Koi To Ho _______ {Angel}:Shayri-E-Dard

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Koyle Se Rang Diya Kisine Aasman,
Ye Hawayein Kaali Kaali Si Hai,
Sannatein Khauf Gholte Hai Fiza Mein,
Sulagne Lagi Kaliyan Khushbu Ki Dehek Se,
Dam Ghutne Laga Is Sard Mitti Ka,
Koi To Ho Jo Aaye Aur
Apne Saaye Ki Hawa De Mujhe,

Sooni, Kaali, Gumnaam Sadkon Pe,
Bikhre Kuch AshQon Ke Moti,
Koi To Ho Jo Chun Ke Inhe,
Apni Palkon Ki Jhilmilahat Banaye,

Sadayein Patthar Si Hogayi Meri,
Patthar Se Takra Ke Laut Aati Hia,
Koi To Ho Jo Apne Hothon Se Chhuke,
In Bezubaan Sadaon Ko Awaz De Jaye,

Kitaab-E-Zindagi Ke Lafz Hai Uljhe,
Koi To Ho Jo Is Adhkhule Warqon Mein
Khoobsurat Si Koi Dastaan Likh Jaye...


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Re: Koi To Ho _______ {Angel}

«Reply #1 on: May 12, 2009, 05:18:49 PM »

Bahut Bahut Angel!!! Iss nazm mein Kahin Dard Bhi Aur Kahin maasum Si Hasratein,Dono Jhalakti Hai...

Hamesha Ki Tarah Bahut Ache Angel


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Re: Koi To Ho _______ {Angel}

«Reply #2 on: May 12, 2009, 05:19:55 PM »

Just loved it....so beautiful Angel....Its like I am always waiting for your new poem !!

Keep writing dear icon_thumleft


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Re: Koi To Ho _______ {Angel}

«Reply #3 on: May 12, 2009, 05:22:05 PM »

Quote from: khwaish on May 12, 2009, 05:18:49 PM

Bahut Bahut Angel!!! Iss nazm mein Kahin Dard Bhi Aur Kahin maasum Si Hasratein,Dono Jhalakti Hai...

Hamesha Ki Tarah Bahut Ache Angel

So nice that two most of the loved poets on teh forum comment on my posts and that too sooooooo lovely:)

Thanks so much khwaish ji.. Usual Smile


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Re: Koi To Ho _______ {Angel}

«Reply #4 on: May 12, 2009, 05:22:29 PM »

Quote from: Celmira on May 12, 2009, 05:19:55 PM

Just loved it....so beautiful Angel....Its like I am always waiting for your new poem !!

Keep writing dear icon_thumleft

Thank you so much Talat.
thanks for such kind words Usual Smile


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Re: Koi To Ho _______ {Angel}

«Reply #5 on: May 12, 2009, 05:25:27 PM »

Kya baat hai Angel di...


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angel4u

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Re: Koi To Ho _______ {Angel}

«Reply #6 on: May 12, 2009, 05:26:57 PM »

Shukriya Rahim Usual Smile


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Re: Koi To Ho _______ {Angel}

«Reply #7 on: May 12, 2009, 05:27:43 PM »

its Amazing angel
its very beautiful
i dont have words to say
Applause


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Re: Koi To Ho _______ {Angel}

«Reply #8 on: May 12, 2009, 05:32:17 PM »

Thank you so much PJ..
Thanks for reading and appreciating
Thankyou !


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Re: Koi To Ho _______ {Angel}

«Reply #9 on: May 12, 2009, 05:36:49 PM »

Quote from: {Angel} on May 12, 2009, 05:22:05 PM

So nice that two most of the loved poets on teh forum comment on my posts and that too sooooooo lovely:)

Thanks so much khwaish ji.. Usual Smile

It's Always An Pleasure To Read You Angel!!!

Shayad Aapko yaad Hoga,Maine Aap Se Aapke Poetries Ke Baare Mein Kya Kaha Tha!!

You Really rock!! And Thanks A Lot For Considering Me As One Of your Most loved Poet!! Same Here...


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Re: Koi To Ho _______ {Angel}

«Reply #10 on: May 12, 2009, 05:43:01 PM »

Angel,
Very nice... very good job.....


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Re: Koi To Ho _______ {Angel}

«Reply #11 on: May 12, 2009, 06:01:54 PM »

Quote from: khwaish on May 12, 2009, 05:36:49 PM

Hmm mujhe wo alfaaz to hamesha yaad rahenge ke aapne humse kya kaha tha hamari poem ke related...

Khair yahan itne achhe acheh poets hai ke main un sabke aage shayad kuchh bhi nahi..

Thanks a lot once again Usual Smile


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Re: Koi To Ho _______ {Angel}

«Reply #12 on: May 12, 2009, 06:16:47 PM »

Bahut khoob Angel di...sab ne treef itne kiye ki main kya kahu kuch samjh me nahi aa raha...shayad isliye kuch keh nahi pa rahi ki mujhe aap sab jaisa likhna nahi aata...bahut hi acha likha hai aap ne..


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Re: Koi To Ho _______ {Angel}

«Reply #13 on: May 12, 2009, 09:25:06 PM »

wah angelji,beautiful work,kitna acha likha aapne.


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Re: Koi To Ho _______ {Angel}

«Reply #14 on: May 13, 2009, 12:50:05 AM »

Very good,angelji !! Nathing to say.


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