Kitne sapne sajay the maine!!!

by ANKUR_CRAZY on March 05, 2007, 10:17:24 AM
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ANKUR_CRAZY
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Kitne sapne sajay the maine aaj sab bikher ke tut gaye
duniya to ham se ruthi thi aaj tum bhi hamse ruth gaye
kuch na mila tere pyar me hame jina dushvar ho gaya
sirf tujhe pane ke liye mujhse saathi mere sab chhut gaye

na mai kisi ka hu ab na koi mera hai
tere bina jeevan me chaya ghor andhera hai
bhul gaya hu subeh ki uss mithi tajgi ko
ki tere mujhe thukrane ke baad na hua mera savera hai

jalta tha mere dil me mohabbat ka diya
jisko hai tune bhujha diya
per phir bhi raushan karunga mai teri rahe
ki maine dil ko hi apne jala liya

muskurahat aati hai labo pe tere
to dil ki dhadkan badh jaati hai
teri ek jhalak paake ai sanam
ye duniya phir se haseen najar ati hai

apni inn bholi aadaon se tune
parwana hai mujhe bana diya
pur shama to tu bann na saki
aur mujhko hi tune jala diya

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Shikha12
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«Reply #1 on: March 05, 2007, 12:15:49 PM »
Ankur... This is really Amazing.... Very Nice One Usual Smile =D> =D>

But It fits more in Dard Section... I m moving this to "Shayari-E-Dard" forum....


Moved By: Shikha

Comments: Inappropriate Location... Suitable for "Shayari-e-Dard"
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paani
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«Reply #2 on: March 06, 2007, 04:15:25 AM »
good one ankur..
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badnaam_shayar
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«Reply #3 on: March 06, 2007, 04:31:19 AM »
Waah Lajawaab Ankur.....

Zindagi me Kayi baar mujhe ek ehsaas hota aya hai......
Kon hu me aakhir kiske liye mujhe yoon jeena Sikhaya hai.....

Ehsaan hai kiska jo ab talak hum bhar rahe hai Saansein......
Kaan lagata hu Deewaron se toh sunta hu apni hee Awaazein.....!!!!!
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Shikha12
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«Reply #4 on: March 06, 2007, 04:36:45 AM »
Kya baat hai Shayar ji... tongue3
Very fine lines, very deep and true meaning... =D> =D> =D>

Overall Good Job Gaurav... Usual Smile
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badnaam_shayar
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«Reply #5 on: March 06, 2007, 04:39:39 AM »
Thnx Shikha Usual Smile
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deepika_divya
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«Reply #6 on: March 06, 2007, 04:48:57 AM »
Superb Ankur & gaurav.. aap tho ho hi kamal...
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ranjana
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«Reply #7 on: March 06, 2007, 07:29:57 AM »
bahut khoob ankur ji and gaurav ji ...bahut hi accha likha hai aap dono ne ...
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ANKUR_CRAZY
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«Reply #8 on: March 06, 2007, 07:20:05 PM »
thanx shikha and sorry for inappropriate location.

thanx a lot pani ,gaurav,ranjana,divya.....
bahut accha laga ki aap logo ne meri poem like ki :D

tune bhi accha likha hai birather  :D
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waheed_rose2004
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«Reply #9 on: March 06, 2007, 07:38:12 PM »
bahot khoob Ankur........  Gaurav......
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Pooja
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«Reply #10 on: March 07, 2007, 02:03:15 AM »
Quote from: "ANKUR_CRAZY"

Kitne sapne sajay the maine aaj sab bikher ke tut gaye
duniya to ham se ruthi thi aaj tum bhi hamse ruth gaye
kuch na mila tere pyar me hame jina dushvar ho gaya
sirf tujhe pane ke liye mujhse saathi mere sab chhut gaye

na mai kisi ka hu ab na koi mera hai
tere bina jeevan me chaya ghor andhera hai
bhul gaya hu subeh ki uss mithi tajgi ko
ki tere mujhe thukrane ke baad na hua mera savera hai

jalta tha mere dil me mohabbat ka diya
jisko hai tune bhujha diya
per phir bhi raushan karunga mai teri rahe
ki maine dil ko hi apne jala liya

muskurahat aati hai labo pe tere
to dil ki dhadkan badh jaati hai
teri ek jhalak paake ai sanam
ye duniya phir se haseen najar ati hai

apni inn bholi aadaon se tune
parwana hai mujhe bana diya
pur shama to tu bann na saki
aur mujhko hi tune jala diya

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Wah kay abaat hai Ankur, bahoot hi acha likha hai.. very touching and emotional!!!
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ANKUR_CRAZY
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«Reply #11 on: March 07, 2007, 05:57:21 PM »
thanx a lot waheed and pooja.......

aap bina kuch likhe hi chali gaye.
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Pooja
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«Reply #12 on: March 07, 2007, 06:22:23 PM »
koshish ki hai....

Her ek sapna toota, mujse kaise mera rub rooth gaya
Na jaane waqat ke sath, kab kaise sab piche choot gaya

Ek deewangi teri, ek nasha sa tha mujh per chaya
Na jaane kab kaise kaise, alag alag raho ka mod hai ayya

Sooni raahein, sooni nigahein, soona yah jeevan ab
Payaar bhari rut main, kaise yah tanha rasta hai ayya
Wo naaj, wo nakhre, wo masat adayye
Rah gai abs yaansein, yaandon ka ab mosam hai ayya!!
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Ravi_Dave
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«Reply #13 on: March 08, 2007, 08:17:58 PM »
Brilliant AnkurJi!

Wel rytn PoojaJi!
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ANKUR_CRAZY
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«Reply #14 on: March 10, 2007, 05:24:50 PM »
Quote from: "Pooja"
koshish ki hai....

Her ek sapna toota, mujse kaise mera rub rooth gaya
Na jaane waqat ke sath, kab kaise sab piche choot gaya

Ek deewangi teri, ek nasha sa tha mujh per chaya
Na jaane kab kaise kaise, alag alag raho ka mod hai ayya

Sooni raahein, sooni nigahein, soona yah jeevan ab
Payaar bhari rut main, kaise yah tanha rasta hai ayya
Wo naaj, wo nakhre, wo masat adayye
Rah gai abs yaansein, yaandon ka ab mosam hai ayya!!



bahut hi accha hai pooja ji
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