-----/// Koi bataa de humein ///----- Hriday

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aaj fir arse baad kalam ko haathon mein leke
kuch likhne baithaa main unko yaad karke
kore kaagaz par mujhe unki muskaan ko utaarnaa thaa
magar jaane kahaan se tap se ek boond paani kaa
shaayad meri aankhon se niklaa hogaa
mere likhe us kaagaz par aa giraa....

abhi to likhaa bhi nahi thaa kuch maine
bas unke ek naam ke siwaa
aur woh bereham boond paani kaa
mitaa gayaa unke naam ko us kaagaz se
haan thik usi tarhaa se jaise woh mitaa gaye the
hamaaraa naam kuch waqt pehle apni zindagi se...

naa, main yaad nahi kartaa unhe kabhi, magar
kabhi kabhi jab baaarish hoti hai mere shahar mein
jaane kahaan se yaad unki, aa hi jaati hai
aur kuch boond paani ke meri aankhon se
jaane kyun beh jaate hain...

kyaa rishtaa hai ab unse meraa, kisse poochhun
jo har rishtaa mujhse todke duur bahut duur chale gaye
itne duur ki main pahunch hi naa paaun wahaan tak
magar samjhaaun kaise mere is pagal dil ko main
jo ab bhi baatein kartaa rehtaa hai unki tasveer se....

baatein karte karte yunhi akele muskuraa detaa hoon
fir us tasveer ko kitaab ke panno mein chhipaa detaa hoon
kab tak, aakhir kab tak jude rahenge hum us se is tarhaa
kab tootegaa yeh bandhan unse meraa, koi bataa de humein...

koi to ho... jo yeh baat bata de humein...






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«Reply #1 on: May 23, 2015, 08:55:00 PM »
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bahut acchey. Very good.
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«Reply #2 on: May 24, 2015, 02:58:00 AM »
bahut khoobsurat .....mere ek dost kehta hai ki yaar hamei wo yaad nahin aate unke sang bitaaye lamhe aate hain..isliye lamho ko kisi aur ke saath jee lo..bas gham kam ho jayega ..mujhe to uski baat sahi lagi Usual Smile
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«Reply #3 on: May 24, 2015, 04:32:11 AM »
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yahi dastoor e zindagi hai  my dear frnd khushi pal do pal ki mahmaan hoti hai or GAM saari umar ke sathi,bohat dard bhare ehsaas waaahhh dheroooo daaaaddddd

dard o GAM ki raat thi na jaane kaisi pyaas thi,
saari umr nadaan e dil KO uske loutne ki  aas thi
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«Reply #4 on: May 24, 2015, 05:38:57 AM »
bahut khoob
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«Reply #5 on: May 24, 2015, 07:19:56 PM »
Bahut Umda.
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«Reply #6 on: June 17, 2015, 01:52:51 PM »
bahut bahut shukriyaaa Raaj ji...!!!

Quote from: alfaaz on May 23, 2015, 08:55:00 PM
Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #7 on: June 19, 2015, 04:27:14 AM »
bahut bahut shukriyaaa Akash ji....!!!


Quote from: Akash Basudev on May 24, 2015, 02:58:00 AM
bahut khoobsurat .....mere ek dost kehta hai ki yaar hamei wo yaad nahin aate unke sang bitaaye lamhe aate hain..isliye lamho ko kisi aur ke saath jee lo..bas gham kam ho jayega ..mujhe to uski baat sahi lagi Usual Smile
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«Reply #8 on: July 01, 2015, 03:27:44 PM »
bahut bahut shukriyaaa Jeet ji....!!!


Quote from: jeet jainam on May 24, 2015, 04:32:11 AM
Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

yahi dastoor e zindagi hai  my dear frnd khushi pal do pal ki mahmaan hoti hai or GAM saari umar ke sathi,bohat dard bhare ehsaas waaahhh dheroooo daaaaddddd

dard o GAM ki raat thi na jaane kaisi pyaas thi,
saari umr nadaan e dil KO uske loutne ki  aas thi
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«Reply #9 on: August 07, 2015, 07:01:47 PM »
bahut bahut shukriyaaa Nandbahu ji....!!!


Quote from: nandbahu on May 24, 2015, 05:38:57 AM
bahut khoob
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«Reply #10 on: August 07, 2015, 07:02:25 PM »
bahut bahut shukriyaaa Ravi ji....!!!


Quote from: Advo.RavinderaRavi on May 24, 2015, 07:19:56 PM
Bahut Umda.
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