Kmer kas leti hu........

by KOYAL46 on March 31, 2010, 02:07:24 PM
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Dard kam karne ko aansoo baha leti hu
Kismat pe apni main do-pal hass leti hu
Leni hai pariksha to le Ji-bhar k mere Bhagvaan
Lo Main bhi Jivan k sangraam me kmer kas leti hu
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«Reply #1 on: March 31, 2010, 03:37:05 PM »
Bahut pyara likha hai aapne Koyal ji... bahut khoob...!!! Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #2 on: March 31, 2010, 03:48:02 PM »
Wah kya baat hai    Koyal ji.......

Eh maalik jab khushi ko khush hokar sweekar kar lete hai
toh dard ko bhi ham kismat samajhkar sweekar karte hai
jab khushi ke aane se ham khush hojaate hai
toh dard ke aane se bhi ham nahi gabrate hai....
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«Reply #3 on: March 31, 2010, 04:01:01 PM »
Waah bahut hi khoob koyal.....superb  Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #4 on: March 31, 2010, 04:43:44 PM »
Bahut achha likha hai Koyal ji. Badi saadgi se dil ki baat kahi hai.
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«Reply #5 on: April 01, 2010, 08:03:42 AM »
Thanks a lot...Klaskar-ji

Quote from: klaskar on March 31, 2010, 03:37:05 PM
Bahut pyara likha hai aapne Koyal ji... bahut khoob...!!! Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #6 on: April 01, 2010, 08:05:07 AM »
Thanks Cara-ji.....your lines are also nice....


Quote from: cara on March 31, 2010, 03:48:02 PM
Wah kya baat hai    Koyal ji.......

Eh maalik jab khushi ko khush hokar sweekar kar lete hai
toh dard ko bhi ham kismat samajhkar sweekar karte hai
jab khushi ke aane se ham khush hojaate hai
toh dard ke aane se bhi ham nahi gabrate hai....
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«Reply #7 on: April 01, 2010, 08:07:08 AM »
Shukriya Nikhaar-di....aabhaar....


Quote from: Nikhaar on March 31, 2010, 04:01:01 PM
Waah bahut hi khoob koyal.....superb  Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #8 on: April 01, 2010, 08:08:51 AM »
Dhanaywaad Riyaz-bhai.....aapko lines achhi lagi...likhna safal huaa....

Quote from: riyaz106 on March 31, 2010, 04:43:44 PM
Bahut achha likha hai Koyal ji. Badi saadgi se dil ki baat kahi hai.
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«Reply #9 on: April 01, 2010, 08:18:11 AM »
Wah wah Koyal ji,very touching creation,bahut hi khoob.Cara ji aapne bhi kamaal ke likha. Hats off to you! Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #10 on: April 01, 2010, 08:42:31 AM »
Thanks Madhu-di.....

Quote from: madhuwesh on April 01, 2010, 08:18:11 AM
Wah wah Koyal ji,very touching creation,bahut hi khoob.Cara ji aapne bhi kamaal ke likha. Hats off to you! Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #11 on: April 01, 2010, 09:13:46 AM »
nice one koyal ji Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #12 on: April 01, 2010, 09:56:14 AM »
Thanks Bechain-ji....

Quote from: adil bechain on April 01, 2010, 09:13:46 AM
nice one koyal ji Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #13 on: April 01, 2010, 10:06:26 AM »
Bahut Khoob Koyalji..

Bahut Achi Soch ke Saath Likha Hai Aapne.. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #14 on: April 01, 2010, 10:12:53 AM »
Aapka bahoot bahoot shukriya Khwaish-ji....


Quote from: khwaish on April 01, 2010, 10:06:26 AM
Bahut Khoob Koyalji..

Bahut Achi Soch ke Saath Likha Hai Aapne.. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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