Koshish~~~~ Saahil:Shayri-E-Dard

salil2002

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tum toh kehte ho kii kar loon main mohabbat
tum kya jaano mohabbat ka dard kya hota hai
bechein rehti hai rooh har pal uski yaad mein
zinda bhi is tarah, kii har pal mera qatl hota hai

nahin nahin mat le chalo mujhe ishq kii oon galiyon main
yeh raaste , yeh darakht mujhe yaad uski dilaate hai
tumhaari meethi baatein kucch sukoon toh deti hai
magar is viraane kii cheekh se kaan mere ghabraate hai

haan tere aane se kucch badla toh hoon main
log kehte hain kii main muskuraane laga hoon
pata nahin phir bhi mujhe, tujhse kitna door hoon
ya mein teri taraf aane laga hoon

abhi ishq ka naam doon is rishte ko, zaldbaazi hogi
mujhe apni yaadon kii woh kiitaab bhi jalani hogi
vaada toh nahin karta tujhse "saahil"
koshish karega, tere honthon pe uski jawani hogi


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Re: Koshish~~~~ Saahil

«Reply #1 on: June 04, 2009, 11:01:56 AM »

Bohut khoob Salil bhai

Bohut khoob Kaash ji..


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Re: Koshish~~~~ Saahil

«Reply #2 on: June 04, 2009, 12:04:21 PM »

saahil bhai, iss qalam me bhi shayad ek kahaani chihpee hai, right?

dard-e-muhabbat kya dard dega, muhabbat tho behud haseen hai~
meri aankoh me isska sukun hai, jahan tak hai aasmaan, jahan talak ye zameen hai~


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jannatjahan

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Re: Koshish~~~~ Saahil

«Reply #3 on: June 04, 2009, 04:24:16 PM »

Nice one salil...waise ye kiske liye hai.....

mohabbat karo soch ki deewar mat banao
aajmaya ho bhale mohabbat ne tumhe
par meri jaan tum mohabbat ko mat aajmao
jo deti hai saugaat mohabbat
use bhar lo apni daman me
biti huee baaton ke saath har dard bhul jao......


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jannatjahan

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Re: Koshish~~~~ Saahil

«Reply #4 on: June 04, 2009, 04:27:22 PM »

Gud response Kaash ji N Anjaan...


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_Vicky_

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Re: Koshish~~~~ Saahil

«Reply #5 on: June 04, 2009, 05:38:36 PM »

Salillllllllllllll Bhai... Aakhiri Jumla to waqai Dil Ko Chhoo gya Dost.. Behad Khubsoorat Rachna Hai.... Aur Sidraah Ne Bilkul sahi kaha.. Ki Yeh Bhi ek kahani si lagti hai..!!!

Really Very Nice Creation.... Bahut Khooooob Dost.. Applause

**~** Mann **~**


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dead heart

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Re: Koshish~~~~ Saahil

«Reply #6 on: June 04, 2009, 06:54:21 PM »

Kasam se dil choo ne wala likha hai...akhri jumla wakei behtrin tha jaise Mann jee kaha...Tere honthon pe meri jawani hogi...wah wah...

Nice replies Kaash jee aur Sidraah di...

Mana ke ishq main ek baar tune dokha khaya hai Rahim,
Magar uss shaks ko chorr na mere dil se beimaani hogi...


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madhuwesh

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Re: Koshish~~~~ Saahil

«Reply #7 on: June 05, 2009, 12:42:38 AM »

beautiful creation,sahil ji,bahut khoob likha aap sab ne,
Kaash ji,Jannat ji,Anjaan ji,Rahim ji. Clapping Smiley


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dead heart

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Re: Koshish~~~~ Saahil

«Reply #8 on: June 05, 2009, 09:52:20 PM »

Shukriya Madhuwesh jee


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angel4u

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Re: Koshish~~~~ Saahil

«Reply #9 on: June 06, 2009, 02:09:20 PM »

As usual bahtu hi khoobsurat likha hai Salil Usual Smile


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deepika_divya

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Re: Koshish~~~~ Saahil

«Reply #10 on: June 06, 2009, 03:21:06 PM »

Waah Waah Salil .... Bahoot Bahoot Khoob !.. Behad pyari Lines se sajaya hai tumne.. Usual Smile


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salil2002

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Re: Koshish~~~~ Saahil

«Reply #11 on: June 09, 2009, 07:16:58 AM »

Quote from: @kaash on June 04, 2009, 09:29:40 AM

waah bahot khoob Sahil behatareen likha hai aapne Applause

ek koshish

mohabbat ke dard bhi kaise hote hain
dard se hi mohabbat karne lagte hain
par ye ek paigaam-e-sukoon bhi saath rakhte hain
aashiq kare ruswa ye magar dard ka khuloos bante hain

bahut achche aapki koshish ..k toh kya kehne .bahut hi ummda likh ahai


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salil2002

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Re: Koshish~~~~ Saahil

«Reply #12 on: June 09, 2009, 07:18:58 AM »

Quote from: Sophi on June 06, 2009, 03:21:06 PM

Waah Waah Salil .... Bahoot Bahoot Khoob !.. Behad pyari Lines se sajaya hai tumne.. Usual Smile

Quote from: {Angel} on June 06, 2009, 02:09:20 PM

As usual bahtu hi khoobsurat likha hai Salil Usual Smile

Quote from: madhuwesh on June 05, 2009, 12:42:38 AM

beautiful creation,sahil ji,bahut khoob likha aap sab ne,
Kaash ji,Jannat ji,Anjaan ji,Rahim ji. Clapping Smiley

Quote from: honeyrose on June 04, 2009, 11:01:56 AM

Bohut khoob Salil bhai

Bohut khoob Kaash ji..

thanks a lot huzena,sophi,jayadi,madhuwesh


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salil2002

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Re: Koshish~~~~ Saahil

«Reply #13 on: June 09, 2009, 07:24:58 AM »

Quote from: anjaan dharkan on June 04, 2009, 12:04:21 PM

nahi gudiya ...whatever i had writeen in this dard section is not related to my life.i just get some topic from ma surrounding that can be ma frnd , a stranger , anyone..... many times people masgd me and commented on ma threads ...like is it ur own story or something like tht......... lekin aisa kuch nahin hai.........doston main qaafi mastmaula hoon bas shayari dard mein likhta hoon

aur gudiya tumne yeh jo do lines likhi hain bahut hi achchi hain


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salil2002

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Re: Koshish~~~~ Saahil

«Reply #14 on: June 09, 2009, 07:26:32 AM »

Quote from: jannatjahan on June 04, 2009, 04:24:16 PM

Quote from: Mann on June 04, 2009, 05:38:36 PM

**~** Mann **~**

thanks jannat dear and mann bhai
jannat aapne bhi bahut achcha likha hai


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