~*~*~Koshish~*~*~

by pankshivam on November 28, 2009, 11:28:34 PM
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Ki kitni koshishe maine tujhe pane ki...
Har aahat pe rahi ummid tere laut jane ki...
Kar diya tune mujhe dur itna...
Na chahat rahi jine ki aur na kismat mili maut aane ki....
~Pank~
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Rajesh Harish
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«Reply #1 on: November 29, 2009, 12:04:51 AM »
Yeh Bhi Khoob Rahi Shivam Ji
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madhuwesh
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«Reply #2 on: November 29, 2009, 12:43:00 AM »
Aapke dard saaf nazar aataa hai Pank ji aapke kavita mein.really touched.mindblowing creation. Thumbs UP Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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thinkhattk
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«Reply #3 on: November 29, 2009, 10:58:43 AM »
ITS TO HEART TEACHING....
PANKAJ JI....
BAHOT HI AACHH LIKHA HE OR DARD HI KITNA HE ISME....
VERY NICE.... Thumbs UP
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cara
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«Reply #4 on: November 29, 2009, 11:34:18 AM »

Ki kitni koshishe maine tujhe pane ki...
Har aahat pe rahi ummid tere laut jane ki...
Kar diya tune mujhe dur itna...
Na chahat rahi jine ki aur na kismat mili maut aane ki....
~Pank~
KYA BAAT HAI PANKSHIVAN JI...


KI KITNI KOSHISH MAINE TUJHE PAANE KI
UTNI HI TUNE MAAR KHILAYI  ZAMAANE KI

KAR DIYA TUNE MUJHE DUR ITNA
KI SAATH JANAM KE BAAD BHI TU NA MIL PAAYE UTNA.
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pankshivam
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«Reply #5 on: November 29, 2009, 12:40:56 PM »
Thanks Rajesh ji, Madhuji, Dewangiji
Caraji Aapne Bhi Achhi Koshish ki
Keep Writing   Thumbs UP
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Rishi Agarwal
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«Reply #6 on: November 29, 2009, 01:26:02 PM »
Wah Kya Bat hai Bhai Bahut Dard hai isme

And Good Response Cara Ji
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pankshivam
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«Reply #7 on: November 29, 2009, 01:38:20 PM »
Thanks Rishi Bhai
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