kitne lachar hum hai

by suman59 on July 20, 2012, 02:09:32 PM
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«Reply #15 on: July 23, 2012, 09:28:49 AM »
Quote from: suman59 on July 20, 2012, 02:09:32 PM
Kitne bebas, kitne lachar hum hain
Apni hi nazer mein gunehgar hum hain

Kisi ka sahara kya banenge
Khud girti huyi diwar hum hain

Koyi kaam ka ab raha nahi
Beete huwe kal ka ishtehar hum hain

Kareeb na aana, dhoob jaoge
Sahil-e-sagar nahi majdhar hum hain

Aaina dekha toh hua ehsaas
Kitne bhure hai kitne bekar hum hain



WAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH WAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH KYAAAAAAAAAA KHUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUB Gazal likhi hai aapne Suman ji marvelous creation daad aur mubaarakbaad qabool kariye meri taraf se aur ek rau bhi..
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«Reply #16 on: July 23, 2012, 12:55:04 PM »
Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause  bahut sundar bahut bahut khoob likha hai aapne Suman ji... ek dum massstt zabardasttt...!!! too good likha hai ji aapne...!!!

sahaare ke liye nahi bas saath chalne ke liye saath maangaa hai,
zindagi guzaarne ke liye haathon me tumhaaraa haath maanga hai,

chot itne khaaye hain maine ki ab to choton ki aadat se ho gayi hai,
maine kisi marham ke roop me nahi bas yunhi tumharaa saath maanga hai,

kisne kaha ki tum kisi kaam ke nahi ho, khud se poochh ke dekho,
tumhaare aankhon me apna kal dekh ke tumhaaraa saath maanga hai,

aaina jhoot kehta hai jise shikayat hai ki tum me kuch baat nahi,
maine tumse zyaadaa tumhe pehchaan ke tumhaaraa saath maangaa hai...

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«Reply #17 on: July 24, 2012, 03:46:35 PM »
Quote from: reshmaa on July 20, 2012, 04:06:08 PM
ye sab  padh ke dekhie na meri to aankhen num hain sad5

sory reshma  sad7
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«Reply #18 on: July 24, 2012, 03:47:20 PM »
Quote from: Mohammad Touhid on July 20, 2012, 04:19:38 PM
wakai, bahut khoob... Usual Smile

 Applause Applause

tks jee
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«Reply #19 on: July 24, 2012, 03:50:39 PM »
Quote from: mkv on July 20, 2012, 04:27:04 PM
Bahut khoob Applause Applause

kinare aa ke bhee kinaara na milaa
ab doob jaane ko taiyaar hai hum

 Applause Applause
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«Reply #20 on: July 24, 2012, 03:51:36 PM »
Quote from: nandbahu on July 20, 2012, 05:01:04 PM
bahut achha likha hai suman ji, dhero dad

thank you nandbahu jee
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«Reply #21 on: July 24, 2012, 03:53:04 PM »
Quote from: khamosh_aawaaz on July 20, 2012, 07:27:24 PM

            NAAICE

thankkkkkkksssss KA
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«Reply #22 on: July 24, 2012, 03:54:43 PM »
Quote from: Sanjeev kash on July 21, 2012, 03:12:50 AM
Bahut Hi Sunder Likha Hai Suman Ji Mubarak Ho

TKS SANJEEV JEE
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«Reply #23 on: July 24, 2012, 03:56:10 PM »
Quote from: suman59 on July 20, 2012, 02:09:32 PM
Kitne bebas, kitne lachar hum hain
Apni hi nazer mein gunehgar hum hain

Kisi ka sahara kya banenge
Khud girti huyi diwar hum hain

Koyi kaam ka ab raha nahi
Beete huwe kal ka ishtehar hum hain

Kareeb na aana, dhoob jaoge
Sahil-e-sagar nahi majdhar hum hain

Aaina dekha toh hua ehsaas
Kitne bhure hai kitne bekar hum hain




Kaafi Gehre Khayalaat Hai Suman Ji..

Pehli Baar Padha Hai Aapko..Bahut Bahut Khooob!!!

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«Reply #24 on: July 24, 2012, 04:01:07 PM »
Quote from: khwaish on July 24, 2012, 03:56:10 PM

Kaafi Gehre Khayalaat Hai Suman Ji..

Pehli Baar Padha Hai Aapko..Bahut Bahut Khooob!!!

 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

khwaish jee aap ka likha dekhkar toh ham baar baar yahi sochte rahe ke na likhu .. kabhi hindi to eng mein galatiyan kar deti hu tongue3 aur dr.saini jee sudharte hai hame. aur nikaar aajayega lagta aap ko hame aisa hi saat diya to...

thanks khwaish jee.
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«Reply #25 on: July 24, 2012, 04:02:07 PM »
Quote from: Aarish on July 23, 2012, 02:55:25 AM
Bohut khoob Ma'm Bohut khoob ghazalkahi hai dheerrrooon Daaad qubool kijiye

tks beta
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«Reply #26 on: July 24, 2012, 04:03:43 PM »
Quote from: pankajwfs on July 23, 2012, 09:28:49 AM
WAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH WAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH KYAAAAAAAAAA KHUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUB Gazal likhi hai aapne Suman ji marvelous creation daad aur mubaarakbaad qabool kariye meri taraf se aur ek rau bhi..

bahut bahut shukriya pangaj jee. itni badi aapki tarif padkar toh dil garden garden hogaya hahaha
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«Reply #27 on: July 24, 2012, 04:04:30 PM »
Quote from: ~Hriday~ on July 23, 2012, 12:55:04 PM
Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause  bahut sundar bahut bahut khoob likha hai aapne Suman ji... ek dum massstt zabardasttt...!!! too good likha hai ji aapne...!!!

sahaare ke liye nahi bas saath chalne ke liye saath maangaa hai,
zindagi guzaarne ke liye haathon me tumhaaraa haath maanga hai,

chot itne khaaye hain maine ki ab to choton ki aadat se ho gayi hai,
maine kisi marham ke roop me nahi bas yunhi tumharaa saath maanga hai,

kisne kaha ki tum kisi kaam ke nahi ho, khud se poochh ke dekho,
tumhaare aankhon me apna kal dekh ke tumhaaraa saath maanga hai,

aaina jhoot kehta hai jise shikayat hai ki tum me kuch baat nahi,
maine tumse zyaadaa tumhe pehchaan ke tumhaaraa saath maangaa hai...

*****HRIDAY*****

thank you very much jee
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«Reply #28 on: July 24, 2012, 04:08:43 PM »
Quote from: suman59 on July 24, 2012, 04:01:07 PM
khwaish jee aap ka likha dekhkar toh ham baar baar yahi sochte rahe ke na likhu .. kabhi hindi to eng mein galatiyan kar deti hu tongue3 aur dr.saini jee sudharte hai hame. aur nikaar aajayega lagta aap ko hame aisa hi saat diya to...

thanks khwaish jee.


Haaye Aisa Naa Kahe Suman Ji Aap..Hum To Chaahenge Ke Aap Aur Khoobsurat,Aur Jaandaar Likhte Rahe Aur Aapne Bilkul Sahee Teacher Ko Chuuna Hai..Dr.saini Ji Se Ache Teacher Koi nahi..Haan Kabhi Unke Assistant Ki Zaroorat Ho to hum Haazir hai.. tongue3 tongue3

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«Reply #29 on: July 24, 2012, 04:14:27 PM »
bohut khub suman ji
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