-----/// Koi rehtaa thaa us kamre mein ///----- Hriday

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deewaar  par   tangi   puraani   ghadi  ruk  gayi  hai
har   subah   ab koi  bhi  jagaataa nahi  hai  humein
panchhiyon  ki  aawaaz  kaano  tak  pahunchti nahi
naa hi doodhwaalaa darwaazaa khatkhataataa hai

akhbaar  kaa  dher  jam  gayaa hai  kamre ke aage
khidki  ke  sheeshon  par  dhul  ki   moti  parat  hai
suraj   bhi   har   subah   nikalkar  doob  jaataa  hai
chaand  ki  roshni   pahuchti   nahi mere kamre tak

ab  achcha   nahi  lagtaa   humein   milnaa  kisi  se
khush  hain hum apne  is band kamre main tanhaa
logo ne bhi shaayad bhulaa  diyaa   hogaa humein
tabhi  kehte  hain  'koi rehta  thaa us kamre mein'






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«Reply #1 on: June 12, 2016, 05:57:30 AM »
Bahot khooob, waaah waah  Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #2 on: June 12, 2016, 10:26:06 AM »
WWWWAAAAHHHHHH

dil chhoo lene waale ehsaasaat aur un ka bayaan

dheron daad Hriday ji
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«Reply #3 on: June 12, 2016, 06:12:08 PM »
Very nice Hriday ji

Ajj bhi kissi ke hasne ki awaaz aa rahi hai.. yeh bhrum hota hai
Koi khidki se parda uthakar dekhega yon lagta hai
Jise dekhkar mera dil chain nahi payega raat bhar

Uss shaqs ki har baat mujhe yaad aati hai
Iss kamre ko kabhi chodkar nahi jaonga jo kehta tha 
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«Reply #4 on: June 12, 2016, 08:18:34 PM »
waah waah bahut khoob achhaa ehsaas hai.
 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #5 on: June 15, 2016, 05:56:20 AM »
bahut bahut shukriyaaa Rustum ji.....!!!!

Quote from: Rustum Rangila on June 12, 2016, 05:57:30 AM
Bahot khooob, waaah waah  Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #6 on: June 16, 2016, 05:14:52 AM »
bahut bahut shukriyaaa Zarraa ji....!!!

Quote from: zarraa on June 12, 2016, 10:26:06 AM
WWWWAAAAHHHHHH

dil chhoo lene waale ehsaasaat aur un ka bayaan

dheron daad Hriday ji
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«Reply #7 on: June 17, 2016, 06:17:31 AM »
bahut bahut shukriyaa Nikki ji....!!!

Quote from: nikki on June 12, 2016, 06:12:08 PM
Very nice Hriday ji

Ajj bhi kissi ke hasne ki awaaz aa rahi hai.. yeh bhrum hota hai
Koi khidki se parda uthakar dekhega yon lagta hai
Jise dekhkar mera dil chain nahi payega raat bhar

Uss shaqs ki har baat mujhe yaad aati hai
Iss kamre ko kabhi chodkar nahi jaonga jo kehta tha 
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«Reply #8 on: June 17, 2016, 07:13:36 AM »
nice Applause Applause
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«Reply #9 on: June 18, 2016, 03:46:54 PM »
bahut bahut shukriyaaa Surindar ji....!!!

Quote from: surindarn on June 12, 2016, 08:18:34 PM
waah waah bahut khoob achhaa ehsaas hai.
 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #10 on: June 18, 2016, 03:53:54 PM »
bahut bahut shukriyaaa Sps ji....!!!

Quote from: Sps on June 17, 2016, 07:13:36 AM
nice Applause Applause
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