Koi To Ho _______ {Angel} -Panna 2:Shayri-E-Dard

SARVESH RASTOGI

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«Reply #15 on: May 13, 2009, 01:48:24 AM »

Kya likha hai Angel
Bahooooooot hi achchha
very very nice
SARVESH RASTOGI


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Roja

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Re: Koi To Ho _______ {Angel}

«Reply #16 on: May 13, 2009, 02:27:40 AM »

Quote from: {Angel} on May 12, 2009, 05:13:55 PM

Koyle Se Rang Diya Kisine Aasman,
Ye Hawayein Kaali Kaali Si Hai,
Sannatein Khauf Gholte Hai Fiza Mein,
Sulagne Lagi Kaliyan Khushbu Ki Dehek Se,
Dam Ghutne Laga Is Sard Mitti Ka,
Koi To Ho Jo Aaye Aur
Apne Saaye Ki Hawa De Mujhe,

Sooni, Kaali, Gumnaam Sadkon Pe,
Bikhre Kuch AshQon Ke Moti,
Koi To Ho Jo Chun Ke Inhe,
Apni Palkon Ki Jhilmilahat Banaye,

Sadayein Patthar Si Hogayi Meri,
Patthar Se Takra Ke Laut Aati Hia,
Koi To Ho Jo Apne Hothon Se Chhuke,
In Bezubaan Sadaon Ko Awaz De Jaye,

Kitaab-E-Zindagi Ke Lafz Hai Uljhe,
Koi To Ho Jo Is Adhkhule Warqon Mein
Khoobsurat Si Koi Dastaan Likh Jaye...

Wah wah dear Hasina... bahut accha likha hai tumne... Jaise Khwaish bhaiya ne kaha, kahi kahi dard ka ehsaas hua.. God Bless u dear.Wonderful creation


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angel4u

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«Reply #17 on: May 13, 2009, 02:57:38 AM »

Quote from: punam on May 12, 2009, 06:16:47 PM

Bahut khoob Angel di...sab ne treef itne kiye ki main kya kahu kuch samjh me nahi aa raha...shayad isliye kuch keh nahi pa rahi ki mujhe aap sab jaisa likhna nahi aata...bahut hi acha likha hai aap ne..

Bahut bahut shukriya Poonam. Tumne yahan aake itna kuch kaha yehi mere liye bahut hai dear Usual Smile

thanks for reading


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angel4u

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Re: Koi To Ho _______ {Angel}

«Reply #18 on: May 13, 2009, 02:58:33 AM »

Quote from: madhuwesh on May 12, 2009, 09:25:06 PM

wah angelji,beautiful work,kitna acha likha aapne.

Thank you so much Madhu Ji


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angel4u

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«Reply #19 on: May 13, 2009, 02:58:51 AM »

Quote from: Sager4u on May 13, 2009, 12:50:05 AM

Very good,angelji !! Nathing to say.

Thanks sager


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angel4u

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Re: Koi To Ho _______ {Angel}

«Reply #20 on: May 13, 2009, 02:59:23 AM »

Quote from: SARVESH RASTOGI on May 13, 2009, 01:48:24 AM

Kya likha hai Angel
Bahooooooot hi achchha
very very nice
SARVESH RASTOGI

Thank you so much sarvesh ji. aap khud itna khoobsurat likhte ho, aapko achha laga yehi bahut hai.. Usual Smile


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angel4u

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«Reply #21 on: May 13, 2009, 03:00:04 AM »

Quote from: Roja on May 13, 2009, 02:27:40 AM

Wah wah dear Hasina... bahut accha likha hai tumne... Jaise Khwaish bhaiya ne kaha, kahi kahi dard ka ehsaas hua.. God Bless u dear.Wonderful creation

Thank you so much roja Usual Smile

shukriya padhne ke liye aur appreciate karne ke liye bhi tongue3


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Rajesh Harish

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Re: Koi To Ho _______ {Angel}

«Reply #22 on: May 13, 2009, 03:09:55 AM »

Bahut Khoob Angel Ji


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Roja

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«Reply #23 on: May 13, 2009, 03:14:36 AM »

Quote from: {Angel} on May 13, 2009, 03:00:04 AM

Thank you so much roja Usual Smile

shukriya padhne ke liye aur appreciate karne ke liye bhi tongue3

Sweetu acche acche shayari padna toh shauk hai meri... and tum b lajawab likhti ho... toh padungi kaise nahi?


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angel4u

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angel4u

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«Reply #25 on: May 13, 2009, 04:49:45 PM »

Quote from: @kaash on May 12, 2009, 05:37:45 PM

Waah kya khoob likha hai aapne jazbaaton ko jaise khyalon ke zarie likhte chale gaye behatareen Clapping Smiley

... ek koshish ummeed hai aapko pasand aaye sehra me tanha chala par main kaise kah dun tanha tha,vo angaar jo barsa raha tha..vo suraj udaas tha....veeraniyaan meherbaan hui is kadar ki dil khud ke saaye se ujadne laga..par kitna ashq veeraniyon ki aakhon ke paas tha..main kaise kah dun raat jo chaand dekhte so gaya main vo dard deke kho gaya..nahi nahi....shabnam ke har qatre me mera ehsaas tha..jo raat meri subah uski bujhata tishnagi ki pyaas tha..

Thank Kaash ji. sorry ye mere se miss hgoaya tha, really very well written.. Usual Smile


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Fatima..

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«Reply #26 on: May 14, 2009, 08:14:25 AM »

bahoot hiii khoobb Applause


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Talat

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Re: Koi To Ho _______ {Angel}

«Reply #27 on: May 14, 2009, 03:09:57 PM »

Quote from: @kaash on May 12, 2009, 05:37:45 PM

Waah kya khoob likha hai aapne jazbaaton ko jaise khyalon ke zarie likhte chale gaye behatareen Clapping Smiley

Bohot Khoob Kaash Ji Applause


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angel4u

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«Reply #28 on: May 14, 2009, 05:09:39 PM »

Quote from: Fatima.. on May 14, 2009, 08:14:25 AM

bahoot hiii khoobb Applause

Thanks Fatima...


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