KOI KHWAAB AAKHOH NEH SAJAYA HI NAHI

by jasbirsingh on November 10, 2008, 01:11:51 PM
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DIL KI GEHRAYI KOI SAMAJ PAYA HI NAHI
AB KOI KHWAAB AAKHOH NEH SAJAYE HI NAHI
KISI KOH HAMARI KAMI MEHSOOS HO
AISA KHUDA NEH HAMEY BANAYA HI NAHI




would surely like to complete this ghazal at some other time for sure.

Jasbir Singh
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«Reply #1 on: November 10, 2008, 03:23:42 PM »
Nice One Again Jasbir Bhai,.
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«Reply #2 on: November 10, 2008, 05:30:35 PM »
Quote from: jasbirsingh on November 10, 2008, 01:11:51 PM

DIL KI GEHRAYI KOI SAMAJ PAYA HI NAHI
AB KOI KHWAAB AAKHOH NEH SAJAYE HI NAHI
KISI KOH HAMARI KAMI MEHSOOS HO
AISA KHUDA NEH HAMEY BANAYA HI NAHI


would surely like to complete this ghazal at some other time for sure.

Jasbir Singh
hira_company@yahoo.com
oye jasbire kya baat hain yaar tussi to cha gaye ho yara oye tu bol to dono milke ghazal ko complete karte hain aag laga dege
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sjid hadayat
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«Reply #3 on: November 10, 2008, 05:57:34 PM »
Nice poetry, jeetay rahien  Thumbs UP

Sajid Hadayat
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«Reply #4 on: November 10, 2008, 06:33:40 PM »
bhoot koob Applause
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Just_Hate_Love
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«Reply #5 on: November 10, 2008, 09:40:05 PM »
...nice one Jasbir...good work...
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sjid hadayat
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«Reply #6 on: November 10, 2008, 10:14:43 PM »
Jasbir ji aap k sher mien gerah laga raha houn.. pasand ho tu isay apni gazal ka hisa bana lien...

Aik sir tha usy bacha la-ay hum
iss ko kisi der pay jhoka-ya he nahi
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«Reply #7 on: November 10, 2008, 11:20:29 PM »
...good one hadayat...
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«Reply #8 on: November 24, 2008, 08:36:08 PM »
Quote from: jasbirsingh on November 10, 2008, 01:11:51 PM

DIL KI GEHRAYI KOI SAMAJ PAYA HI NAHI
AB KOI KHWAAB AAKHOH NEH SAJAYE HI NAHI
KISI KOH HAMARI KAMI MEHSOOS HO
AISA KHUDA NEH HAMEY BANAYA HI NAHI




would surely like to complete this ghazal at some other time for sure.

Jasbir Singh
hira_company@yahoo.com

bahoot achi lines likhi hai jas, waiting for more here from you!!
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«Reply #9 on: November 25, 2008, 12:58:29 PM »
SAJID

WAH WAH WAH, KYA KHOOB KAHA , WAH


JASBIR SINGH
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«Reply #10 on: November 25, 2008, 01:00:21 PM »
tHANKS EVERYONE FOR YOUR RESPONSE.

WILL JUST TRY TO POUR MORE FEELINGS.


JASBIR SINGH
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pankshivam
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«Reply #11 on: November 25, 2008, 01:21:51 PM »
 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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jasbirsingh
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«Reply #12 on: November 25, 2008, 01:36:50 PM »
FRIENDS, HERE IS COMPLETE POETRY, I TRIED



DIL KI GEHRAYI KOI SAMAJ PAYA HI NAHI
AB KOI KHWAAB AAKHOH NEH SAJAYA HI NAHI
KISI KOH HAMARI KAMI MEHSOOS HO
AISA KHUDA NEH HAMEY BANAYA HI NAHI


ROSHNI HAMARI KOI DEKH PAYA HI NAHI
KAAM AAYE KISI KEY, KOI DEKH PAYA HI NAHI
KISI KOH HAMARI KAMI MEHSOOS HO
AISA KHUDA NEH HAMEY BANAYA HI NAHI


KHOOBSURAT DUNIYA DEKH PAYA HI NAHI
BINA AAP KEY KOI NAZAR AAYA HI NAHI
KISI KOH HAMARI KAMI MEHSOOS HO
AISA KHUDA NEH HAMEY BANAYA HI NAHI


YEH SIR KAHI JHUKAYA HI NAHI
DOR APNI KISI KOH DEH PAYA HI NAHI
KISI KOH HAMARI KAMI MEHSOOS HO
AISA KHUDA NEH HAMEY BANAYA HI NAHI


DIL KI GEHRAYI KOI SAMAJ PAYA HI NAHI
AB KOI KHWAAB AAKHOH NEH SAJAYE HI NAHI
KISI KOH HAMARI KAMI MEHSOOS HO
AISA KHUDA NEH HAMEY BANAYA HI NAHI
AISA KHUDA NEH HAMEY BANAYA HI NAHI



JASBIR SINGH
hira_company@yahoo.com
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«Reply #13 on: November 25, 2008, 03:23:36 PM »
Quote from: jasbirsingh on November 25, 2008, 12:58:29 PM
SAJID

WAH WAH WAH, KYA KHOOB KAHA , WAH


JASBIR SINGH
Oye jasbire sajid hadayat bol ya ghayel bol sirf sajid mat bol sajid bohat hoge duniya me har gali har nukkad pe milte hai par ghayel ek hi hain
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«Reply #14 on: November 25, 2008, 04:18:22 PM »
Again Good work Jas!!!!
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