Koshish~~~~ Saahil

by salil2002 on June 04, 2009, 08:50:41 AM
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salil2002
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«Reply #15 on: June 09, 2009, 07:28:28 AM »
Applause Applause Kasam se dil choo ne wala likha hai...akhri jumla wakei behtrin tha jaise Mann jee kaha...Tere honthon pe meri jawani hogi...wah wah...

Nice replies Kaash jee aur Sidraah di...


Mana ke ishq main ek baar tune dokha khaya hai Rahim,
Magar uss shaks ko chorr na mere dil se beimaani hogi...
thanks rahim bro...beautiful two liners from u


ret mein tha ek chehra,lehron ne baha diya
haathon par jo ukeri thi takdeer, kismat ne mita diya
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syednaami
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«Reply #16 on: June 09, 2009, 01:14:24 PM »
Salil bro,
Bahut dilchasp aur dard se bhara hua kalaam paish kiya hai...
Wah yaar wah...
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salil2002
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«Reply #17 on: June 09, 2009, 02:47:23 PM »
Salil bro,
Bahut dilchasp aur dard se bhara hua kalaam paish kiya hai...
Wah yaar wah...
thanks syed bhai
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Talat
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«Reply #18 on: June 10, 2009, 09:24:31 PM »

tum toh kehte ho kii kar loon main mohabbat
tum kya jaano mohabbat ka dard kya hota hai
bechein rehti hai rooh har pal uski yaad mein
zinda bhi is tarah, kii har pal mera qatl hota hai

nahin nahin mat le chalo mujhe ishq kii oon galiyon main
yeh raaste , yeh darakht mujhe yaad uski dilaate hai
tumhaari meethi baatein kucch sukoon toh deti hai
magar is viraane kii cheekh se kaan mere ghabraate hai

haan tere aane se kucch badla toh hoon main
log kehte hain kii main muskuraane laga hoon
pata nahin phir bhi mujhe, tujhse kitna door hoon
ya mein teri taraf aane laga hoon

abhi ishq ka naam doon is rishte ko, zaldbaazi hogi
mujhe apni yaadon kii woh kiitaab bhi jalani hogi
vaada toh nahin karta tujhse "saahil"
koshish karega, tere honthon pe uski jawani hogi

Very beautiful work...Bohot hi Khoob Salil dear
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mistufer
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«Reply #19 on: June 10, 2009, 11:10:00 PM »

tum toh kehte ho kii kar loon main mohabbat
tum kya jaano mohabbat ka dard kya hota hai
bechein rehti hai rooh har pal uski yaad mein
zinda bhi is tarah, kii har pal mera qatl hota hai

nahin nahin mat le chalo mujhe ishq kii oon galiyon main
yeh raaste , yeh darakht mujhe yaad uski dilaate hai
tumhaari meethi baatein kucch sukoon toh deti hai
magar is viraane kii cheekh se kaan mere ghabraate hai

haan tere aane se kucch badla toh hoon main
log kehte hain kii main muskuraane laga hoon
pata nahin phir bhi mujhe, tujhse kitna door hoon
ya mein teri taraf aane laga hoon

abhi ishq ka naam doon is rishte ko, zaldbaazi hogi
mujhe apni yaadon kii woh kiitaab bhi jalani hogi
vaada toh nahin karta tujhse "saahil"
koshish karega, tere honthon pe uski jawani hogi

dard hi dard se ru ba ru kara diya hai
bahut dilke kareeb lagi aapki nazm
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salil2002
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«Reply #20 on: June 13, 2009, 06:35:34 AM »
Very beautiful work...Bohot hi Khoob Salil dear
thank u di.......aap hamesha meri creation padti ho mujhe bahut achcha lagta hai
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salil2002
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«Reply #21 on: June 13, 2009, 06:36:29 AM »
dard hi dard se ru ba ru kara diya hai
bahut dilke kareeb lagi aapki nazm
shukriya nira shahiba..........
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Pooja
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«Reply #22 on: July 07, 2009, 10:58:56 PM »
wow ek se bad kar likha hai sabhi ne good work!!!
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salil2002
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«Reply #23 on: July 08, 2009, 05:26:28 AM »
thank u pooja di aap bahut dino baad aaye ho
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