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AbhiTamrakar

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ye panktiyan yun to mene kaafi waqt pehle likhi thi par aaj bhi jab padhta hun to lagta he shayad us din mujhpar apne ilm se jyada sach haaawi thaaa~

koi mujhko yad karega kyun
bagon me foolon me bhavron jo ghooma karte he
kaliyo ke deewane he sab bhavron ko poochhega kyun

shama or parwane ki kahani to sab kehete he
shama ke sab kayal he parwano ka dard dikhega kyu

tote or mena ki mohabbat ke kisse ab aam huye
mena ki boli bhati he tote ka naam koi lega kyun

wo karo jo sab karte he alag karne me kya rakha he
kal shabd tere feeke pad jayege "Abhi" to koi tujhko yad karega kyun


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KOYAL46

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Re: koi mujhko yad karega kyun~

«Reply #1 on: September 29, 2010, 11:31:31 AM »

Yaar Abhi tum ye poem nahi bhi likhte tou bhi hum tumko yaad karte.....Waise achha likha hai.... Applause

Quote from: AbhiTamrakar on September 29, 2010, 11:14:17 AM

ye panktiyan yun to mene kaafi waqt pehle likhi thi par aaj bhi jab padhta hun to lagta he shayad us din mujhpar apne ilm se jyada sach haaawi thaaa~


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AbhiTamrakar

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Re: koi mujhko yad karega kyun~

«Reply #2 on: September 29, 2010, 11:37:07 AM »

chalo is bat ke liye shukriyaaa apka`


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ParwaaZ

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Re: koi mujhko yad karega kyun~

«Reply #3 on: September 29, 2010, 02:26:07 PM »

Abhi jee Aadaab!

Jee sachi kaha aapne shayad yehi sachai hai....
Hum bhi aapki baat se 100% ittefak rakhte hai...

Isliye aapki is khubsurat kalaam per dil se daad hazir hai janab.....

Likhate rahiye.....
Khush rahiye......
Khuda hafez........


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neelgold

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Re: koi mujhko yad karega kyun~

«Reply #4 on: September 29, 2010, 10:33:44 PM »

Abhi ............Bilcul saach .............

Bhut khoob

sahi kaha hai aapne ..... koi kissi ko yaad nahi karta...


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_Vicky_

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Re: koi mujhko yad karega kyun~

«Reply #5 on: September 30, 2010, 05:19:39 AM »

Aapki Likhi Yeh Panktiyaan Waqai Behad Khubsoorat hain Abhi Ji.. Kamaal ek Ehasaas Likhe hain aapne.. Bahut Hi Pyaari aur Lajawab Peshkash hai..

Daad Kubool Karen..

**~** Mann **~**


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AbhiTamrakar

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Re: koi mujhko yad karega kyun~

«Reply #6 on: September 30, 2010, 05:39:07 AM »

Quote from: ParwaaZ on September 29, 2010, 02:26:07 PM

shukriya parwaz sahab...


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AbhiTamrakar

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Re: koi mujhko yad karega kyun~

«Reply #7 on: September 30, 2010, 05:40:50 AM »

Quote from: neelgold on September 29, 2010, 10:33:44 PM

Abhi ............Bilcul saach .............

Bhut khoob

sahi kaha hai aapne ..... koi kissi ko yaad nahi karta...

bluee sonaa jiii namaskar.....kiddin...
haosla afjaii ke liye apka shukriya~


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AbhiTamrakar

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Re: koi mujhko yad karega kyun~

«Reply #8 on: September 30, 2010, 05:42:24 AM »

Quote from: Mann on September 30, 2010, 05:19:39 AM

Aapki Likhi Yeh Panktiyaan Waqai Behad Khubsoorat hain Abhi Ji.. Kamaal ek Ehasaas Likhe hain aapne.. Bahut Hi Pyaari aur Lajawab Peshkash hai..

Daad Kubool Karen..

**~** Mann **~**

mann sahab ye ehsaas hi to jo jindagi ko jindagi kehen layak banate hee....

apko pasand aaya ..achha laga..shukriya hosla badhane ke liye~


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