Kisi K Naam (Jo Chood Gya Hai)

by fakharenaveed on June 21, 2005, 08:21:10 PM
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Aaj udhas hoon tow zamana mujhey phochney aya ..
Magar Jis pe tha sadiyon ka bharam woh nahi aya..

Woh tow ek khuwaab tha toot gaya bikhar gaya hai..
ajj udhas lamhon main phir kyon mujhey woh yaad aya..

Zindagi ki musrufiyat ke woh chund din jo guzar chuke hain..
na hi un pe urooj aya,aur na hi un pe zawaal aya...

Bhool na chahta hoon har lamha ,har waqt jo guzar gaya hai..
jitna bhi rokka woh waqt utna woh mere sath chala aya...

Guzra hua kal na tha mera, na hai mera aur na ho ga kabhi...
yeh mein janta hoon magar phir bhi na dil ko karaar aya..

woh waade teri woh kasmein woh sab yaad hain mujhe...
magar phir bhi kabhi tum ko mera dil na bhoola paya..

ana parast the tum tow khudaar tha main bhi
yeh rishta hi humare dermiyaan na raas aya..

us ki muskurahat tere liye ek fareb thi Naveed..
tu tha nadan, dil tera usse na samajh paya!




Faree
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amrita
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«Reply #1 on: June 22, 2005, 12:13:30 PM »
fareb tha hasi mein,aashiqi samjh baithe
mauth ko hi apni,zindagi samjh baithe
waqt ka mazaak tha ya badnaseebi humari
unki baton ko chahat samjh baithe

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fakharenaveed
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«Reply #2 on: June 22, 2005, 06:43:13 PM »
Woh Mile hame kahani bankar,
Dil me rahe pyar ki nishani bankar,
ham jinhe jagah dete hai aankho k andar,
Wo aksar nikal jate hai pani bankar."
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amrita
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«Reply #3 on: June 22, 2005, 07:42:33 PM »
Quote from: "fakharenaveed"
Woh Mile hame kahani bankar,
Dil me rahe pyar ki nishani bankar,
ham jinhe jagah dete hai aankho k andar,
Wo aksar nikal jate hai pani bankar."


chubhenge ge dil mein kaanta bankar
bahange khoon khanjar bankar

do ge agar jagah dil ke andar
bahenge tumhare khoonab bankaar..

i guess your not good....
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fakharenaveed
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«Reply #4 on: June 22, 2005, 07:50:45 PM »
I can`t get it..............................I guess ur Urdu Is not good..................................
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amrita
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«Reply #5 on: June 22, 2005, 08:11:27 PM »
Quote from: "fakharenaveed"
I can`t get it..............................I guess ur Urdu Is not good..................................


i dont copy and write na thats y my urdu is not good..sorry
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fakharenaveed
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«Reply #6 on: June 22, 2005, 08:15:21 PM »
Quote from: "amrita"
Quote from: "fakharenaveed"
Woh Mile hame kahani bankar,
Dil me rahe pyar ki nishani bankar,
ham jinhe jagah dete hai aankho k andar,
Wo aksar nikal jate hai pani bankar."


chubhenge ge dil mein kaanta bankar
bahange khoon khanjar bankar

do ge agar jagah dil ke andar
bahenge tumhare khoonab bankaar..

i guess your not good....


Thanx For Comments  




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chubhenge ge dil mein kaanta bankar
bahaenge khoon khanjar bankar

do ge agar jagah dil ke andar
bahenge tumhare khoon  ab bankaar..
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amrita
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«Reply #7 on: June 22, 2005, 08:27:00 PM »
Quote from: "fakharenaveed"
Quote from: "amrita"
Quote from: "fakharenaveed"
Woh Mile hame kahani bankar,
Dil me rahe pyar ki nishani bankar,
ham jinhe jagah dete hai aankho k andar,
Wo aksar nikal jate hai pani bankar."


chubhenge ge dil mein kaanta bankar
bahange khoon khanjar bankar

do ge agar jagah dil ke andar
bahenge tumhare khoonab bankaar..

i guess your not good....


Thanx For Comments  




Now


chubhenge ge dil mein kaanta bankar
bahaenge khoon khanjar bankar

do ge agar jagah dil ke andar
bahenge tumhare khoon  ab bankaar..


khoonab=khoon ke aansoon ..go learn urdu..
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fakharenaveed
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«Reply #8 on: June 22, 2005, 08:31:57 PM »
Plz No Comments for you.............................................. .....


For ur kindainformation i get 124/150Marks In Urdu............................In mY Matriculation Board exam............................................ And it was  2nd heigest score







Now No More Reply For You
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amrita
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«Reply #9 on: June 22, 2005, 08:39:25 PM »
Quote from: "fakharenaveed"
Plz No Comments for you.............................................. .....


For ur kindainformation i get 124/150Marks In Urdu............................In mY Matriculation Board exam............................................ And it was  2nd heigest score

so wht saari duniya ke words sikhe they kya school mein..

yes do not reply to any of my msgz and dont forget this is ur decision dont tell me next time i had stopped u from replyin..






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«Reply #10 on: June 23, 2005, 05:15:01 AM »
hahahahaa........good going u  both...............LOL....... :lol:
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fakharenaveed
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«Reply #11 on: June 23, 2005, 09:54:27 PM »
Jis K Naam Likh Rha hoon mein yahan pe
woh nzar nahin ayi hai woh kahan pe
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fakharenaveed
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«Reply #12 on: June 24, 2005, 07:05:22 PM »
Koi Jaye  Usay Ja Kr Mna Laye Mere Pas
Us K Bin Zindgi hai meri Nahin Mere pas
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«Reply #13 on: June 25, 2005, 03:08:31 AM »
Tum Ko Buhat Yad Krta hOOn mere sanam mein SubhO Shaam
Aab tu yeh baat har koi janta hai yahan meri jana sar e aam
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«Reply #14 on: June 25, 2005, 07:21:39 AM »
Quote from: "fakharenaveed"
Jis K Naam Likh Rha hoon mein yahan pe
woh nzar nahin ayi hai woh kahan pe


Faree.... too good ......

Nazre jhuka ke dekh ... dil me hai woh tere
aayi nahi nazar.......... yeh aur baat hai.......
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