~~"KOI MEHARBAA.N NA MILA"~~:Shayri-E-Dard

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k.shael

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Re: ~~"KOI MEHARBAA.N NA MILA"~~

«Reply #1 on: February 07, 2009, 07:09:46 AM »

Jo Sitaaroo.n ko Tutne na de jameen par kabhi,
Hame aisa koi aasmaa.n na mila...

Khoobsurat iss se bhad ke aur bhi honge jahaan me,
Hamne dekha jise waisa koi jahaa.n na mila...

Jaane kidhar liye jaa rahi hai zindagi,
Hame aab talak manjil ka nishaa.n na mila...

Lout kar aa to gaye hai chaman me lekin,
Wo wafadaar baagbaa.n na mila...

Hadse hi Hadse hote gaye zindagi me,
Safr-e-raah me koi pasbaa.n na mila...

Sar chupaane ke liye iss duniyaa.n me hame koi aashiyaa.n na mila,
Sab ke sab mile dushman bankar, Koi banke Meharbaa.n na mila...

Shally.


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sajid_ghayel

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Re: ~~"KOI MEHARBAA.N NA MILA"~~

«Reply #2 on: February 07, 2009, 07:22:48 AM »

So far i have read u this is something soooooooo different totally opposite of your style Good Work Shally very Good...


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fairy2633

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Re: ~~"KOI MEHARBAA.N NA MILA"~~

«Reply #3 on: February 07, 2009, 07:35:13 AM »

wow shally...very good... Applause


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salil2002

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Re: ~~"KOI MEHARBAA.N NA MILA"~~

«Reply #4 on: February 07, 2009, 07:39:13 AM »

Quote from: k.shael on February 07, 2009, 07:09:46 AM

Jo Sitaaroo.n ko Tutne na de jameen par kabhi,
Hame aisa koi aasmaa.n na mila...

Khoobsurat iss se bhad ke aur bhi honge jahaan me,
Hamne dekha jise waisa koi jahaa.n na mila...

Jaane kidhar liye jaa rahi hai zindagi,
Hame aab talak manjil ka nishaa.n na mila...

Lout kar aa to gaye hai chaman me lekin,
Wo wafadaar baagbaa.n na mila...

Hadse hi Hadse hote gaye zindagi me,
Safr0e-raah me koi pasbaa.n na mila...

Sar chupaane ke liye iss duniyaa.n me hame koi aashiyaa.n na mila,
Sab ke sab mile dushman bankar, Koi banke Meharbaa.n na mila...

Shally.

shael gud one........is qadar naummeedi.....wakai khoobsurat lfzon mein dard bayaan kiya hai

bayaan kijiye aise jaise dard na ho ek sher ho
yeh kehkar woh mere dard ko aur mujhe samjhate rahe
hum bhi le kar beith gaye dard apne seene mein
aur raat bhar log Waah-Waah lutaate rahe


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abdulqadeer

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Re: ~~"KOI MEHARBAA.N NA MILA"~~

«Reply #5 on: February 07, 2009, 07:43:13 AM »

Quote from: k.shael on February 07, 2009, 07:09:46 AM

Good work shally i can see a big changes in your shayari , keep it and try to continue with good things !!

Qadeer Toopchi


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Pooja

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Re: ~~"KOI MEHARBAA.N NA MILA"~~

«Reply #6 on: February 07, 2009, 07:45:01 AM »

bahoot khoob shally!! Good work!!


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Roja

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Re: ~~"KOI MEHARBAA.N NA MILA"~~

«Reply #7 on: February 07, 2009, 07:53:40 AM »

Bahut accha likha hai shally dear... nice design


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abdulqadeer

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Re: ~~"KOI MEHARBAA.N NA MILA"~~

«Reply #8 on: February 07, 2009, 07:54:31 AM »

Quote from: k.shael on February 07, 2009, 07:09:46 AM

Ghazal ka maqta jaan lewa hai shally ji !! lagta hai apne ye ghazal likhte waqath khud ko khud se ruba kiya hai !!

Qadeer Toopchi


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Anky

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Re: ~~"KOI MEHARBAA.N NA MILA"~~

«Reply #9 on: February 07, 2009, 09:47:14 AM »

Poetry is superbbbb shally but to be frankly fonts samjh nahi arahe try to use diff fonts play with it


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Roja

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Re: ~~"KOI MEHARBAA.N NA MILA"~~

«Reply #10 on: February 07, 2009, 03:42:29 PM »

Quote from: k.shael on February 07, 2009, 07:09:46 AM

Wah Shally, bahut khoob likha hai tumne


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tara

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«Reply #11 on: February 07, 2009, 06:47:14 PM »

Bahot achha shally aor shihab.


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pankshivam

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Re: ~~"KOI MEHARBAA.N NA MILA"~~

«Reply #12 on: February 09, 2009, 09:08:21 AM »

Quote from: k.shael on February 07, 2009, 07:09:46 AM

Bahoot Khoob Likha Shallyji
Very Nice Work

Quote from: Shihab on February 07, 2009, 08:19:53 AM

Har Kisi Pe Khushiyon Ki Barsaat Nahi Hoti
Dil Ki Duniya Mein Aksar Raahat Nahi Hoti.

Gul.e.Tan Par Chahe Kitne Bhi Libas Sajalo
Bin HumDum Ke Dil Ki Hasrat Puri Nahi Hoti.

Chahe Kitna Hi Udta Phirta Rahe Baagh Baagh
Khusbooh Har Bhanwre Ki Kismat Mein Nahi Hoti.

Mere Dost In BeReham Logon Se Koi Umeed Na Kar
Ye Duniya Aashiqon Pe Kabhi Meharbaan Nahi Hoti

Bahoot Khoob Shihab Sahab