, 06:43:30 AM » |
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bahut bahut umda lika he aapne..
dher ssaari daad intezar ji~
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«Reply #7 on: December 03, 2010, 11:34:52 AM » |
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Shukriya Poonam ji bahut bahut shukriya aap ka... aur aapki is nazar ka... ! Intezar ! |
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«Reply #8 on: December 03, 2010, 11:36:21 AM » |
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Abhi ji aapka bahut bahut shukriya... aap ne ik nazar hum par daali iskeliye bahut bahut shukriya... ! Intezar ! bahut bahut umda lika he aapne..
dher ssaari daad intezar ji~
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«Reply #9 on: December 03, 2010, 02:41:09 PM » |
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Intezaar ji...bahut achha likha aapne ...bhale meri samjh me nhi aya to kya hua.. uski fikra nt..samjh hi jaunga me kese bhi:)  very very sundar peshkash... *** |
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«Reply #10 on: December 03, 2010, 05:47:50 PM » |
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aap ki yahi saadgi to hume pasand hai KB ji... shukriya aapke khusbsurat comments ke liye... bas aise hi saath rehiye humesha... Intezar ! Intezaar ji...bahut achha likha aapne ...bhale meri samjh me nhi aya to kya hua.. uski fikra nt..samjh hi jaunga me kese bhi:) very very sundar peshkash... *** |
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«Reply #11 on: December 03, 2010, 07:12:21 PM » |
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Na Jaane kyun Yun lag raha hai jaise ye kalaam mere liye likha gaya ho./
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«Reply #12 on: December 03, 2010, 07:25:55 PM » |
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itni gehraayi se padhne ke liye shukriya Azeem ji... ki ye aap ke liye laga aapko... bahut bahut shukriya... Intezar ! Na Jaane kyun Yun lag raha hai jaise ye kalaam mere liye likha gaya ho./
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«Reply #13 on: December 06, 2010, 04:09:47 AM » |
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Good one intezaar ji
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«Reply #14 on: December 06, 2010, 06:43:41 PM » |
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shukrya bahut bahut shukriya... Rajest ji.. bas yun hi saath rehiye... fir ek baar shukriya aapka... Intezar ! Good one intezaar ji
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